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Review of Dear Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Murc, your Dear Me is featured in Spiritual Newsletter 03-13-2013.
I often use the newsletter subscriptions to garner reviewing material.
Thanks for a good entry in the contest and inquiring minds wnat to know; win place or show?
The emotional tags along the way are inspiring.
The Rock is a good actor, wrestler, and man. Presently the WWE Champion too.
Your piece is well organized.
The flow is smooth and worthy of the time to read through it.
The pace is even and easy to follow along with.
The absence of grammatical snafu's is indicative of your attention to detail.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*

You're in noticing newbies newsletter 01-30-2013.
I use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.
What a marvelous chapter you have written.
It's got intrigue, anger, fear, and hints of love in between.
All imagery that keeps the readers attention on this journey through chapter 1.
Form and structure are manageable.
Flow is somewhat choppy but worth the effort to read.
Pace is slow, medium, fast, and then settles into a good rhythm after that.
Grammatical snafu's appear but do not detract from the overall story you tell.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A submitted item in the Poetry Newsletter 01-30-2013.
A very good tribute to the Redwall Series.
it makes the reader want to know more about the characters you mention.
There is a lot of imagery that engages the reader.
One main emotion is pride found in defending the homeland.
Form and structure are consistently strong.
Refrain is a great anchoring factor throughout the piece.
Flow is smooth and easygoing.
Pace is easy and slow.
Grammatically snafu free, this reader is glad to have located your piece in the newsletter on this day.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 01-30-2013 features your piece.
I use the newsletters to garner reviewing material.
You're among the editors choices.
And this form is excellently penned.

Your cat is truly loved 'tis plain to see.
Form and structure are replete with imagery.
Rhyme scheme is in step with the form,
Flow is smooth and feels quite the norm.
Pace is not too fast, nor is it too slow.
Grammatically snafu free, you're in the know.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Decline  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found you in Poetry Newsletter 01-30-2013.
You're #3 in the editors choices.
I use them to garner reviewing fodder.

Form and structure are standard.
Rhyme scheme is consistent with the form requirements.
Flow is smooth and natural.
Pace is medium and well timed.
Grammatically snafu free, you are on the way to above three!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're in poetry newsletter 01-30-2013.
I use them to garner reviewing material.
Your piece is #2 in the list of suggested items.
The editor thought enough of it to include it and I'm glad I found it.

The fun with ML tags created a whole new perspective.
Change was the theme and you did a good job displaying it too.
The challenge was finding the next set of lines but nothing was lost in the interpretation.
The message flowed well from center to center.

Structure was unique but pleasant.
Pace was slow considering the position of the lines.
Grammatically snafu free, wow that's a big three.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You're in the Inaugural issue of the Blogging Bliss Newsletter
http://www.writing.com/main/handler/item_id/190854...

31 ways I blew my marriage was highlighted and it's an eye opener for sure.
I use the newsletters to garner reviewing material and yours is the final selection.

Your introduction was engaging and informative. The reader knew what to expect.
The form and structure are well organized.
The flow is smooth and interesting.
The pace is slow as the reader digests some of the sage wisdom flowing from the content.
Choosing three examples from the blogger of interest was a good chunk and not overwhelming.
Grammatically clean as a whistle, no suggestions for improvement are needed for you today. Blog on and we will read on in the WdC!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for writing from experience.
It's in the Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I use the newsletter to acquire reviewing material.
"The hook" was the topic and you did well with your topic of discussion.
You got my attention and kept it through to the end.

Form and structure is solid.
Flow is easy going and smooth.
Pace is slow as the material is digested.
Grammatically smooth, your professional style shines through.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Dropped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are in the pages of Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I often use the newsletters to acquire reviewing material.
Yours is among the choices the editor; vivian; made.
Form and structure is solid.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
The emotional time that binds is traumatic.
Then it becomes calm as things slow down.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
As the reader lives through your heartfelt tale of little sister being dropped.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Writing that Hook  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your article is found in the Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I use the newsletters in the WdC for the purposes of reviewing material.
The theme of the newsletter is writing the hook so this is right on the button.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and easy to follow.
Pace is slow as the reader digests your suggestions.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*


Congrats on your placing in Stormy's Poetry Contest.
Your full poem is in the Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013.
Your tribute brings tears to the readers eyes.
The emotional tie that binds most is the sense of loss.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Flow is smooth and seamless.
Pace is slow as the reader feels the sense of loss palpably.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this piece today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Gravity Rising  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on placing in Stormy's Contest.
Your full poem is in the Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013.

First impression is wow look at that rhyming.
It's grand and causes such good timing.
Form and structure are strong.
Flow is awesome.
Pace is nice and quick.
Grammatically clean no suggestions for improvement are necessary for you today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Poetry Newsletter 01-15-2013,
includes your piece in the pages.
I use the newsletters to acquire reviewing material.

Form and structure as explained are spot on.
Rhyme scheme gives it a song like feel.
Emotionally the tags are everywhere,
the reader is sorely aware.
The sadness is palpable,
the readers tears noticeable.
Flow is nice and smooth.
Pace is medium as there is much to digest.
Grammatically clean as a whistle, nary a suggestion for improvement is needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice tribute to Whitney Houston.
Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013 includes your piece there.
I use them to acquire reviewing material.

Form and structure are well suited.
Rhyme scheme is superbly fitted.
Flow is smooth and graceful.
Pace and slow and something beautiful.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Eyes in the dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your piece is in Poetry Newsletter 01-15-2013.
A poem this reader can identify with.
I've been robbed three times in my life time.
Imagery within your poem gives the reader words to hang their hearts on.

Form and structure are consistent.
Prosaic in nature it fits the motif.
Flow is smooth and detail filled.
Pace is rapid as the reader follows from start to end.
Grammatically clean as a whistle you are encouraged to
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of I'm Still Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013
shares your story in it's pages.
Your tale is of a life lived with challenges.
it seems you have come through them with grace.
That's imagery that the reader feels, sees, and hears through your words.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is rather quick but still interesting as you lead the reader through your life.
Thanks for sharing BBW!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Little Things  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 01-15-2013,
tucks your item amid the features.
To be found by a reader who uses the pages for reviewing fodder.
What a charming tale you do tell.
The Pharmacist is a real, caring, and human person the reader can connect with.
The first customer of the day is alive with character, wit, and wisdom indeed.
Imagery throughout that keeps the reader glued to the lines of your story.
Form and structure are firm.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow and worthy of such a pace.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to share and review in the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 01-15-2013 shares the wow factor.
The very end is the wow factor in this piece.
The whole of the story is amazing and vivid.
Imagery within keeps the reader focused on the scene.

Form and structure are immaculate.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is slow and such a wonder to read.
Grammatically snafu clear, your piece is a treasure in the making.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013 shares your letter to your dad.
There is much to read and digest in this piece.
It is a personal treatise from you to your dad and we are privy to it through your sharing here in the WdC. It sounds to me like you have learned to be a better parent and human from your experience and that is the lesson garnered from this piece.
Form and structure are clear and distinct.
Flow is halting but only because of the incredible detail you do share.
Pace is slow as the reader seeks to digest and understand what you are saying to your dad.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Admirable Women  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013, finds your piece of interest.
The reader does as well.
There is much to be moved by in this piece.
The reader is engaged from line one to the very end.
Form and structure are formidable.
Flow and pace are even and unhurried.
The imagery throughout filling the reader with emotions galore.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing about the 5 lights of truth in your life.
The imagery is stirring and leads the reader through multiple lives and adventures.
In fact this reader was a mere waif when the tornado hit Dallas and I remember sitting on the steps of our stairway; in the projects in Oak Cliff; wondering why everyone was so quiet and why it was so dark. I didn't like the dark then. It turns out that the tornado was pretty close to us.
Form and structure are amazingly solid.
Flow is smooth and detail filled to-a-t.
Pace is slow but not boring at all. The reader is merely soaking in all the wisdom you display.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A stirring trek through the graveyard.
Reverently treading lightly over the grass.
Remembering the sacrifices and pain.
Continuing on quickly to preserve their memories in this piece.
That's imagery that inspires and holds the readers attention.

Form and structure are of the standard poetic stanza fare.
Flow is smooth and tender.
Pace is slow as the reader is mesmerized by the details.
Grammatically pristine, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! *BalloonR*


Welcome to the WdC.
Your piece is featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-9-2013.
I often peruse them for the articles and the reviewing opportunities the editors pick out.

Form and structure is rock solid.
Flow is easy and comfortable.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically clean no suggestions for improvement are necessary here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Thought Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
#3 of 3 in Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12.
Huh?
That's the emotional tie that binds.
The reader is confused.
The point is lost.
Where is this going?
Pray elucidate.

Form and structure are immaculate.
Prosaic lends a melodic tone to this piece.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow as the reader seeks to grasp the meaning.
Grammatically clear of even the slightest misstep,
Overall still your write is worth the read.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of The Book  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
#2 of 3 featured in poetry newsletter 12-12-12.

This is simply too cool.
With life you do not fool.
You read the writers minds,
And line them out line-by-line.

Form and structure are perfunctory.
Rhyme scheme is not faker y.
Genuine emotion is present here.
The readers snoring he/she can hear.

Flow is smooth as silk.
Pace is like a steady sip of warm milk.
Grammatically pristine,
no suggestions for improvement can we glean.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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