Nicely written details and I took Music Appreciation Class in college. I really got into it and enjoyed it. This holds the reader's interest and looks like you researched this. This holds the readers interest. David in the Bible was also a musician. Classical and Baroque music was a classic. Music has come a long way. A good style and nice presentation. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman who can read minds and be a protector but she couldn't protect her husband from bring murdered. This holds the reader's attention. Littly seems like a patient and forgiving person. Her partner wasn't the man she thought he was. Well rounded characters. An earthquake happened and she and her partner saved a lot of people. Littly had powers. This is a good story and well written. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
WE do live day to day. I bought new shoes I am trying to break in. Being picked up when you fall. Some good reflections and seems like we travel in circles. Easy to follow and some well chosen words. Water through the gorge. A good scenario and good descriptions of your day. Looks like you spent time with day. A day in our life makes our heads spin at times. Good call. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and as kids we argue about who has the best dog, who is the cutest and smartest and my Dad can beat up your Dad. The kids having a contest who can be the messiest. The one room was all neat and no mess because ot had been cleaned. I enjoyed the humor in this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The sky's the limit. The problem is trying to get there. Some well chosen words and some good reflections . Something to think about. A good style and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in action and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this has good romantic sentiments and overtures. Flowers are always nice and say romantic things. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this young man worked hard to be an astronaut and succeeded. A good space dream. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I have a suggestion. Double space when starting a new paragraph. Just some helpful advice. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good message in this short passage. Writers should write what they know. You say toure sixteen and you have a lot of writing years ahead of you. Food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is creative . A house is where you hang your hat. In a home, you hang your heart. Lovely reflections. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. This poem is heartwarming. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I always heard good things about Queen Victoria and Queen Elizabeth. Some good reflections and well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A fond farewell. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A dog finding a grave stone with a name and this leaves questions. Like who was he? What does I stand for? Food for thought. A good style with well chosen words. No flowers. Just a lonely grave. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and World Peace Forest sounds nice. Sounds like they have interesting animals. Easy to follow. Wildflowers sound nice as well. Good imagery. Creative and colorful. I wonder what Sam Adams regret is as he looks at World Peace Forest. This holds the reader's interest. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this giant of a man sounds like a good man. Two mothers. Both are witches. In Barabados, the man has a trade business that does well. A well rounded character and this little story is cheery. Thanks for including the extra info about the country and it's people. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love endures a lot of things like trials and problems. Some well chosen words and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Good romance sentiments and overtures. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a picnic in the park and remembering the Vets. Some pronpt words and these played out well. Table manners. They are important. Easy to follow and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Oh my. A big hole in the ground. No house and no Sam. Spooky things happen and Sam was good at strange phenomenon and things that went bump in the night. Nicely written details and well rounded characters. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I heard a bull will charge. I was walking down the road once and a bull started bellowing and there were three female cows near by. I didn't want his females. He was all brown and not that big. My mother and I ran. Must be the male thing. LOL. This is creative and holds the reader's interest. Entertaining but a bull chasing you isn't fun. A good presentation and nice story telling. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I wonder if this is a true story. Well rounded characters who seem interesting. Edith is off to a good start writing her diary and she cares about her siblings. She seems happy. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my father was a Vet and went to Vietnam. He made it home. I have learned to respect and appreciate Vers over the years. Well chosen words and heartfelt. Easy to follow . It is sad when a soldier is killed. A good style. Every patriot is a treasure. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Carter is in another realm so to speak. Nicely written details and Carter meets a Princess and looks like he is in a park. Some good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Oh my. A creature wanting a pink stone and his name is Cow and he is a mirror monster of sorts. The poor human gets stuck in a mirror. Interesting sad concept. Easy to follow and some supernatural elements. Hopefully, the human gets rescued. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. A good storyline. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is an interesting chapter. Elf. Humans. Kins. Queens. This holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style. Looks like this will be interesting. Easy to follow. Draws the reader in. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and spooky. A cat mysteriously shows up and rescues a family from an evil woman. Some good suspense and drama. This holds the reader's interest and has a good ending. A good style with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a lost yellow umbrella . The woman retraces her steps and gors back to the barrista and finds it. Someone found it and bought it back. A lucky break. She appreciates the umbrella more then ever. Creative and well written. Always: Megan
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