Nicely written details and lovely reflections. Celestial choice. Good title. Looks like you spent time with this. You expressed your views well and draw the reader in. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Beautifully written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad we leave earth someday but Heaven awaits. A good style and easy to follow with well chosen words. A good scenario. It is nice to remember our youth. Looks like you spent time with this. Heartfelt words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A gorgeous evening is a good meal and just talking and being with someone you love. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a dark ghost with dark magic. This isn't evil. Good emotions and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue . A garden does have secrets. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good memories expressed by the aunt. A nice style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I had a blood clot and problems breathing. Thatvwas scary. I have a hitial hernia and it feels uncomfortable. I het where you are coming from about the heart attack. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Your fears are well expressed. I pray all the time and believe in God. We need to. Best wishes and thanks for sharing. You left nothing out. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a cute little monkey showing up. Sweet. He helps out at the bar and the owner didn't come back to get him. Looks like this was fun to write. This made me smile. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. A cosmos bar with food and beer and wine. Creative and colorful and looks like this was fun to write. Easy to follow. I will pass on jazz and blues. Music would definitely linger. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good reminder of needing Jesus in our life. Good words of wisdom and this is uplifting and inspiring. Well chosen words. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A pleasure to read like always. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A garden of fruits. Some good ones. Good reflections and a nice style . Looks like you spent time with this. A nice trace of a rhyme pattern rounds this out with a nice blend of words. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A rainy night. A escaped prisoner. He chose a house to break into but chose the wrong house. A policeman. I am glad the dog wasn't hurt. I appreciate the irony in this. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some sad reflections of love. A good style and shattered bonds do hurt. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man thinking he saw a UFO. He and his friend run down the street to see it. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Another man says the UFO was just a tarp of some kind in a tree. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good style. We write to get our views across and we do want to be good at it. Writers write for a lot of reasons. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Some good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we can find treasures in the strangest place. The dogs found food by the bridge. The boys are looking for treasure. This holds the reader's interest and is easy to follow. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little girl playing with Barbie and Ken. She asks her grandmother hoe old she is. Cute. Buster the dog hears his name and perks up. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Some heartfelt words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. All the days of the years. Minutes. Seconds. Problems of the world. A good style and neat scenario . The numbers of life. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Books are comforting. I like Nancy Drew. She loves solving mysteries. Little Women and Heidi. Creative and colorful with good reflections. A good scenario and nice style. I smiled as I read this. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Neat romantic sentiments and good reflections. Neat imagery with heartfelt words. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario and neat style. This holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The first glimpses of light are nice and refreshing. I look foward to spring and summer. Creative and colorful as well as cheery. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I wish my hair was as long as it was in high school. Some well chosen words and I appreciate the humor in this. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the little girl has grown up. Some things are too personal for a daughter. A good style and I can relate. I had to laugh at this. Easy to follow and a good scenario . A camera and a pacifier. A nice presentation. Cute. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Night birdie. A good title and nice scenario. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections and this draws the reader in . Looks like you spent time with this. Heartfelt words. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is always nice to get praise and support for the good things we do. Easy to follow and well chosen words. We do need to make plans in life and follow through. Some good views. A nice presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details. I once read Lilith was Satan's sister and married to Adam at one time. I believe the Bible and Adam was only married to Eve. I like the descriptions of Lilith and this holds the reader's interest with a good style. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman blowing up a house and a taxi like some kind of terrorist. A dangerous character and wearing a red sleeky dress. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A good use of the word prompts. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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