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Review of Wild One  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter closes it's pages with this piece.
On 11-22-12 Stormy saw what you had to share.
There is a sense, within these lines, of peace.
Your word smith skill is really quite fair.

Form and structure are standard fare.
Rhyme scheme is rhythmical and quite the pace.
Flow is slow as with us the wind you do share.
Pace is unhampered by grammatical snafu's with such grace.
Suggestions for improvement?
Why mess with such arresting development.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Lifted high  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Incredible imagery found in the halls of Poetry Newsletter 11-22-12.
Where I often click through to see what nuggets are presented.
Form and structure are appropriate.
Rhyme scheme is a work of art.
Flow is smooth as a gentle stream.
Pace is magically grammatically snafu free.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Emoticon Fun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found in poetry newsletter 11-22-12.
A cool emoticon full piece of poetry.
Adds a whole new dimension to the tale.
Especially when one sees a ukulele rather than a guitar lol.
Form and structure are secure.
Flow is unhampered by grammatical snafu's.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and at time dependent on the emoticon one finds.
No suggestions for improvement are needed and thanks for sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 11-22-2012 is dedicated to the Moderators and yours is there for the viewing.

Winnie Kay what can one say?
Your heart in this you display.
There is happiness, sadness, despair.
Life just is not fair!

An economy wreaking havoc,
A veteran in a state of panic.
Doing the unthinkable,
For no other solution is visible.

Form and structure are impeccable.
Flow is smooth and grammatically splendid.
Pace is slow and emotionally charged.
Overall impression: In the midst of tragedy, faith carries a family through.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 11-22-2012 is dedicated to the Moderators and yours is there for the viewing.

That was like a week of calamity packed into a single day.
Thanks for an entertaining piece and if it's true you're a blessed man to be standing. If it's fiction then you're the best darn story teller in the universe.
Form and structure are firm foundations.
Imagery is prevalent and keeps the reader fully engaged.
Flow is as smooth as your day apparently was not.
Pace is rapid and humor filled throughout.
Well done and glad the Newsletter shared your piece.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 11-22-2012 is dedicated to the Moderators and yours is there for the viewing.

Well written historical view of the Thanksgiving celebration.
Form and structure are sound and helps the reader move forward.
Flow is smooth as the absence of grammatical snafu's eliminates bumps along the way. Pace is slow and detail filled making this a worthy piece for any history buff or casual reader looking for a good read.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Thomas' Pain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 11-22-2012 where all featured are from moderators.

A very rewarding look at the turkey's perspective on things.
Genetic engineering indeed. This is a hoot from beginning to end and glad to have found it today. Your character is well developed for such a time as this and alas he too is but a pawn in the cog to get them to processing faster.
Form and structure are valid.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is easy going.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Hammurabi's Code  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for this list of writing tips.
From some great writers lips to our hearts.
Giving us direction when writing a tale.
So in the end the world our accomplishments may regale.

Form and structure is fitting a list of writing tips.
Flow is smooth and enhanced by grammatical snafu lines.
Pace is unhurried as the reader feels encouraged to dwell upon the tips.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this "how to" of the art of writing.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your activity in the Activities plug page.
Some beauteous images.
The forum is so dainty and pleasant.
The curtain around the title is eye catching.
The flow is easy on the eyes.
The pace is steady as she goes.
The absence of grammatical snafus in your forum is icing on the cake.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Love Becomes Real  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love is the theme.
An emotion reigning supreme.
The reader is drawn in.
Here the heart does win.

Form and structure are fine.
Rhyme scheme is divine.
Flow does not get in a bind.
Pace is rapid in this readers mind.

Grammatically snafu free,
Why that is the norm for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
One can see your audience sitting around and listening.
The future of this world is in their hands, lets inspire them to reach high.
Imagery that put the reader in the poem.

Form and structure are pivotal.
Rhyme scheme is inspirational.
Flow is melodiously smooth.
Pace is middle-of-the-road.
Grammatically clean your piece needs nary a suggestion for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A poetic barb at the re-elected president.
The state of the union is bleak.
Haste be the day when four-years pass.
For this poem is alive with reality.

Form and structure are standard fare.
Prose is suited to the form.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
Pace is steady on as the imagery lights the path.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed this day.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Love of the Gods  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cryptic poem about love.
Imagery is sensible.
Form and structure is consistent.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Creating s melody of love along the way.
Flow is silky smooth.
Pace is steadily onward.
Grammatically snafu free.
No suggestions for improvement for ye.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found in Authors Newsletter 11-07-2012.
The editor chose yours and many others.

Pebbles In My Shoes is a pleasant tale.
The feelings of peace and contentment prevail in the end.
Imagery is bright within the confines of these words.
Form and structure are cool.
Flow is a wowser.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatical snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Noticing Newbies Newsletter features your piece 11-07-2012.
I use them as fodder for reviewing. This is the finishing series of the many genre found in the WdC.

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Your piece is short yet packed with imagery.
It might fit well in the Young Adult category.
Form and structure are foundational.
Rhyme scheme is efficient.
Flow is evenly paced.
Pace is slightly rapid.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of The Sass Epidemic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Found your piece in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-07-2012.
The remaining genre were discussed, and yours fit one of the genres.

Your tale is an amusing one.
You give the characters a nice little malady to sort through.
It's a good dialogue that keeps the readers attention.
The imagery invests the reader as the emotional roller coaster is ridden from character to character.
Humor, frustration, and a myriad of other emotional tags are encountered.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is fast.
Grammatically snafu free, thank you for sharing an entertaining episode.


Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A riveting story found in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-7-12.
This is an example of a war story and this reader recommends you change it to the war category. More readers may be led to this by doing so.
The flow is steady.
The pace is slow.
The reader is pulling for the main character all the way through.
Your story has many grammatical snafus along the way but the meaning of your story is not lost in the midst of them.
Thank you for sharing your story in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Found your piece in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 11-07-2012
I use the newsletters to garner reviewing fodder.
Your piece is pleasant to read.
The form and structure are efficient.
The theme is universal and any reader can identify with the subject.
The flow is choppy to a degree, as small waves of grammatical snafu's jostle the readers attention.
The pace is slow but in the end you sum things up in a well organized package.
Suggestions for improvement include the following. Why? Merely to even the flow which also improves the pace of your piece.
Line 3 . you go on plenty dates. Inserting "of" between plenty and dates is recommended.
Line 12 . . . "you realize that's it time to change." recommendation: that it's time. This smooths out the flow of this piece and keeps the reader focused to your conclusion.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Epistles to Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for your series of Epistles.
Found them in the Poetry Newsletter 11-07-2012.
I often use the newsletters as reviewing fodder.
While this was rather long it was worth the time to read.
The form suits the theme of the Newsletter to a tee.
The flow is easy going and quite grammatically snafu free.
The pace is slow as the piece dictates, going from epistle one epistle to the next.
Emotional ties that bind are varied and keeps the readers attention throughout.
This reader was impressed by the humor mixed with the formal steps of a "risha".
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Epistle is found in Poetry Newsletter 11-07-2012.
I use them often for reviewing material.
The theme is Epistles and yours fits the bill.
Your letter to your husband the pages it does fill.

Form is sufficient and indicative of the type of poetry.
The title sets the scene for the reader.
Emotional ties are found within, keeping the reader invested in many ways.
Imagery is littered throughout, that makes your piece sparkle.
Flow is natural and melodic.
Pace is slow and detail enriched.
The absence of grammatical snafus is an asset of your gift to our reviewing eyes.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter features your Epistle,
in their 11-07-2012 edition.
I use them often to find reviewing material.
So thankful to have found your piece.
Fits the theme of the Newsletter (epistles) like a glove.
Your poem expresses to his girl back home his eternal love.
Imagery that invests the reader emotionally in your tale.

I like the progression of the stanzas,
from arrival to final good bye.
The reader is impressed that the form is so well depicted.
Flow is smooth and naturally endearing.
Pace is unhurried and greatly informative.
Grammatically snafu free your piece is devoid of any suggestions for improvement from this writers pen.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Eris  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 11-07-2012,
Where I often find material they select to highlight.

A thought provoking piece from beginning to end.
Into the piece your imagery the reader does send.
This reader is afraid of heights,
but thankfully the planet is tethered.

Form and structure are assets to this piece.
Flow is spasm-like as each layer is portrayed.
Pace is slightly disjointed but this does not hamper the reader at all.
Because your piece is grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed, don't you see.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Last Words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Often there are some stories that illicit a single word in reply.
Wow!
From stem to stern your tale streaks.
Taking the reader from valley to peak.
Your story has that WOW factor.
It's the imagery that lends to the effect.

Form and structure are tailored to the scene.
Flow is effortless and emotionally binding.
Pace ekes along at the speed dictated by the given scene.
Grammatically snafu clear, no suggestions for improvement are needed here.

Thanks for sharing in the WdC and Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of See this Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing picture of Mary drawn with care.
The fanciful, the down to earth, the fearful, the hopeful.
Images that come to mind as the reader peruses this art work.
That in itself is worth a 5. So everything else is gravy, as they would say.

Form and structure is symmetrical,
created by the center key or syllabic expertise.
Flow is as smooth as glass, with the requisite cautionary signs in place.
Pace is resolute, the end is coming with a twist to boot.
In the absence of go visible grammatical snafu's you are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Permanence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A permanent marker.
A child applying imagination.
A creation of art,
One-print-at-a-time.

What I liked: The attention to the details within this piece.
That sort of imagery which keeps the reader interested and focused on what comes next. One wonders out loud if the "artist" still has vestiges of the art within the swirls of their hand. That's what good imagery does.

Mechanics of the piece:
Form and structure are adequate and functional.
Flow is smooth and amusing along the way.
Pace is medium, for the reader interacts with the "artist" along the way.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement come to thee.
Thanking you for an entertaining look at Permanence.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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