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Review of Thomas' Pain  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 11-22-2012 where all featured are from moderators.

A very rewarding look at the turkey's perspective on things.
Genetic engineering indeed. This is a hoot from beginning to end and glad to have found it today. Your character is well developed for such a time as this and alas he too is but a pawn in the cog to get them to processing faster.
Form and structure are valid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is easy going.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of I WISH, I WISH  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Meg, Thanksgiving Day is indeed celebrated in this poem.
I'd venture to say you could well begin the tradition in your own home down under.
Mayhaps it would catch on and a whole new reason to be thankful would be born.
Your imagery is inspiring and beauteous indeed.

Form and structure are well developed.
Rhyme scheme is a thing of beauty.
Flow is melodic and soothing to the senses.
Pace is languid as the scene you do paint unfolds.
Grammatically snafu free! That's a big 53!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Hammurabi's Code  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for this list of writing tips.
From some great writers lips to our hearts.
Giving us direction when writing a tale.
So in the end the world our accomplishments may regale.

Form and structure is fitting a list of writing tips.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by grammatical snafu lines.
Pace is unhurried as the reader feels encouraged to dwell upon the tips.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this "how to" of the art of writing.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Love Becomes Real  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love is the theme.
An emotion reigning supreme.
The reader is drawn in.
Here the heart does win.

Form and structure are fine.
Rhyme scheme is divine.
Flow does not get in a bind.
Pace is rapid in this readers mind.

Grammatically snafu free,
Why that is the norm for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
One can see your audience sitting around and listening.
The future of this world is in their hands, lets inspire them to reach high.
Imagery that put the reader in the poem.

Form and structure are pivotal.
Rhyme scheme is inspirational.
Flow is melodiously smooth.
Pace is middle-of-the-road.
Grammatically clean your piece needs nary a suggestion for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A poetic barb at the re-elected president.
The state of the union is bleak.
Haste be the day when four-years pass.
For this poem is alive with reality.

Form and structure are standard fare.
Prose is suited to the form.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
Pace is steady on as the imagery lights the path.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed this day.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Love of the Gods  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cryptic poem about love.
Imagery is sensible.
Form and structure is consistent.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Creating s melody of love along the way.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is steadily onward.
Grammatically snafu free.
No suggestions for improvement for ye.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found in Authors Newsletter 11-07-2012.
The editor chose yours and many others.

Pebbles In My Shoes is a pleasant tale.
The feelings of peace and contentment prevail in the end.
Imagery is bright within the confines of these words.
Form and structure are cool.
Flow is a wowser.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatical snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter features your piece 11-07-2012.
I use them as fodder for reviewing. This is the finishing series of the many genre found in the WdC.

*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Your piece is short yet packed with imagery.
It might fit well in the Young Adult category.
Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is efficient.
Flow is evenly paced.
Pace is slightly rapid.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Sass Epidemic  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Found your piece in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-07-2012.
The remaining genre were discussed, and yours fit one of the genres.

Your tale is an amusing one.
You give the characters a nice little malady to sort through.
It's a good dialogue that keeps the readers attention.
The imagery invests the reader as the emotional roller coaster is ridden from character to character.
Humor, frustration, and a myriad of other emotional tags are encountered.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically snafu free, thank you for sharing an entertaining episode.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A riveting story found in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-7-12.
This is an example of a war story and this reader recommends you change it to the war category. More readers may be led to this by doing so.
The flow is steady.
The pace is slow.
The reader is pulling for the main character all the way through.
Your story has many grammatical snafus along the way but the meaning of your story is not lost in the midst of them.
Thank you for sharing your story in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Found your piece in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-07-2012
I use the newsletters to garner reviewing fodder.
Your piece is pleasant to read.
The form and structure are efficient.
The theme is universal and any reader can identify with the subject.
The flow is choppy to a degree, as small waves of grammatical snafu's jostle the readers attention.
The pace is slow but in the end you sum things up in a well organized package.
Suggestions for improvement include the following. Why? Merely to even the flow which also improves the pace of your piece.
Line 3 . you go on plenty dates. Inserting "of" between plenty and dates is recommended.
Line 12 . . . "you realize that's it time to change." recommendation: that it's time. This smooths out the flow of this piece and keeps the reader focused to your conclusion.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Epistles to Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your series of Epistles.
Found them in the Poetry Newsletter 11-07-2012.
I often use the newsletters as reviewing fodder.
While this was rather long it was worth the time to read.
The form suits the theme of the Newsletter to a tee.
The flow is easy going and quite grammatically snafu free.
The pace is slow as the piece dictates, going from epistle one epistle to the next.
Emotional ties that bind are varied and keeps the readers attention throughout.
This reader was impressed by the humor mixed with the formal steps of a "risha".
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Epistle is found in Poetry Newsletter 11-07-2012.
I use them often for reviewing material.
The theme is Epistles and yours fits the bill.
Your letter to your husband the pages it does fill.

Form is sufficient and indicative of the type of poetry.
The title sets the scene for the reader.
Emotional ties are found within, keeping the reader invested in many ways.
Imagery is littered throughout, that makes your piece sparkle.
Flow is natural and melodic.
Pace is slow and detail enriched.
The absence of grammatical snafus is an asset of your gift to our reviewing eyes.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter features your Epistle,
in their 11-07-2012 edition.
I use them often to find reviewing material.
So thankful to have found your piece.
Fits the theme of the Newsletter (epistles) like a glove.
Your poem expresses to his girl back home his eternal love.
Imagery that invests the reader emotionally in your tale.

I like the progression of the stanzas,
from arrival to final good bye.
The reader is impressed that the form is so well depicted.
Flow is smooth and naturally endearing.
Pace is unhurried and greatly informative.
Grammatically snafu free your piece is devoid of any suggestions for improvement from this writers pen.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Eris  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 11-07-2012,
Where I often find material they select to highlight.

A thought provoking piece from beginning to end.
Into the piece your imagery the reader does send.
This reader is afraid of heights,
but thankfully the planet is tethered.

Form and structure are assets to this piece.
Flow is spasm-like as each layer is portrayed.
Pace is slightly disjointed but this does not hamper the reader at all.
Because your piece is grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed, don't you see.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Last Words  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Often there are some stories that illicit a single word in reply.
Wow!
From stem to stern your tale streaks.
Taking the reader from valley to peak.
Your story has that WOW factor.
It's the imagery that lends to the effect.

Form and structure are tailored to the scene.
Flow is effortless and emotionally binding.
Pace ekes along at the speed dictated by the given scene.
Grammatically snafu clear, no suggestions for improvement are needed here.

Thanks for sharing in the WdC and Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of See this Woman  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing picture of Mary drawn with care.
The fanciful, the down to earth, the fearful, the hopeful.
Images that come to mind as the reader peruses this art work.
That in itself is worth a 5. So everything else is gravy, as they would say.

Form and structure is symmetrical,
created by the center key or syllabic expertise.
Flow is as smooth as glass, with the requisite cautionary signs in place.
Pace is resolute, the end is coming with a twist to boot.
In the absence of go visible grammatical snafu's you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Permanence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A permanent marker.
A child applying imagination.
A creation of art,
One-print-at-a-time.

What I liked: The attention to the details within this piece.
That sort of imagery which keeps the reader interested and focused on what comes next. One wonders out loud if the "artist" still has vestiges of the art within the swirls of their hand. That's what good imagery does.

Mechanics of the piece:
Form and structure are adequate and functional.
Flow is smooth and amusing along the way.
Pace is medium, for the reader interacts with the "artist" along the way.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement come to thee.
Thanking you for an entertaining look at Permanence.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The stalker  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Yeah! One less spider in the world!
Those darn arachnids are horrid.
A unique story indeed you do weave,
In suspense till the end the reader you sure leave.

A view from the eight-legged creatures perspective,
Makes one see what makes them so perceptive.
All that toe tapping and frivolity,
Brings out the worst in the hairy beast.

Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and unassuming.
Pace is a short race to the punch line.
In the end everything turns out just fine.

The absence of discernible grammatical snafu's,
means no suggestions for improvement shall come to you.
What about imagery? You might ask. Well the first 8 lines were inspired by your masterful imagery.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 10-24-12.
A closing piece that caps the newsletter suggested reading.
The writing prompt you had developed into a very readable and somewhat depressing read.
The emotional ties that bind are there and you give the reader some good and bad things to identify with.
Form and structure are secure.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow.
No suggestions for improvement are needed at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Silence  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a wonderful piece of poetry this is.
Found you in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 10-24-2012.
The silence is golden in this case, as you reveal what is just outside your window.
The blinds come open and in an instant the reader is transported to the outside view.
Imagery that the reader can invest in. Such a beauteous scene painted by a word smith.
Form and structure is good.
Flow is smooth and grammatically snafu free.
Pace is rapid but not without the elements that make it a worthy piece to read.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary at this time.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Empathy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jon:
Found your piece in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 10-24-2012.
Thanks for the distinction between empathy and sympathy.
They are indeed two different things, which are often wrapped into the one package called sympathy.
Your form and structure are the founding elements.
Rhyming scheme is efficient.
Flow is smooth and sensory loaded.
Pace is fast and unhindered by visible grammatical snafus.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary.
Write on!
Copenator out!
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a fast paced story you do tell so poetically.
Found you in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 10-24-12.
The key emotional tie is sadness as you see the neighbors die one-by-one.
Form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic timber is fitting in this memorial of sorts.
Flow is unassuming.
Pace is fast as the reader gets into the story.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC and beyond.
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Found your piece in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 10-24-2012.
I use them to garner reviewing material and yours was among others this time around.
The reader is impressed by the imagery that display's the despair, loss, and regret as a love is lost.
Form and structure are assets to this piece.
Rhyme scheme is replete and instrumental.
Flow is smooth, enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafus.
Pace is slow as it should be so.
The reader is digesting all the imagery that places the reader so close to the story.
One suggestion for improvement is met in line 2. A comma after "wander".
Write on!
Copenator out!
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