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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for writing from experience.
It's in the Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I use the newsletter to acquire reviewing material.
"The hook" was the topic and you did well with your topic of discussion.
You got my attention and kept it through to the end.

Form and structure is solid.
Flow is easy going and smooth.
Pace is slow as the material is digested.
Grammatically smooth, your professional style shines through.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Dropped  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are in the pages of Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I often use the newsletters to acquire reviewing material.
Yours is among the choices the editor; vivian; made.
Form and structure is solid.
Flow is smooth and easy going.
The emotional time that binds is traumatic.
Then it becomes calm as things slow down.
Pace is slow and rightly so.
As the reader lives through your heartfelt tale of little sister being dropped.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Writing that Hook  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your article is found in the Authors Newsletter 01-15-2013.
I use the newsletters in the WdC for the purposes of reviewing material.
The theme of the newsletter is writing the hook so this is right on the button.
Form and structure are adequate.
Flow is smooth and easy to follow.
Pace is slow as the reader digests your suggestions.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Congrats on your placing in Stormy's Poetry Contest.
Your full poem is in the Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013.
Your tribute brings tears to the readers eyes.
The emotional tie that binds most is the sense of loss.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Rhyme scheme is impeccable.
Flow is smooth and seamless.
Pace is slow as the reader feels the sense of loss palpably.
No suggestions for improvement are needed in this piece today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Review of Gravity Rising  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on placing in Stormy's Contest.
Your full poem is in the Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013.

First impression is wow look at that rhyming.
It's grand and causes such good timing.
Form and structure are strong.
Flow is awesome.
Pace is nice and quick.
Grammatically clean no suggestions for improvement are necessary for you today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Poetry Newsletter 01-15-2013,
includes your piece in the pages.
I use the newsletters to acquire reviewing material.

Form and structure as explained are spot on.
Rhyme scheme gives it a song like feel.
Emotionally the tags are everywhere,
the reader is sorely aware.
The sadness is palpable,
the readers tears noticeable.
Flow is nice and smooth.
Pace is medium as there is much to digest.
Grammatically clean as a whistle, nary a suggestion for improvement is needed here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of Copenator's Crew
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice tribute to Whitney Houston.
Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013 includes your piece there.
I use them to acquire reviewing material.

Form and structure are well suited.
Rhyme scheme is superbly fitted.
Flow is smooth and graceful.
Pace and slow and something beautiful.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Balm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 1-15-2013,
features your new form in their pages.
Stormy is the editor this week.

Form and structure is adequate.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Imagery transports the reader to the beach.
Pace is easy going and pleasant to the eyes.
Grammatically clean, no suggestions for improvement are found here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of I'm Still Me  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013
shares your story in it's pages.
Your tale is of a life lived with challenges.
it seems you have come through them with grace.
That's imagery that the reader feels, sees, and hears through your words.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is rather quick but still interesting as you lead the reader through your life.
Thanks for sharing BBW!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of The Little Things  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 01-15-2013,
tucks your item amid the features.
To be found by a reader who uses the pages for reviewing fodder.
What a charming tale you do tell.
The Pharmacist is a real, caring, and human person the reader can connect with.
The first customer of the day is alive with character, wit, and wisdom indeed.
Imagery throughout that keeps the reader glued to the lines of your story.
Form and structure are firm.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow and worthy of such a pace.
Grammatically snafu free, you are encouraged to share and review in the WdC!
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 01-15-2013 shares the wow factor.
The very end is the wow factor in this piece.
The whole of the story is amazing and vivid.
Imagery within keeps the reader focused on the scene.

Form and structure are immaculate.
Flow is smooth and easy on the eyes.
Pace is slow and such a wonder to read.
Grammatically snafu clear, your piece is a treasure in the making.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013 shares your letter to your dad.
There is much to read and digest in this piece.
It is a personal treatise from you to your dad and we are privy to it through your sharing here in the WdC. It sounds to me like you have learned to be a better parent and human from your experience and that is the lesson garnered from this piece.
Form and structure are clear and distinct.
Flow is halting but only because of the incredible detail you do share.
Pace is slow as the reader seeks to digest and understand what you are saying to your dad.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Admirable Women  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 1-15-2013, finds your piece of interest.
The reader does as well.
There is much to be moved by in this piece.
The reader is engaged from line one to the very end.
Form and structure are formidable.
Flow and pace are even and unhurried.
The imagery throughout filling the reader with emotions galore.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing about the 5 lights of truth in your life.
The imagery is stirring and leads the reader through multiple lives and adventures.
In fact this reader was a mere waif when the tornado hit Dallas and I remember sitting on the steps of our stairway; in the projects in Oak Cliff; wondering why everyone was so quiet and why it was so dark. I didn't like the dark then. It turns out that the tornado was pretty close to us.
Form and structure are amazingly solid.
Flow is smooth and detail filled to-a-t.
Pace is slow but not boring at all. The reader is merely soaking in all the wisdom you display.
Grammatically snafu free you are encouraged to
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A stirring trek through the graveyard.
Reverently treading lightly over the grass.
Remembering the sacrifices and pain.
Continuing on quickly to preserve their memories in this piece.
That's imagery that inspires and holds the readers attention.

Form and structure are of the standard poetic stanza fare.
Flow is smooth and tender.
Pace is slow as the reader is mesmerized by the details.
Grammatically pristine, no suggestions for improvement are needed today.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Welcome to the WdC.
Your piece is featured in Noticing Newbies Newsletter 1-9-2013.
I often peruse them for the articles and the reviewing opportunities the editors pick out.

Form and structure is rock solid.
Flow is easy and comfortable.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically clean no suggestions for improvement are necessary here.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Thought Journey  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
#3 of 3 in Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12.
Huh?
That's the emotional tie that binds.
The reader is confused.
The point is lost.
Where is this going?
Pray elucidate.

Form and structure are immaculate.
Prosaic lends a melodic tone to this piece.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow as the reader seeks to grasp the meaning.
Grammatically clear of even the slightest misstep,
Overall still your write is worth the read.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of The Book  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
#2 of 3 featured in poetry newsletter 12-12-12.

This is simply too cool.
With life you do not fool.
You read the writers minds,
And line them out line-by-line.

Form and structure are perfunctory.
Rhyme scheme is not faker y.
Genuine emotion is present here.
The readers snoring he/she can hear.

Flow is smooth as silk.
Pace is like a steady sip of warm milk.
Grammatically pristine,
no suggestions for improvement can we glean.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of Waves of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it!
Couldn't resist the wave of love.
Poetry Newsletters features this and 2 others from your hand in the 12-12-12 edition.
Congratulations on that many in one newsletter on a very significant day in history.

Form and structure are cool.
Prosaic nature is unwound like a spool.
Flow is undeterred.
Pace by grammatical snafu's is undisturbed.
Emotional tie that binds?
Why love of course is the key.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of My Journal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12
includes your entry among the choices.

Your loneliness is quenched.
From your words this is sensed.
That's imagery that lives,
And to the reader gives.

Form and structure are standard.
Flow is straight forward and candid.
Pace is slow and detail filled.
Grammatically clear, this reader is thrilled.
No suggestions for improvement are forthcoming today.
All that is left to say:
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter 12-12-12
features your "book" of poetry.
Among the whole I read but a few.
Will read more to be sure.
Overall the layout of your book is clear.
The entries are not overly long.
The flow of the few I read have been adequate.
The attention to the details at the time in your life are sufficient to keep the reader engaged.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Poetry Newsletter on 12-12-12 was on journaling.
Your entry was among the choices and glad to read it.
Form and structure are splendid.
Rhyme scheme is quite well attended.
Flow is smooth and melodic.
Pace is slow and didactic.
Imagery plays a part in keeping the readers attention.
Determination appears to be a distinction.
Grammatically speaking,
Nothing is leaking.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Leader of SGDG
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Review of Namaste  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

You are featured in Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-12
Among others that sophy saw something in.
I often use the newsletter for reviewing material.

Form and structure are noteworthy.
They form a foundation of progression.
Rhyme scheme is pristine,
and creates a song like effect.
Imagery shines throughout,
The reader is invested in the scene unfolding.
Flow is easy going.
Pace is slow and ideal showing.
Grammatically snafu free,
no suggestions for improvement are needed for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
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Review of Christmas Spirit  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*



Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-2012,
featured your poem among others in their pages.

What an enchanting concoction you do prepare.
Leaves from the Marigold and other natural fare.
I liked the necessity to look up Calendula,
It increases my vocabulary and enriches the flavor of your endeavor.

Imagery shines; nay sparkles; throughout this piece.
An overall sense this reader receives is that of peace.
Form and structure are basic.
Rhyme scheme is award winning!

Flow is smooth and grammatically clean.
Pace is slow as upon the imagery the reader does lean.
In the end the overall impression is enchantment.
Nary a suggestion for improvement is necessary at this moment.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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Review of An Advent Choice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spiritual Newsletter 12-12-12
features yours among others.
I use newsletters as fodder to garner reviewing opportunities.

This is a cool poem from the perspective of the lone shepherd.
The emotional ties that bind are present in these lines so well crafted.
The rhyme scheme is consistent and lends a melodic tone to the piece.
The form and structure are adequate. Conducive to a good starting point for reading.
The flow is smooth as silk.
The pace is slow as the reader follows the tale unfolding in these stanzas.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are presented to thee.
Write on!
Copenator out! BA, MDiv
Founder of Copenator's Crew
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