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Review of October  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There is an intriguing cadence to this piece. The flawless execution of the rhyming scheme (ad/bc), consistent form and structure, leads to a rewarding piece that the reader can be involved in. Imagery is strong without and the reader is invested in the end to this awe inspiring season. You write well and the reader recognizes that soon and very soon.
The absence of grammatical matters to discuss leads you to the one small suggestion to achieve what this reviewer perceives an intention to BOLD text the title.

Suggestion for improvement: Your tag encapsulating the title October, is html. The WdC utilizes Ml and the proper tag to achieve the bold you desire is demonstrated here.
Place the title between these two Ml tools and you will have a Bold Title.

Write on in the WDC!
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In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Breathtaking review of the mountain range you provide and the reason for your user-name is clearly well thought of.
Your flow is fluid as a waterfall beginning it's descent down the mountainside.
Your pace is comfortable, not too slow, and enhanced by the absence of grammatical matters to discuss.
One sees the massive peaks, the gently sloping hills and the flora and fauna all around. That's good imagery.
You are encouraged to write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is the first newsletter I've read BBWolf. I like the way you address the various forms of Fanfiction and the points you make along the way are valid and lends credence to the type of writing that goes on in them.
Your form, structure, flow, and overall impression this newsletters leaves is that of someone who knows about the matter at hand, and is teaching another about it in a good way.
Write on in the WDC!
Found this in the latest edition of the Author's Newsletter.
Copenator out!
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Review of Winter Picture  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!
You surely are in the know.
A good form, structure and pace, indeed.
Makes this flow and easy to read.

Grammatical snafu's there are none,
And the great strength of the piece is line one.
You've captured the emotions solidly,
As if you are in a land called honalee.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A stellar rhyming scheme is wow!
A sing song feel to it is good rhythm.
The flow is complimented by the absence of grammatical matters.
Thought went into this piece, and the reader is the benefactor.
No suggestions for improvement need be made.

Thank you for sharing your awesome piece in the WdC.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Shining Star  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very soulful tribute to your mom.
The main emotion present is that of contentment.
Imagery affords much more emotion, but his feels the strongest.
Your flow is superior and complimented by the lack of grammatical matters.
You deliver your reader from the beginning to the end with such a detail filled leisurely pace.
Mesmerizing!

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE NEWBIE REVIEWE...  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here in this piece your heart lies.
The tears, sadness, they do rise.
Imagery strong and quiveringly so.
Form, structure, and flow, whoa!

Rhyming scheme assists in the pace,
Almost sing song in nature, images of a teary face.
The absence of grammatical matters,
Means this is at it's end, and thanks goes to you, for you do matter.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fabulous fairy tale,
Written on a grand scale.
Form, structure, and flow,
All good and nowhere a no.

Rhyming scheme is succulent
To the poem strength it lent.
No grammatical matters to discuss
Sends this review to the end, no muss.

Christine Cassello, this deserves an award,
For from stem to stern no one can be bored.

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Review of Foggy Morning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A tale that gives the reader a myriad of meaning in here.
Imagery that brings the fog to life and leads the reader forward at a decent pace.
The form and structure are suitable to the piece.
Best part: It is mid-March and the whistling witchy wind shakes
the barren white birch in the front of the porch.
This is a fine piece of imagery that is present throughout your masterpiece.
There are no grammatical matters to discuss. Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A free flowing tale of a Halloween Family. I liked the way you set this up and the pace of this story remained a steady even gait to the end.
There were no obvious grammatical matters to discuss.
The form, structure, and flow is just right.
Nothing is too out of place so no frightful suggestions for improvement are needed.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A loving tribute to your mom,
Done is such flawless poetic form.
There is sadness, and some memories.
A flow that is so smooth and unhurried.

A form, structure and pace that glows,
And all who read this most surely knows,
That there is a loss that hurts to the core.
The reader prays soon there will be no more.

One small suggestion for improvement would be found in line 1, to soon, should be "too soon."




Write on in the WdC and elsewhere, for you have a word to give.
Copenator out!
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Review of The Day Called D  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Audrey welcome to the WDC.
I liked the flow of your piece and you captured the stark nature of D-Day well.
Your choice of words evokes a sense of impending danger, confirmed in the final lines.
Your pace is almost sing-song like and brings a sense of ease to the reader.
A suggestion for improvement is to copy and paste this ML in order to center and bold your title.
The absence of any grammatical matters is a plus in the readability of your piece.


The Day Called D


By doing so you will center your title only.
If you wish to center the entire piece you can place this at the last word of the text and the entire piece will be centered.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am in awe of the wonder in this piece.
Imagery that brings the roars to life,
The battle is felt and the reader sees loss of life.
You are the observer seeking a way to release.

The flow is magnificent,
The knowledge of Africa significant.
Flow, pace, structure, and form all A plus.
No grammatical snafu's to create a fuss.

Write on in the WDC
Copenator out!
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Review of The Climb  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sorry for your loss. If this is fiction then you deserve not only a five but a trophy for the best poetic tribute to one who lost their battle with cancer.
The flow is so smooth and emotion filled that the reader cannot help but be affected by these words.
Your form is consistent and moves at a steady pace.
The rhyme scheme is text book perfection, sculptured to fit your lines, art I say!
Best part: "if you get to weak and want to stop
I'll carry you brother to mountain's top." This is the ultimate in care and concern for the well being of another. It is also the only small hiccup in this piece. The underlined "to" is done to indicate it should instead be spelled "too."

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of The Crimson Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the WdC. You have a good story here and there is some good imagery. Your rating of this piece is consistent but for one thing. The issue of "rape" should probably raise the rating to 18+.
Your story flows well, there is a good pace and the character is developing as one to be reckoned with and whom the reader can invest his/her time into reading about.
Grammatically there are no real matters to discuss.
One suggestion for improvement will help the flow of this read and improve future ratings.

Paragraph breaks where the scenes naturally shift is a good tool. This enables the reader to realize that one matter has been addressed and another is about to be undertaken.

Paragraph breaks also give the reader time to digest what has been written and be ready for the next matter to be addressed. Making these changes will improve the overall feel of this story and thank you for sharing.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Goodbye  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, the question comes to mind. Why?
That means that within you have great imagery.
The form is consistent and each line is complete.
There are no indications of grammatical snafu's, it's quite replete.

You tell a tale of goodbye's and it's hard to do.
With a flow that is gentle and smooth, whoo whoo!
Welcoming you to the WdC,
And no suggestions for improvement this writer could see.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Abiku  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing this and welcome to the WdC.
I liked the bold beginning and the progression of the character development. This has the feel of the conclusion of something bigger that has occurred before. There is a myriad of emotions found, a sign of good imagery used through and through.
The flow is excellent and your absence of grammatical matters of import speaks of attention to details.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Incredible work is seen here.
You have good flow within.
There is emotion and some cheer.
The absence of grammatical matters gives you a ten.

Structure is a bid disjointed,
Easily repaired with re-distribution.
The moon is seen as an ally, appointed!
You deftly read the reader through your conception.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Love No More  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A love gone awry,
It causes one to cry.
Your piece is full of emotions,
Some happy, sad, and other notions.

The flow is fluid and uninterrupted.
The pace is languid and grammatically uncorrupted.
You see your love and do give it a try,
In the end life interrupts and you say you cannot cry.

No suggestions for improvement can be made.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Feel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Romantic prose filled with love, gentleness, and kindness.
Each line filled with details and no point one does miss.
A flow that is exquisite and a pace that leads to no race.
There is passion in this piece, from arms, to toes, to face.

No grammatical matters are visible to this reader,
No suggestions for improvement can be made.
You are encouraged, nay implored.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Weapon's Weavings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imagery is clearly within this piece.
Your form is consistent and quite nice.
There is a sense of peace,
And yet a feeling of no absence of malice.

You are commended for taking on the form,
And following well the rhyming scheme.
With a flow that enhanced by no break in grammatical form.
Singing your praises for this awesome theme.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Morning Ardor  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ken found your piece in the latest edition of the Poetry Newsletter

Thanks for the Lexicon, it comes in handy,
The rhyming scheme is just dandy.
Wow you are quite diverse in your verse,
There is good rhyming and timing within.

Images of the point of this poem arise.
There is no evidence of grammatical demise.
You lead the reader on a journey with aplomb
And then you end with all elements the bomb!

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Cherokee Skies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in the latest edition of the Poetry Newsletter.

The form sounds complicated.
You made it easy to see the tale related.
Flowing at a smooth pace,
Enhanced by no grammatical matter in any place.

The rhyming scheme carries a theme.
Your word choice is elicits a vivid scene.
There is much to like about your piece,
And no suggestions can be made, for the reader is at peace.

Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Souvenirs of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Outstanding presentation.
Stellar depiction of the love elements.
Early on this had a sense of more to come.
Reflecting on life is imagery that emerges from this.
Form is just fine and thank you for your contributions to the WDC!
No suggestions for improvement can be made.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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Review of Drum circle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How enchanting is it doing a poem with such restrictions and come up with a grand piece?
I liked the flow, the pace, the form and the insight into it in the end. Thanks!
There was a pace that is imagery filled and helpful.
Your talent is varied and that's a good thing.
Again the absence of any grammatical matters to discuss is stellar.
Write on in the WDC!
Copenator out!
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