Nicely written details and I obly hae one child but we do need time away from them. A little quiet time is nice. Sitting in the grocery lot parking lot is some quiet time . A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections easy to follow . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We try to raise our children to do well in life and make a difference . A good style and easy to follow. Cute sentiments. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We don't want to fall in love or plan on doing so but it happens. We aren't supposed to but we do. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
The young woman in this story had a rough time with men mistreating her. No wonder she uses a sword and is rough and hsyes men. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This is an echo in this poem but in a good way. Nature catching your eye. This is creative and colorful as well as cheery. A nice style. A trace of a rhyme pattern. Eye and I. Catchy. A good flair. A neat cover art of a rainbow and a blue sky. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I don't like mornings. Takes me two hours to get it together. It is nice to look at nature. A good style with lovely reflections. Easy to follow. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
The Bermuda Triangle has it's secrets and makes you wonder what lurks there. Looks like you researched this. A good scenario and this holds the reader's interest. Some planes fly over it and have no problems. Guess we will never know. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A broken computer. Fixing it with a little screwdriver. This holds the reader's interest. A good scenario. I appreciate the humor in this. So, maybe Peggy was a bird who can turn into a human? A good presentation. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and Cleopatra was a stern woman that was feared. An uninvited guest seemed to get her to back down and atcthe same tune making her think she could do this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue that is interesting and tells the story. A good style and it is like you met Cleopatra. A great presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I used to think school was a punishment for growing up. Some teachers were mean. Teachers would bring us in goodies and try to make learning fun. A teacher trying to plan her year. This is food for thought and is creative and colorful. In the end, the teacher got the kids input. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Dancing barefoot in the grass covered in morning dew. Sometimes, we have fearscin the dark. They seem worse. Tears. Pure love. Good descriptions. Some good reflections. A good style. This holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and breaking a military man's window. Not good. Ten push uos and doing chores around the man's house for a week. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Looks like it all worked out in the end. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and two brothers getting themselves in a situation. This involves paint and a mess. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue i appreciate the humor in this. Creative and colorful. Looks like this was fun to write. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The picture of the dog is so sweet. It is sad, too. Missing a pet is awful. Creative and colorful with heartfelt words. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Heartwarming and heartbreaking. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ghost town. This town literally has ghosts. Creative with well rounded characters. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. A little scary but this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we win something we don't expect. I won a free facial at Macys. A free book from an author complimenting her writing. The box of the laundry box with jokes and cute things. Neat. Easy to follow and entertaining. You got a neat $25.00 coupon for complimenting the laundry people. Well written and good presentation. Always: Megan
It is amazing what foods remind us of our childhood. For me, it was crispy critters and Alphabets. I tried Apple Jacks. Some good reflections and this holds the reader's interest. Easy to follow and this made me smile. Refreshing and cute. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ghosts in parallel universe and in the world. I used to watch Dark Shadows. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest and spooky elements included. Creative and colorful. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat, brisk ending. A good presentation. I like this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we do love our Moms. We always have hopes of better things in life. Baking bread sounds like fun. Baking bread with Mom. Awesome. A good style with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This is cheery and made me smile. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections and winter can be sad and chilling. Looks like you covered this well. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I hate the smell of dirt and mold. A good scenario. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Mixture of good and bas reflections. Easy to follow and a good style. Good imagery and well defined descriptions. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I am visiting you again. Flowers. Lilacs. Bits of honey. Campfires. Sweet smell of morning. Flowers do make things smell good. Neat sentiments and a good style and nice flair. Nice imagery. This passage is peaceful and cheery. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
This is interesting. I wonder why Don Quixote chased windmills. I like windmills, the modern day ones. I love lighthouses. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and neat scenario. Well chosen words. Lighthouses can bring security. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow with lovely reflections. I take it the woman's parents lived in a contry far away. A good style and food for thought. Creative and colorful. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some lovely reflections and it is always nice to have a friend help you in your time of need. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Beautifully written. Always: Megan
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