Nicely written details and a good word flow. These are words of wisdom, food for thought and this is uplifting and inspiring. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. I always enjoy your reading of Devotions. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sometimes life gets us down. We try to understand why and all the ups and downs. Nicely written details and easy to follow. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this and got your feelings out there. Finding the right man in life is a blessing. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I guess we have seen a lot of changes in life. Potato Chips were just one flavor at one time. A big mac being a rain coat. Seaweed wasn't a food years ago. Some food for thought and sometimes it is hard to remember years ago. Easy to follow and good memories. Good research. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad when one person leaves and the void it makes in one's life. Giving up a house. Good characters and well expressed memories for the old woman. Heart touching and easy to follow. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I was eight years old when we lost JFK. I never understood why. I lived in Washington, DC when this happened. I saw him in person.
Dasd saw Jackie Kennedy in person as he was working on an airplane at the base as she was coming back from Texas on theplane . Sad reflections. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Janus sounds interesting. Gatekeeper. Rome. It would have been hard to live back then. Looks like you spent time with this and did research on this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well defined . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and what I have learned about being a lifeguard I learned from Baywatch. I was never a Lifeguard. Melanie has it all together and her whistle is a reminder. She straightened out two boys on the beach l. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details Batman was a superhero with no powers but he was good. This script could fly and make it with a superhero and no powers. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we try to be good students and parents. We want our children to be good students and get along with the teachers and students. We want them to get a good education . Easy to follow with well defined thoughts and words to live by. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. Good words of wisdom. Heartwarming. A good prayer to God and we all need God's promises and love and need to get back to him. Well chosen words and you wrote from the heart. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I am still trying to figure out God's purpose for me. We need to be on fire for the Lord. I pray, believe, go to Church and got baptized as I am a Christian. This is uplifting and inspiring. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. Words of wisdom. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and life is a puzzle. We try to figure things out. We ponder. We face contradictions. We have to have insight. Self introspection. You covered a lot. You used words I haven't thought about in years. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Evergreens in the fog has a message and magic of it's own. Creative and colorful with good descriptions and neat imagery. Kissing the sky. Foggy shrouds. Lofty heights. Some good reflections. A neat presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have thought of becoming vegan. I don't eat much meat. I like turkey and tuna. I try to avoid eating cow and pigs. Interesting facts about the grandson. I don't believe in animal abuse. The recipe for tofu I am not too sure about. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice tone and good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together with a good flair. This holds the reader's interest. Makes you want to pray and give thanks to the Lord for Thanksgiving. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we are always told the moon is made out of green cheese. Ww wish. Food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. The father and young son have quite a conversation about the moon being made out of green cheese. Well rounded characters . This is entertaining. Always: Megan
Math Class never worked for me. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Salmanders are so cute. We don't want to hurt them. Picking up a leaf with them on it. We need to be careful with them. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections and this makes one smile. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this tiwn seems to have a lot of secrets. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Some spooky elements and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Lunar City. Does sound like a good place to visit. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some families are closer then others. Warm and cozy. It is good to have that. Heaven sent. Some people are. Some good reflections. A nice play on words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad to lose your father. I lost my father four months ago and the good memories of our father we cherish. This holds the reader's interest and your emotions are well expressed. A good style. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we all feel moments of loneliness and get frustrated. Food for thought. You expressed your feelings well. Looks like you spent time with this. Life's journey. Peace. Serenity. I like these terms. We do need to turn to God. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do need to cherish memories of places we once loved and went to. A good style and this has lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. Brave new world. We all have our fears and worries in life. We do get lost along the way. Easy to follow and food for thought. Some good reflections. We need to remember the love of the world. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and chewing bubble gum is fun when you are a kid. Magic giant bubbles. I like the bubbles you buy in a jar. This is cheery and makes you smile. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Animal abuse is the worst. Female dogs are sweet like other dogs and cats. Nicely written details and the beach is always a good place. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. I would rather be on a beach with dogs then with humans. Heart warming and well defined. Always: Megan
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