Nicely written details and a good word flow. My father turned to God after the Vietnam War and he wasn't an easy man to get along with but we made it. I loved him and he died three months ago. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
We never know what will consume us when we have fears, pain and doubts. We try to behave and let God help us. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good romantic vows. Easy to follow with a good style. This is cheery and a good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. Heartfelt words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. We did all we could to help our patients through depression. Liky nourishing a tree. Good call. It helps her depression. A well adjusted character. Easy to follow with good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat happy ending. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and these are words to live by. We all need to write yourseves a Dear Me Letter. We need to live by God's love and believe. Food for thought. This is uplifting and enlightening. Creative and colorful. Beautifully crafted. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A cowboys work is never dine. Poor cows. Easy to follow and cheery. Springtime is a fun time for all of us except cows at branding time. I look forward to spring. Lovely reflections. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A good style. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Sounds like the woman is trying to ignore the man and her mystic eyes survey the room and him. Easy to follow and a good style. A good tome and this passage has a message about it. Easy to follow and creative. A neat rhyme pattern ties in nicely and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Your mother was right. We are born and suffer misery. We do bear a cross. Life isn't all unicorns and roses. Some good details and food for thought. A nice style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good reflections. Yesterday is a memory and we go forward. Food for thought. The stars of the evening leave the morning sky. The moon chased by the sun. Some good lines. A new day is calming. Well chosen words. This holds the reader's interest. Thus is cheery and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I enjoy mythology. Apollo I have read about. He sounds interesting and you spent time with this. Some good reflections. A nice style. Looks like you researched this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well written. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is always nice when we can turn to the Lord. We do ask why and wonder why. God answers when we least expect it. This is enlightening and has words of wisdom. Food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out with a good balance. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow with a good style. Lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together, puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A good message in this short poem about summer. Mosquito repellent. Yikes. Sweet smell of the garden. Smell of grass. Some good details. Frying onions isn't a bad smell. Chlorine bleach. You put together some good smells of summer. Easy to follow and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
You know when you are first in love, money doesn't matter. You just love spending time together. Sounds like this takes place in Louisiana. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections. A nice style and creative. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. My father died three months ago and I miss him. We had fights when I was younger but it happens. I had no regrets. I get the message in this poem. Feeling sad. Some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do go through a lot in life and it makes us who we are. We become stronger and mature as well as survive. Easy to follow and a good style. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sometimes, we wander and get lost but we realize home is with family. Sometimes, we have to discover that after experiencing life. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. Lovely reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We all hope for a better life and pray for guidance. We do question life and hope for better things. Some good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. We do get regrets in life. Enlightening and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we change as we get older. A good style and easy to follow. Good descriptions of the woman in the mirror. I love jewelry. A good scenario and a good word flow. Looks like this was fun to write. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. A new ballgame. You seem to like ballgames and this makes this interesting. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Hitchiking to Florida. Sounds like a good road trip. A nice use of word prompts. Jacksonville, Florida. Been there. Looks like this was fun to write. A nice scenario and a good style. Creative and colorful. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A perfect storm. Rain is nice when it is gentle. The earth always needs a good cleansing. Every to follow with a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words motion and blends them together with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Beneath one distant spring. I will be glad to see spring. Lovely reflections and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Well chosen words and a good scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Having tea with a frog and a turtle. Good call. Easy to follow and I appreciate the humor and friendship in this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I ask why do we do have wars? I have been pondering that for years. Why don't our world leaders just duke it out? Easy to follow and the words flow well. A good style and easy to follow. A good scenario and well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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