Nicely written details and some romantic sentiments and overtures. Pir last breath is always of loved ones. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up by blending the words together. I enjoyed reading this . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The bad side of if town. A bus driver and a death. A man searching for answers. A man meets a young lady and the pieces fall into place. Good sentiments. This holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad to lose friends we love and people we wish we would have known better. Good sentiments and nice memories. We all enjoy having a Bobby in our life . A good style and easy to follow. Some people leave our life and we never know why. Heartfelt and a good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we do need some funky oulet in life. Easy to follow and a good style. Food for thought. This is creative. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I hate calling people and playing phone tag and being a ping. Nicely written details and we call someone, our call isn't always returned. Easy to follow. I can relate. I hate being a ping. This holds the reader's interest. We can't argue with a phone recording. Good presentation. Always: Megan
I was in my late twenties in the 80s with a son who wasn't a teenager, yet and he loved Aerosmith and the 80s music. Me, too. Crazy in the 80s. It was fun. I think the music and TV Shows were great. Life was more fun back then. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. More then memories. I lost my father so I can relate. Easy to follow. Well chosen words and some good reflections and memories for you. I hope you are finding comfort as I am trying to find comfort in losing my father. A beautiful presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good scenario with interesting sing lyrics. Looks like you spent time with this. Well chosen words. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. You paused for the instrumental part. Good call. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man freezesvto death because it is so cold. Looks like the couple live in the Ice Age. Easy to follow and a good style. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Sad. Well written. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes we have to make the effort. Finding nice guys isn't easy. We can go to Christian Web sites and places where nice guys hang out. Online. We do need to be careful. Easy to follow and finding our path in life isn't always easy. I dold Avon and no luck. I had a nursing job but my passion was always with writing. Food for thought and good advice. Easy to relate to. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
We do need to love ourselves. Good call. We fund out what we love about ourselves then others can love us for who we are. Good call. Nicely written details and a good style. Well chosen words and I like your point of view. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes with husbands, ww feel rushed about going out and what food to order. Sometimes, it is just better toneat at home. Easy to follow and a good scenario with food for thought. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and women go through a lot. Menopause like you said. We hold down jobs and keep going. Going to a job interview and getting hired. Priceless. A woman boss understands. Creative and colorful. A nice style and well suited dialogue. A successful interview. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We view the sea in different ways. We respect it. We love it. The sea isn't always kind. A good scenario and nice style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair . Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. I guess we never know what person an artist falls in love with and who they are looking for. Freckles. Maybe. Good call. A good scenario and nice style. Lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The muses are here for us at Writing on and off the site. A good style and easy to follow. A nice tone and good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. These are words of wisdom, food for thought and this is uplifting and inspiring. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. I always enjoy your reading of Devotions. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sometimes life gets us down. We try to understand why and all the ups and downs. Nicely written details and easy to follow. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this and got your feelings out there. Finding the right man in life is a blessing. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I guess we have seen a lot of changes in life. Potato Chips were just one flavor at one time. A big mac being a rain coat. Seaweed wasn't a food years ago. Some food for thought and sometimes it is hard to remember years ago. Easy to follow and good memories. Good research. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad when one person leaves and the void it makes in one's life. Giving up a house. Good characters and well expressed memories for the old woman. Heart touching and easy to follow. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I was eight years old when we lost JFK. I never understood why. I lived in Washington, DC when this happened. I saw him in person.
Dasd saw Jackie Kennedy in person as he was working on an airplane at the base as she was coming back from Texas on theplane . Sad reflections. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Janus sounds interesting. Gatekeeper. Rome. It would have been hard to live back then. Looks like you spent time with this and did research on this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and what I have learned about being a lifeguard I learned from Baywatch. I was never a Lifeguard. Melanie has it all together and her whistle is a reminder. She straightened out two boys on the beach l. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details Batman was a superhero with no powers but he was good. This script could fly and make it with a superhero and no powers. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we try to be good students and parents. We want our children to be good students and get along with the teachers and students. We want them to get a good education . Easy to follow with well defined thoughts and words to live by. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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