Nicely written details and a good word flow. We want others to see us in a beautiful light and we want to do that for others. Easy to follow and a good style. Good reflections and a nice scenario. You expressed your thoughts well. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I love an animal story with a happy ending. The lottery. A woman getting a puppy and he shares his teddy bear toy with her. Sweet. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with an excellent flair. Beautiful story. Always: Megan
I guess this is road rage. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style with good drama and suspense and it like stay out of my way. A good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a interesting flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A lost love. Good memories and nice reflections. Creative and colorful. Food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. A nice scenario. Good descriptions about the person. A nice presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is scary. The final voyage to Hades. I think I will pass. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good cover art. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A white rabbit. Holding a watch and needing to be somewhere. First, I thought, Wonderland. Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Australian Prime Minister. Time for an important man. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I was trying to decide if this is about love or life in general. Some food for thought. A good scenario and nice reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Winning the war. This could have more then one meaning. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ww do have fears. Failure doesn't lead to death. So true. Easy to follow and we shouldn't have any fears. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style. There are heies and they give us something to think about. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Going home. A sad man who lost his love and visits her everyday. He waits for the day he could see her. They found him by the cemetery gate. Sad but happy ending for him. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. One hour with Jesus is priceless. Food for thought. Creative and colorful. Inspiring and uplifting. This has words of wisdom. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. Praise and Thanksgiving. They are important. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Some good love sentiments and overtures. Two. It takes two to be in love. Good details. A good scenario. Creative. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest . Hope. Care. Wishes. Well chosen words and good reflections. I smiled as I read this. Always: Megan
Good details and eighteen does change things for a person. I always loved Alice Cooper's song Eighteen and it was wo true. Food for thought and easy to follow . Looks like you spent time with this and your feelings are well expressed. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up and blends the words together. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I wish all dogs and cats had humans to love them. This is heart touching and big, strong gentle hands caress the kitten and he or she will never be scared again. Creative and colorful. A nice tone. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Interesting descriptions and I was thinking of Cheyenne, Wyoming when I read this. Creative and colorful. Our brain feeling better is a must. Good thoughts . A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Dance in the rain. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
It would be nice to have cards telling us how to cope with life and step by step instruction. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and good tone. Easy to follow. Looks like you put some thought into this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Legacy of a Starman. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Some lovely reflections. A good style. Beaches are always nice and beautiful. A Starman touching lives. Good call. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a book combining Jane Austen, fairies and a Darcy character. Romance and fairyland. A plus for sure. A good style and good descriptions of the character. A nice summary and review. This holds the reader's interest and draws them in. A nice presentation. I would like to read this book. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A morning ride
This sounds like autumn by the tge descriptions of the trees leaves. Creative and colorful. This is cheery and relaxing. I feel like I was there seeing this. A nice tone and easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good imagery of a storm. Listening to a storm is like music it seems. Harmony and symphony. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Maybe some songs are written during storms. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some people will do anything to get their way. Fred. He wants a special parking space and wants a stop sign for the end of the street. Seems like there are always problems in life. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A father's love. Some fathers aren't good at expressing love. My father wasn't but I blame Vietnam. We were good until he died. I shed tears now. Some sad reflections. Easy to follow. A good style with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A good message in this short passage. We think about someone we love and we hope to hear from them on our Birthday or the holidays. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
This is different. A man buys the house back thst he grew up in thinking his parents are dead or just left. He gets a message saying go to the basement. His father has been living there for years! Well rounded characters and the father and son have things catch up on. A good style and nice mystery . A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is uplifting and inspiring. We pray to God everyday and we continue to get through another day. We have God to help us. Good words of wisdom. This reads like a devotional and we always need Devotions. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love is all that. Love can be a field of daisies. Emails. Texts. Phone calls. Anything from someone we love is precious. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. Looks like you put your heart in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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