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Review of Ode to the Sea  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love is the theme.
I t's plain to see.
This relationship between you and the sea.
Such poetic charm is found here.
Form is standard and strong.
Flow s even.
Pace is slow as the reader learns of the love between thee and the sea.
Grammatically clear of snafu's, I just want to say thank you.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Sandy Shore  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
I said once before and even now.
The scenery you display with your pen,
Is enhanced by the creature you capture upon the canvas.
Form and structure are appropriate for this piece.
Flow is so fluid,
Brushed on the canvas of paper before you.
Pace is rapid, as the scene unfolds in it's complete majesty.
Your words leading the reader to the edge, so he/she can behold that which you saw at the waters edge.
Grammatically snafu clear, your piece warrants no suggestions for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Letter form suits this piece.
Your piece is formed well.
Involving the senses of this reader from the beginning.
The rhythmical timber of this piece reflects peace to the reader.
Imagery that captures the readers attention from line one to the end.
Flow is smooth and mystifying.
Pace is slow and senses occupying.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed this day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Dear Autumn Rain  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A mixture of imagery in such a small poem.
The autumn rain brings with it memories for this author.
Remembrance of a past love, and loss of same.
Imagery is the highlight of your piece.
Form and structure are firmly in place.
Flow is lilting and soothing.
Pace is slow as the reader savors the scene you paint here.
Grammatically speaking, our piece scores a top 5.
Suggestions for improvement?
Don't change a thing my friend.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Beach Scene  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
Intoxicating scene you do portray.
Serenity felt the most in this place.
Your imagery's got the pow!
Form is firmly in place.
Flow is melodious and smooth.
Pace is slow as the reader indulges his/her senses.
Grammatically pristine, no suggestions for improvement are present in this review.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Lady of the Mist  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Form and structu5re are intriguing.
The shape poem is interesting.
Prosaic in nature and scope.
Feelings of love emanate from this piece.
Flow is richly smooth.
Pace is slow and senses shattering.
Grammatically speaking, nary a snafu is present.
So making changes here are unnecessary.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Invitation  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Intriguing piece.
It instills in me peace.
That's imagery to a T.
Form and structure are adequate.
Rhythmical prose is delightful.
Flow is smooth as silk.
Pace is rapid, yet senses loaded.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions of improvement are needed this day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mocking birds singing in the dead o night.
What a concept and oh so right.
Form and structure are strong.
Rhyme scheme sings right along.
Flow is as easy as pie.
Pace is even and pleasing to the eye.
Grammatically snafu free,
No suggestions for improvement are extended to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So it looks like you are using the point of view of the earth, talking to it's inhabitants.
Your poem has emotion dripping from it.
The earth is hurting and the reader can feel it.
That's imagery that the reader wants to know more about.
Form and structure are efficient.
Prosaic nature is a good way to go with this.
Flow is even and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is slow and steady as the scene is set.
Suggestions for improvement are nil.
Write on in the WdC!
a fellow B.C.O.F.r
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Types of Flowers  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing the names of these flowers.
I learned and was able to share some new names with my wife.
The scientific names were quite a challenge but finally made it through the puzzle.
Keep up the searches, writing, and sharing on the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Blood and Bones  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 3-13-14 features your poetry in life.

Emotionally the reader is pulled into your "life".
Structurally sound your piece flows with a smoothness that is stellar.
Rhyme scheme is most consistent and profound.
Flow is like a ballad, singable and emotion charged.
Pace is rapid, and the content is snafu free.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Stunning view of the thief on the cross.
My wife wrote from the perspective of the cross that Jesus was crucified on.
Emotionally charged and well written.
Form is substantial.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is moderate and senses activating as the crescendo arrives.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow what a love affair with your beach.
You see from loving eyes the wonder of this place.
The reader is drawn in and feels what you describe.
Imagery that writers long for in their works.
Form is foundational.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow, and grammatically clean.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing your words. There is a lot of emotion that helps the reader connect with what yoy are writing about.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is steady.
Pace is slow as the reader takes in the scene you unfold.
Grammatically speaking, all is well.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of A Realistic Fear  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Stunning flow and imagery.
The fire comes to life and threatens to consume all.
Form is efficient.
There is a timber within the lines that create a pace that escilates with the unfolding scene.
The decision made is poignant and a hard one to make.
Grammatically clean you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual newsletter 12-26 features your tale.
There is humor and some serious parts laced throughut.
Form and struyucture are elemental and enhances the flow.
The flow is smooth and steadily paced.
The absence of any discernable grammatical matters leaves no room for suggestions for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Reality  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual newsletter 12-18-13 opens with your piece.
Form and structure are standard.
Rhyme scheme is consistently rhythmical.
Flow is smooth as ice.
Pace is simply nice.
Grammatically clean, no suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your rousing rendition closes out the 12-18-2014 poetry newsletter. Those dragons are the pits. Form is adequate.
Rhyme scheme is considerable.
Flow is quite a roll.
Pace is a rocket race.
Imagery sets the reader in the midst of the hot time in the town.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tim you are a poet.
You should be a poet lauereate.
Your poem brings emotion to bear.
Your form is simple and strong.
Your rhyme scheme lends a rhythmic nature.
The flow is even and enhaced by a cool picture of the fowl.
Pace is unhurried and grammatically clear.
Write on!
Copernator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Teaching Angels  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A stirring poem filled with emotional tags.
Form and structure are cool.
Rhyme scheme is intricate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is easy going and senses gripping.
Grammatically clean.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
Riveting from stem to stern =
Imagery
This is worthy of publication = grammatically clean.
Strong lines and stanzas founding = form and structure.
Words poetically create a melodic timber = rhyme scheme.
Flowing like a trip to the moon.
Paced at a methodic escalation.
Wow!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv


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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo!
A heart warming poem has been read.
Your poem from the soldiers post clear and imagery filled.
Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is institutional.
Flow is smooth and imagery filled.
Pace is slow as the stanzas unfold.
Grammatically clean, upon the heart you do lean.
Write on!
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Review of A lonely poet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your poetic scenery.
The beggar had an impact on you.
Form and structure are simple and firm.
Rhyme scheme is strong.
Flow is as smooth as the melted butter.
Pace is serenely rapid.
Grammatically clean as a whistle. Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Jester  
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is my goal every day to make one person smile. Often at the end of the day I can say "mission accomplished!"
The imagery drew me into your piece.
Emotional tags abound.
Form and structure are meticulous.
Rhyme scheme is melodious.
Flow is so smooth and suspenseful.
Pace is rhythmic and slow. Almost like a song carrying the reader away.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice Christmas message featured in poetry newsletter 12-4.
Jesus is the reason for the season.
Form and structure are foundational.
Flow is emotionally charged and smooth.
Pace is slow as the reader sees the inhumanity man csan inflict on His fellow man.
Grammatically clear write on!
Copenator out!
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