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Review of A Note To Pray  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on your win in the contest!
Poetry Newsletter 10-29-2014,
Sees the wonder in your piece.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Initial impression: What a wonderful thankful poem.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Serenity and peace are the emotional tags your imagery draws forth.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and delightful.
Flow is smooth as silk.
Pace is slow and sensory enchanting.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle are out of place.
Overall impression: Same as the beginning with a side of wow!

Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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552
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-29-14
showcases your Plymouth adventure.
I often use the newsletters for reviewing opportunities.

Form and structure are amazing.
Prosaic and yet poetic is your piece.
Sensory filled and such a thrill.
Flow is remarkable.
Pace is fast, yet nothing is lost along the way.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are needed for thee today.
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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553
Review of ALL HALLOW'S EVE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 10-29-14,
Found your occasion acrostic.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.

Form and structure are consistent with the acrostic format.
Rhyme scheme lends a melodic tone to the piece.
Emotionally the reader sees the loss in what Halloween has become.
Imagery that shines through the lines.
Plow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is rapid, and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu clean,
No suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of true frienship  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh what a beautiful story.
I saw your piece in the "Read A Newbie" section on the left hand side of your screen.
I'm glad it was there on this, the 19th of November, or else I would have missed this masterpiece.
Form and structure are a little tight.
Flow is slightly choppy due to a few snafu's along the way.
The emotional ties that bind in this are despair, hope, happiness, sadness, love, and contentment.
That's imagery that just flows through your lines and keeps the reader glued to the resulting tale.
Pace is slow as the reader lingers from stage to stage of the story.
Suggestions for improvement are minor, and yet will enhance the flow and the overall wonder of your story.
1, You have multiple paragraphs that you can separate to give the reader s bit of time to take in one part of the story at a time.
2. The editing tool allows for a spell checker and running that would be able to point out the spelling snafus that result in some stumbling along the way.
Overall impression: What a wonderful story and thank you or finding the WdC to share it on.
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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555
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sorry for your loss.
This feels like a eulogy.
There is pain, sadness, and hope for the future.
Form and structure are solid.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow as the reader takes in the full impact of this piece.
Grammatically pristine, no suggestions for improvement are required today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of My Chains  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gripping lines from start to end.
Despair and hope are prominent emotions here.
Imagery that keeps the reader ensconced in the lines.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and suspenseful.
The absence of grammatical snafu's leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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557
Review of In Rome in1965  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a whirl wind vacation you were privileged to take with Jeffrey.
Form and structure are distinctive.
Flow is smooth.
You have lots of information packed into this and the reader is captured by the scenery and the encounters you had along the way.
That's imagery that keeps the readers attention in the midst of this rather lengthy essay.
Pace is medium, and pleasantly grammatically snafu free.
Overall feeling this reader had is that of relief when the adventure was over and things began to settle down again.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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558
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter 11-5-14
spotted your Juncos.
I often use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.
Thanks for the history of the birds in the footnote.
Form and structure are well established.
Emotionally the reader is mesmerized.
Rhyming is found here,
Some of the lines are a tad longish.
Flow is even and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow as the reader becomes invested in the scene you unfold line by line.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Angel Songs  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 11-5-14,
Features your angelic songs,
Form and structure are awesome.
There is a poetic, sing song timber here.
Dominant emotional feelings are awe and wonder.
Flow is fluid.
Pace is rapid.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thanks for taking us along for the song.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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560
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now that's art!
From every part.
The artist dreaming,
The brushes dancing.
The masterpiece forming,
All complete by morning.
Form and structure are firm.
Flow is eye catching.
Pace is slow, the reader captivated by the dance.
Grammatically snafu free,
Nary a suggestion for improvement comes your way.

Welcome to WdC Power Reviewers
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Angels Cried  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry for your loss.
We lost Prince our cat a few years back.
The sadness beams through in this piece.
It's real and honest imagery.
Form and structure are well formed.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and melodious.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slow as the reader grieves for your loss.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
No suggestions for improvement are needed here.

Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers group
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing this perspective.
The military is a machine indeed.
Form and structure are firmly in place.
Rhyme scheme lends a melodious nature to the piece.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu free,
Nary a suggestion for improvement comes this day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Number Ten  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hilarious!
Imagery is king in this piece.
The reader cannot help but be drawn into the commotion.
The chase is on and the rooster chimes in.
One wonders if he is indeed in "chicken heaven".
Form and structure are grand.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
A melodious timber is achieved.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is fast. Hey there's a chase!
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDIv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
We're featured in Contests and Activities Newsletter 11-5-14.
I haven't been able to review for the group for awhile but I always think about and pray for this group.
One of the first reviews I received was from yall.
The format is rock solid.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is slow, as the reader absorbs the awesomeness that is the SP.
Grammatically snafu free,
Now that's amazing!
Write on and share more in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem.
Your form and structure are unique.
Imagery draws the reader in.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi. You were in the Lightning list.
Reviewing this because Acrostics are my passion.

Briana Dawn sounds like a remarkable person.
The emotional tags are love and pride.
The color is beautiful and suitable for the form.
Form and structure conform to the Acrostic criteria.
Prosaic nature carries a melodious timber.
Flow is smooth and pleasant.
Pace is slow while the reader learns so much about Brianna.
Grammatically pristine, you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Bay  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!!


Hope, despair, sadness.
These are the emotional tags found here.
Imagery so clear and enthralling.
Form is foundation.
Structure is adequate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is rapid, but emotionally drawing.
Grammatically snafu,
Whoo hoo!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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568
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm captivated by the imagery.
Your words sink into the heart and mind of the reader.
Form is adequate.
Structure is sound.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
That's the imagery that draws the reader into your poem.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement are for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Starlit Scars  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Stunning imagery brings the sky to life.
We here on earth can see he display.
The words are heard in our heads,
as your poem unfolds.
Great ideal for a poem and you nailed it.
Write on!

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570
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A poetic look at the subject of love.
Your form fits like a glove.
Flow is smooth and easy.
Pace is not so queasy.
Rhyme scheme is prosaic,
As you create love into a mosaic.
Grammatically snafu free,
You get points three!
Suggestions for improvement?
Nary a thing could you change.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Hate Me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Powerful emotion flows through this.
This is the use of imagery that keeps the readers attention.
The major emotion this reader feels is frustration, rather than anger.
Form and structure are firmly established.
Flow is smooth. The sentence structure and thoughts are complete and informative.
Pace is rapid, as the reader is caught up in the event unfolding, and then slow when he/she sees the conclusion.
Hence the frustration that he cannot find the "hatred" he desperately seeks in his mothers eyes.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to share more, write more, and above all enjoy your time in the WdC.
Ciopenator out! BA, M Div
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Web Witch discovered your heavenly visiting hours,
and features it in Spiritual Newsletter 10-22-14.
I often utilize the newsletters for reviewing material.

Fascinating and entrancing throughout the piece.
Your imagery captures the readers attention and does not let go.
Form and structure are efficient.
Flow is as soft as a leaf blowing in the wind.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
I was once struck by a car while walking to work one night, so the imagery becomes a bit more personal for me here. Grammatically snafu free,
You are thanked for creating a tale that pulls at the heart strings.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of The Fiddler  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Web Witch discovered your fiddler,
and features it in Spiritual Newsletter 10-22-14.
I often utilize the newsletters for reviewing material.

You bring Raleigh to life with your imagery.
The words and emotions in the piece are varied and keeps the reader wanting more.
The form and structure are adequate to carry the story.
Flow is is simple and almost rhythmical in some areas.
Pace is slow as the reader absorbs the tale you allow us to see.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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Review of My Mother's Poems  
for entry "The Rose" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an honor to read your moms poetry.
I do charity walks, including Alzheimer's.
In fact I am walking this Saturday in Fort Worth, Tx.
The Rose is alive in this piece.
The reader sees the birth of the tree, petals, and is pulled into the scene.
Form and structure are pure.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and imagery filled.
Grammatically snafu free,
thank you for sharing your moms words.
Copenator out! BA, M div
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Review of The 11:11 Wish  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A fellow retailer here.
The cash register has been my home for 10 years.
The night shift has been my shift for all that time.
All this because your imagery evoked a connection in my heart, mind, and soul.
Form and structure are cool.
Flow is simple.
Pace is slow, as there is much to digest.
Grammatically snafu free, yippee!
No suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
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