Nicely written details and I was trying to figure out if this was about humans or animals. A lesson learned. We do live life and death is a part of living. A home in the country. Good imagery and nice descriptions. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Heart warming. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We are forever thankful for God and Jesus. Sometimes, we think he has forgotten us. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. A nice style and well chosen words. Well defined and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and so many things I didn't know about the First Ladies. Jackie is my favorite. I saw JFK in person and my father saw Jackie in person. Looks like you spent time with this and researched this. Informative and interesting. Impressive. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and why any person eat spicy food, rusk their health and get sick and need to go to the hospital, all for an eating contest? I never got food eating contests but I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and this draws the reader in. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we have so many disasters in life. The Hindenberg. Titanic. Ricket ships. Sad. A good scenario of characters and the people on this vehicle when it blew up. Good drama and suspense. A good style and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I take it this person is a lot of things like an angel, Pacifica, snowflake. Some good reflections and we saw an item or a person in a lot of ways. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. A good scenario and well chosen words. I smiled as I read this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The Irish Centre. Wednesday. A game of Bingo. Lucky numbers hopefully. A good style and this is easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good scenario. Well chosen words. Creative and entertaining. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like she is an exotic dancer. Her boyfriend gets in for free. What kind of boyfriend allows his girlfriend to do a job like this? I guess I have known a few. LOL. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up. I enjoyed reading this. Cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I hate riding buses. The back of the bus has unfavorable people. Some food for thought. Easy to follow . Well chosen words and a good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Not written details and the first part draws the reader in. Fairies. Magic dust. Getting caught. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Some good drama and suspense. Neat fantasy elements. Philasendria is a good name. Different and well chosen. This has something for everyone. A good introduction. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and don't you just love the story about the one that got away. Fish like telling other fish how they escaped. Easy to follow with good reflections. I have seen men catch huge fish and kiss them and set them free back in the water. A good style and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and these soundtrack train noises added an extra glow and gets the reader's attention. Good cover art of woman drinking and being dressed up A nice tone with good reflections. A good style and easy t follow. The art of presumption. Good play with words. Always: Megan
More then once, I wanted to yell at a weather man. Some humor here but not when it is happening to you. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good descriptions. What a bad, sad day. A good style. Creative and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word. A civil suit. Bowling. Some bad reflections and a bad day. This holds the reader's interest. Some humor here. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man finding a brand new pair of shoes in the trash and wears them. He gets accused of stealing them. He is from Ireland. He gets blamed double. The Irish man triumphed. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined and a neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A high priestess. A well rounded character The sun. The stars. She sets the mood. Some good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. This sets the mood and draws the reader in. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and great big memory. Sad. Been there. Easy to follow. Great big sea. Long ealk. Walking away. A good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions. You feel the sad emotions here. A nice presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A man thinking a woman is gis Princess. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and this is creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Measure of a man. A caring heart. A helping hand. Strong arms and hands. Good call. Well chosen words and a good scenario. Looks like you spent time with this and some good thoughts. A neat rhyme pattern interweaves well with the words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my Birthday is four days before Christmas. No surprises. I get Birthday and Christmas gifts together. I always have the party at my house. Surprises. I don't mind surprises if they are good. I get this. Well defined and easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I am married to a man who hates to dress up. He wore a tux for our wedding and wears dress pants when he has to. He is a jeans man. Good descriptions and neat imagery. I enjoyed the humor in this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Always: Megan
This short passage is scary. A storm. Capital Hill. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. A storm is never good. Nicely written details and a good scenario and nice style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together as well as sums this up with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
I remember that bubble stuff goop in a tube. As teens, we do things parents don't understand. Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I don't think super elastic goop would be so bad. I get the humor in this. Entertaining. Love the scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love has all kind of sides. I think we all are lost and hopeless romantics. Finding greener grass. Good call. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love has it's us and downs. Some sad reflections. Love may take a few times to work out. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario. You expressed your views well. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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