What an honor to read such a tribute.
I'm so blown away and awed to boot.
Within this piece is a mothers love,
Fit to a tee and enveloping like a glove.
Form, structure, and rhyme scheme all pristine.
Emotion boiling over with tears that create a sheen.
At a pace that makes one decide to go slowly,
Savoring the lines as with love they do glow.
Simply positive is this piece,
Every stanza, contains peace.
With grammatical snafu's nowhere,
Suggestions for improvement we do spare.
You were featured in the latest issue of Spiritual Newsletter and what a gem they preserved in this piece.
Mission accomplished your wish is achieved.
Within this piece is a piece of art in words.
Flow is super slick and complimented by the consistent form.
Pace slip slides along unfettered by grammatical snafu's.
Your strengths in this piece are imagery and conviction.
You know what you want, you lay it out, and you get it.
Good writing and good use of the list poem.
Write on in the WDC!
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Your list poem is full of life that was oh so hard.
There are so many who try to dispel these happenings.
Eye witness, one year depicted shard by shard.
Evidence etched into the hearts, and minds, time overlapping.
A flow that is emotion filled and strong.
A pace that is not interrupted by grammatical matters.
A form that is new to this reader but made relevant here.
Suggestions for improvement are unnecessary, for here is life.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Sorry for your loss and thank you for sharing your remembrances of your time with your beloved.
You are featured in the Simply Positive Newbies Review group and welcome to the WdC from one of their numbers.
You have an excellent form,
Consistent and warm.
There is regret but also fondness,
As you remember whom you now miss.
Minor repeated grammatical snafu's
Does little to hamper the pace and flow.
The overall feel of this is one of eulogy,
Remembering one who impacted your life daily.
Suggestion for improvement would be to change the "use" in the present tense to "used" in lines 2 and 19. Also for consistency you could move "Quarter to Eleven" to the end of line 20. You complete your thought there and another line is not necessary.
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Gripping and sadness is what this reader feels. Imagery that brings to life your story.
Putting this in words is a form of catharsis and the reader finds his/herself rooting for your healing.
The flow is good, there is a crispness about it that is soothing.
The pace is medium and suits the subject matter of this piece.
You maintained your "black hole" theme throughout which keeps the reader focused.
Well done job and no suggestions for improvement can be made at this time.
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You have a good story here Prescious. There are a few items that hamper to flow and pace, but the meaning of your story is brought to bear. The flow is good and the imagery is sufficient to engage the reader emotionally. You are encouraged to work on this, tweaking some of the grammatical matters, and make this a stronger piece that stands on it's own or is a launching pad for a part two.
Suggestions for improvement:
Line 3: "then" should be "than".
Line 4: "gape" did you mean "gait"? As is your step was wider than mine.
Further minor details will help this be a 5 star matter in anyones book.
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Main feeling: A sense of contentment. You and your "brother" have that bond.
Flow: Smooth and rustic at the same time. You speak of all characteristics with abandon.
Structure and form are complimentary to the story and enhances the pace with the absence of grammatical matters to discuss.
Message found within: Brothers are brothers for life.
Suggestions for improvement: No adjustments are necessary.
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You have a good beginning for a story here and I'd encourage you to continue on the track you are going. Within this piece there are all the elements necessary to carry a story and help serve as a base to expand upon.
Flow is good, the pace is adequate and only slightly faltered by the grammatical error located.
Suggestions for improvement would be to perhaps tweak the paragraph breaks to be a little more accessible. In other words some of your paragraphs could be spaced out more evenly and others tightened up for the readers sake.
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Enchanting storyline and presentation.
Every line brought the reader a new sensation.
The strength of this is the flow that is so gentle,
Yet stands strong in details the reader settles.
Giving voice to a snowflake is a marvelous imagery display.
The wonder in their banter back and forth, their fears to allay.
Form, structure, and pace are assets to the readability,
The absence of grammatical matters puts this in the upper eschelon!
Write on!
Copenator out!
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A philosophical piece is well written.
There is good flow, not too fast or slow.
The structure is sufficient for your intent,
And the lines are chosen and heaven sent.
Looking at this from a ways back
One can see that to you family is important.
The imagery is palpable and the reader is taken on a journey to be sure.
Wisdom is garnered over the years and you have arrived.
Life is found here and so well you do describe.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Stunning is the word the reader takes from this.
The emotion is raw, real, and causes one to deal.
Imagery that brings to light the sad, the hope, and the happiness.
Form, structure, and pace are conducive to a leisurely stroll through this.
With every turn, with every shift, no details the reader does miss.
Your attention to detail is again complimentary to the flow,
Writing and drawing people into your words, this you truly know.
Your craft is writing, your gift is sharing, your asset is your faith.
What suggestions can be made for improvement? None here either, all's well that ends well.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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A very sensual poem is found here.
The emotion is prevalent and so near.
Your inspiration you echoed well,
Securing the lines with each word nail.
The picturesque scenes you did relate,
In a flow that made one feel just a little late.
Not rushed mind you, but aware of time.
Your form, structure, and rhyme are sublime.
There is within this not one jot or title out of place,
A sign of your intention to make for an easy pace.
You deserve an award for this piece,
As the prevailing emotion is tranquil peace.
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This is a wondrous flowing piece of poetry.
Your pace is slow and suited to the piece.
The emotion that bleeds through is melancholy.
The form, structure, and rhyming scheme are stellar.
There is a sense of completion in this piece.
Suggestions for improvement are unnecessary.
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Copenator out!
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Awesome Psalm. Beginning with your expression of gratitude and ending with the source of that gratitude the Lord God who is all things to all people in all times.
Written in a form that suits a Psalm, leaving room for thought and meditation along the way, with the line breaks.
The flow is strong and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's. The imagery brings the reader right into the attitude of worship that the finest of David's Psalms are capable of doing.
Thank you for sharing your Psalm with the Lord and us through this medium known as the WdC!
Write on!
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Awesome story that you led us through. We too have met Mr. C through your sharing about the life he wrote about for his family.
The flow is good, there is good humor, vivid imagery and notes of sad times that brought the appropriate emotional response at each point.
The pace is unfettered by grammatical snafu's and lent a good reading experience throughout the entire narrative. You told Mr. C's story well and we are the richer from reading it.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary and thanks for sharing from your heart to ours. Write on in the WdC!
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Copenator out!
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The fun one could have with a map and passion for route studies.
This is a comprehensive, informative, and charming piece that even speaks of the births along away.
The matter-of-fact nature of this does not lend for formal reviewing save to say thanks a moolion for the cavalcade of locative cities and states is a travelogues paradise.
Your memory is very sharp to be able to remember all of those places.
Write on in the WdC!
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Good memories indeed Ruwth. The adventures of neighborhood kids on summer days. Oh how this brings back memories too.
You told your story in an unhurried, imagery filled manner, that left the reader with little distractions and all of the details peppered through this story.
Your form, style, and general feel for the story left a pleasant feeling in the readers mind after all was said and done.
There is not a hint of grammatical snafu's and no suggestions for improvement can be made at this stage in toe game. Write on in the WDC!
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Great interview. Good story. Good form structure and flow. Good imagery that puts the reader in the action, feeling the emotions, seeing the memories, and enjoying the overall feel of this story.
The pace of this piece is well suited and is not hampered by any noticeable grammatical matters to discuss.
Best part: "No, I'm not by myself." That is a character who is content and aware that his departed wife is still with him in spirit.
Suggestions for improvement: None necessary.
You are featured in the Simply Positive Newbies Review choices and this reader is impressed with your skill.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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A nice sing-song like piece of poetry.
Your form is intriguing and well placed.
Flow is good and the closing question. Whoo!
I liked everything about your piece, it has a good rhythm to it that brings the story along at a good pace.
Only one matter was spotted in your title that threw this reader.
"Riped My Heart in Two". So does that mean that your heart was ripened just right and then ripped in two? Ah the dual meaning if you did indeed use "riped" intentionally.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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Cool rendition of what love feels like.
The fine lines, three words each (save for the first two lines), combine to create a great image of love.
Your heart is in this piece as seen by your desire not to hurt someone else.
The flow is good, with the evidence of only 1 minor bump in the progress.
Line 6: (freind) should be friend.
Considering the compact nature of this piece, this writer is impressed with the complete nature of the write. Well done and thank you for sharing on the WdC.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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You are featured in the latest Simply Positve Newbie Review choices this week.
A poem it is yes.
Haiku to be precise.
Well expressed yeah!
Thanks for toiling in the task of writing anew.
We are the recipients of style and nothing askew.
Flowing like a river thawing out,
The pace is what it's all about.
Getting the feet wet, dipping the stylus in the ink.
With no evidence of grammatical matters to discuss.
No suggestions for improvement needed for your ink.
Leaving just one more thing to discuss.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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An artist takes a blank canvas and burns into it with the image that is in their minds. You did that here in the sense that you began from scratch and created the premise of your story in a creative way.
The flow was hampered a bit by the line separation, slowing the pace a tad, and giving the overall impression that albeit disjointed, the message is clear in the end.
The absence of other grammatical matters to discuss gives this a crisp air about it and thanks for sharing what it means to you to write.
Found your piece in the latest edition of the Poetry Newsletter.
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The real you is visible.
You've shown us within.
Your concern is palpable.
Good imagery you do pen.
The flow is consistent,
The pace is information filled.
The structure is well spent,
Every stanza, more of you, you build.
The absence of grammatical snafu's
Equals a pleasant read of one who is so sad.
With each line the reader is more concerned for you.
Suggestions for improvement are nil, for nothing here is bad.
Write on in the WDC!
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You are featured in the latest edition of the Noticing Newbies Newsletter.
Thank you for your suggestions. As a sponsor of two participants I can use some of this and even refer them to this article if they do find themselves in such a situation.
The flow is smooth, professional, and logical.
Suggestions are sensible and simplifies how to deal with matters.
The pace is easy going and the right amount of imagery keeps the reader interested.
The absence of any grammatical snafu's enhances the pace and makes for a more readable piece.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary at this time.
Write on in the WDC!
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You are featured in the latest edition of the Noticing Newbies Newsletter.
Sorry this happened to you. Guys can be jerks, but they're not all like that. There is true love to be found.
You told your story in a vivid emotion filled way - good imagery.
I was following along, not sure of the end, and the flow was as smooth as silk.
The form, structure, and prose is well suited to your piece, and enhancing the readability was the absence of any grammatical matters to discuss.
Overall Impression: String him up! Okay maybe not that harsh but you really showed the way one feels when put in such a position, and that's what readers can identify with.
Write on in the WdC!
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