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Review of My Place  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Poetry Newsletter 06-27-12,
Reveals to us this place so dearly loved.
The structure is a base from which to launch.
The form is amazingly even.
The flow is smooth as ice.
The pace is unhurried.
Emotional ties that bind include:
Awe, respect, sadness, glee, joy!
Grammatically snafu free, nothing more can be said to thee.
Save of course for the encouragement to write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Dear Me- 2012  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good letter to yourself for the contest and to set goals for the year.
It's good to look through and see the notations along the way indicating you are making progress or have indeed achieved the goals. Congrats on achieving some of them within the 1st half of 2012. Best of luck on the remaining goals.
Structure is good for a biographical piece.
Form is efficient and well organized.
Flow is easy going and smooth.
Pace is unhurried and detail filled.
The reader is invested emotionally by your back and forth banter with yourself.
The desire is there to see you succeed. That's imagery used effectively.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Word Bending Turtle featured in Poetry Newsletter 07-04-2012.

The poets eye is capturing every detail along the daily journey.
Things others may not notice,
the poet's eye does come into focus.
Imagery that evokes emotional responses to all we see.
Structurally sound,
Form does resound.
Flow is simply lilting.
Rhyme scheme uplifting.
Pace is your ace,
grammatically snafu free saves face.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA MDiv
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Review of Mother Road  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry newsletter brings forth,
a travelogue extraordinaire, 07-04-12.
Mother Road is massive indeed,
the reader is transported in your 4 wheeled steed.

Emotionally the reader is charged.
His perspective is truly enlarged.
Much to see, much to do, so little time.
Structurally your piece is the bomb.

Form is standard.
Rhyme scheme is even and melodic.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is a song in motion.
Grammatically speaking nary a snafu is noticed.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Found in the Noticing Newbies Newsletter 06-20-12 by Sara♥Jean .
Her series on genres includes the genre you exhibit her in the family.
Father's day can be a sad occasion to be sure, however it is still right to honor the fathers, and mothers on the appropriate days. Imagery that leads the reader to form an opinion.

Form is adequate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace in easy on the eyes, rolling along at a good clip.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed.
Copenator out!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your blog is a good concept and the questions you ask are thought provoking and often touchy subjects.
That's okay because sometimes people need a nudge to step out of their comfort zone.
I like the presentation.
The form is good.
The flow is natural and smooth.
There are no visible grammatical snafu's to hinder the pace.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Why do you write?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Found your poll in the Contest and Activities newsletter 06-20-12.
The choices you presented are common ones.
The "other" gives others a box to check, so that's a good thing too.
Overall to have 1149 total votes is an incredible number and worthy of being recognized.
Thanks for thinking enough about why we write to formulate your poll.
Maybe one added twist could be to add a "write-in" box where those who don't fit any of the categories can provide feedback as to why they write. Is that even possible in a poll?
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Ring Ring  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Speechless!
Incredible wisdom found in Spiritual Newsletter 06-20-12.
The reader is privy to the pain of loss,
and the way it is handled by such simple grace.
Was the boy an angel?
We may never know but we are grateful to be taken along for the ride.
Form and structure are well prepared.
Flow is super smooth and effortless.
Pace is like an interlude between lines.
A pause in just the right places to be dazzled by more imagery.
Grammatically snafu free, yippee!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Tale untold  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tale Revealed and Told!
Read about it in Spiritual Newsletter 6-20-12.
A piece after anyone's heart.
The reader is caught up in it all.

Form is challenging and challenge met.
Structure is the foundation upon which all is built.
Flow is almost like a dance,
Paced at a loping gait, the image of the loyal dog lives on.
Rhyming in just the right tempo,
The reader is transfixed by the show.
That's imagery that draws the reader into the magical scene.
Grammatically snafu free, nets more than a three.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Family Memories  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Family Memories up on a shelf,
displayed in Spiritual Newsletter 6-20-12.
Form is distinctive and well written.
Structure solid, a foundation from which to work.
Flow is smooth and melodious in nature.
Pace is easy going, enhanced by images illicit-ed from the memories.
Rhyme scheme reigns supreme.
Grammatically snafu free, leaves nothing more to be addressed.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Tattered Wings  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Featured in Poetry newsletter 06-20-12.
Tattered Wings are soon to mend.
Trust and faith in the birth of love,
Dashed by the reality of life.

Form, structure and flow are helpful to a good read.
There is a consistency here that the reader can see.
"Love may fail but hope never will give in."
Imagery that inspires the reader to want to see a resolution.

Rhyme scheme is musically inclined,
The pace is gentle and grammatically snafu free.
Suggestions for improvement are out of the park.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of A State of Mind  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
One day at a time,
One step at a time.
All familiar themes,
in this writers stream.

Poetry newsletter 06-13-2012,
features your State of Mind.
Imagery the reader does feel.
Main feeling is that of despair.
For the writer can find no hope.

Mechanics:
Form, structure, and flow are solid.
Pace is resolute, seeking to find some solace.
Prosaic nature of this fits the biographical timber of this piece.
Grammatically snafu free means there are no suggestions for improvement, don't you see.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of As You Dance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A dance so divine,
found in Spiritual Newsletter 6-13-12.
Thanking you for sharing the life of dancing,
as through the moves you lead your readers.
That is imagery that captures the heart, mind, and soul.

Choreographed to precision,
your structure and form are the foundation.
The flow is a dance between reader and writer.
The pace is breathlessly set and helped along,
by the absence of grammatical snafu's.

Jan you are more than encouraged to dance on and write too, for we are enchanted by the grace of both.
Copenator out!
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Review of My Senior Moments  
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Senior moments, ah what a frolic.
Reliving the foilboiles and snafu's.
Done in such a jolly way.
In the form of a monologue.

Flow is rich with imagery that tickles the fancy.
Pace is a romp down memory lane, with a dose of reality on the side.
Grammatically this reader could detect nary a snafu.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Remembrance  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Thank you for honoring the military.
There is a sense of gratitude here.
Imagey that the reader can identify with throghout your piece.
Flow is fair, slightly impaired by the absence of stanza's.
Pace is not too fast, filled with a serving of reasons to e thankful for the military.
Form and structure are essential elements in reading this piece.
Rhyming scheme is smooth and one get's the sense of awe from this.
Grammatically snafu free, no sugggestions for improvement for thee.
Copenator out!
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Review of God With Me  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A strong testament to the meaning of God With Me.
There is within this piece conviction and the reader can see.
Can see that it is a deep seated belief in your heart.
That there is a hope for those who feel out of sorts and alone.
This is imagery to the nth degree and that makes for an invested reader from beginning to end.

The structure, form, and flow are stellar cards in this deck.
The pace is easy going, and undisturbed by grammatical predicaments.
Thank you for your faithful witness to the Lord who is now and always will be with you.
One minor suggestion for improvement would be to double space between paragraphs to make it easier on the readers eyes.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Too late.  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcoming to he WdC!
Thank you for the appropriate rating.
Also for speaking about such a topic from the perspective of one who was bullied.
Your piece is strong in many ways.

The emotional imagery you pepper throughout is telling.
The reader has but two choices, to read on or turn away.
Reading on there is much to take in.
One line at a time the emotional coil is wound a bit tighter.

At a flow that is fair.
A pace with much to share.
The form is somewhat undefined,
but there is no reason for one to be fined.

The point is received and in the end the reader is left with the desired sense of despair at the loss of another who succumbed to bullying.

Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC!
Talent is found here, it's plain to see.
From the structure to the form,
it is all found to be the norm.

The emotion drips from each line,
your pen describing the scene so divine.
Imagery is what keeps the reader glued,
and it's imagery by which your resolve is imbued.

Flowing with a natural melodic tone,
at a pace that is faster than a rolling stone.
Grammatically snafu free, spelling wise,
your stars this part does rise.

Suggestion for improvement are nil and that means none.

You are encouraged to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo!
Thanks for sharing this story, be it fictional or auto-biographical.
Your tale is equipped with all the basics to glue the reader to the page.
Structure is typical and serves as a good starting point.
Using the form of third person, telling the tale to your reader, you do so in a good pace and easy conversational manner. The reader is willing to listen to your tale unfold, as you have dictated the pace.
The subject of the story is peppered with imagery that hooks the reader throughout.
Grammatically clear and a delightful ending results in no suggestions for improvement needed for your piece.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Why  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Found in Noticing Newbies 05-30-2012.
A sorrow filled tale from the dogs perspective unfolds.
Anger, sadness, and disbelief are emotions the reader encounters.
In a structure that draws the readers focus into the story.
The flow is crisp and smooth.
The pace is maddening as the readers emotions are boiling over by the time the end is reached.
Only slightly choppy created by a snafu in line #2 (becauuse) this writer suggests no other improvements be made to this piece.
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found in Noticing Newbies 05-30-2012.

Your definition of love is good.
About love there is a lot you understood.
Form is consistent and leads to a good flow.
Free verse motif fills the bill here.
Pace is comfortable and detail filled.
Emotionally the reader feels happiness, peace, and love.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are necessary.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Heart warming tale found in Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12.
A heart finds peace in the land of her ancestors at last.
A memory that will be with her, and now the reader through her sharing.
The emotional ties that bind are present in your stunning imagery throughout.
The reader is invested in the tale and left with the feeling there is more to come.
The flow is smooth as silk,
the pace is unhurried.
The prosaic timber is stellar,
unhampered by any grammatical snafu's of note.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Photograph  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12,
Finds the wow poem of the issue.
A photograph is used to evoke emotional responses.
The writer taps into the heart of the matter for the reader.
Form is great.
Prosaic nature is truly poetry in motion.
Flow is an eight.
Pace is steady,
Hampered only by momentary grammatical snafu's along.
Suggestions for improvement may be found below.
Line 3 "shades or}/u} grey" perhaps you meant "shades of grey?
Line 17 "you smile, could be, "your" smile.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Touch A Star  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your lesson.
Poetry Newsletter 06-06-12, included you in this session.
The reader feels the emotions of the teacher,
as youth misses the point and sally's forth.
Form is pristine,
Rhyming is a key theme.
Flow is melodic in nature,
Pace is unhurried and natural.
Unhampered by grammatical snafu's,
no suggestions for improvement are here for you.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Poetic Newsletter 06-06-12.
Finds feast in the midst of famine.
A tale of happiness and glee,
of sadness too, as away the couple must flee.

Emotionally impactful,
this piece is a hand full.
Form suited to readability.
Flow that appeals to our sensibility.

Prosaic scheme fits the theme.
Paced like a ballad, oh the melody.
Encouraging you to write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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