Nicely written details and a good word flow. I liked Patsy Cline and her love songs. Her husband was a rascal so she wrote from the heart. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes friends fight over something and this doesn't get resolved for awhile. Two geese fighting over an egg. After the egg is hatched, he calls both geese Momma. Heartwarming with well rounded characters. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good drama about a storm.
Well defined details that keeps the reader tuned. A neat style and good easy to follow. A good scenario. A rainy night brings out fears and yet, we do find comfort. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. WDC is the reason I took up writing. I published two books. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Writing w journal. We do get to express our private views and it helps us get through things.WDC is great. Some good reflections and this holds the reader's interest. Easy to follow with a nice style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A sad romance with sad reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A Neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I bet there are all kind of stories of ill fated and star crossed lovers everywhere. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and the falls. They attract lovers. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Blue skies. Blue seas. Some good reflections and nice imagery. Easy to follow with a good style and neat tone. A nice rhyme pattern comes into play and pits the words in focus as this winds out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we all have personal stories to tell as well as ones to write. Some good reflections. Well chosen words. New Beginnings. Neglected stories. Volume One. Other volumes to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and looking for a house. Finding the house and taking pictures of it. It gets robbed thst night. The person has a pictures of the house and var used to Rob the place. The person and her husband were able to find a house just like it. Creative and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and heartbreak at any age is sad. Lilly feels sad over her breakup. The next morning, mew neighbors and a new boy. Life was good again. Mother said it would be. Well rounded characters and a neat story line with a nice ending. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I am not a fan of cooking. We make fish in the oven or frozen pizza. I do fry pork chops and make mashed potatoes and noodles. I can relate to Linda. I laughed at this. Some good characters. Suitable dialogue. Some good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We wake up and pray first thing. I do. God is there every day and night. We are thankful for that. Awake from our mind and heart to praise God. Some good thoughts here. Blessings. This is uplifting and inspiring. Well defined and spiritual. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. St. Patrick's Day. St.Patrick was special and will always be remembered. Some good aspects. Looks like you researched St. Patrick. Creative and colorful. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like this woman was taken in by a person she is grateful for. She can do magic and would do anything for this person. Magic is good when used for good things. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections and this is easy to follow. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures along with lovely reflections. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The gift. God gives us gifts and talent. This is inspiring and enlightening as well as spiritual. A good devotional and prayer. Every day is a gift. I agree. Good advice and this made me smile. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a clown used a rainbow for a new act and redeemed himself as being a good clown. This holds the reader's interest. This is creative and colorful as well as cheery. This made me smile. A well rounded character. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Defiled. Salem castigation. A gentle Goddess. Some food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. A lot to take in. Not a happy passage. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The Black Knight. He isn't the good guy and they treat Batman the same way. Some good drama and nice descriptions. A good scenario. Some dark elements and this is creative. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I take it this is about a rock concert. A rock concert does have mixed emotions. Hysteria happens. Some good drama and neat feelings. A good style and this holds the reader's interest as it draws others in. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Some new Star Wars blood. A young girl. Some familiar characters. Suitable dialogue. Easy to follow. An interesting storyline. Special attention was given to details. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it does seem like ants are marching on our lives making us miserable. Red ants. Yikes. Some bad reflections and this is well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and a good style and nice presentation. I appreciate the scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good scenarios. A little boy thinks a dog would keep the neighborhood from getting robbed. A realtor doesn't want to sell the house at a cheaper price. An employee would rather be home watching Gone With The Wind. These are well written and a good writing exercise. Always: Megan
This reminds me if Swan Lake with Natalie Portman and Mulina when the ballerina turned into a swan. Cute and I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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