Nicely written details and a good word flow. We often ask what now. Life does throw problems at us. Creative and colorful with well rounded words. Some good reflections and some bad ones. Physical symptoms of being upset. Well written and a good short passage. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and David has a way of finding things. The girl wants to go to a slumber party and the boy who will be is always in trouble. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good characters. We never know when we will meet our potential boyfriends again and we just be nice to each other. We hope they found happiness. Seems like Paul really liked this girl. Heart touching and creative. A nice style and good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like this kid wanted to go to Outer Space and was busy building a space ship and looks like he succeeded. I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I love the movie Field Of Dream and nature does paint a picture of her own. Nicely written details and lovely reflections. Easy to follow and a good style. This holds the reader's attention. A Neat rhyme pattern puts the words in play and rounds this out with a good flair. Beautifully crafted. Always: Megan
We don't always appreciate our parents until we get older. Nicely written details and food for thought. Some good reflections. Some good emotional bonds and tge feelings are well expressed. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I wish my cat would take up meditation. She's active. A good style and easy to follow. I love the picture of the black cat that accompanies this. A buddha cat sounds neat. A good flair and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Our minds can wander and we get lost inside a painting or imaginations. Lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Easy to follow. I feel like I was looking at the willow tree in the painting. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and we should never criticize anyone who is poor when it isn't their fault. This noble man learned a lesson when he wasn't nice to a poor man. He got to be a slave and no one was nice to him. Easy to follow wit well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. A great presentation and a lesson learned. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be great to see Heaven. Angels. Chariots. Dragons. I am so there. Some good imagery and nice descriptions. Looks like you spent time with this. This has lovely reflections and well rounded characters. I smiled as I read this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good Christmas visitation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we think about tomorrow and wonder what it will bring as we wait for it's call. Good call. Well chosen words with lovely reflections. We do our best and I think this is what this poem has to say. Creative and somewhat cheery. I like the style. A good message as await the call of tomorrow. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We always need hope and it's gentle glow to see us through another day. Lovely reflections and looks like you spent time with this. This poem is cheery and heart warming. A nice style and easy to follow. Well chosen words and beautifully crafted. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we just buried my father four months ago. He lived through three Vietnam tours. A man handed Mom the flag. That was rough. This story, the woman is pregnant and burying her military husband and the St. Christopher Medal appeared on her rearview mirror. Her heart rejoices some like he is with her. Some sad reflections but this is well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young woman humming Christmas songs and a man thinking he was imagining her. Her house had burned down and her child was gone. She gets a gift from an evil fairy of a knife and she kills herself. Sad. I feel for the woman. My house burned down the day before my Birthday and four days before Christmas. Some good reflections and a mystery here. Good characters and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A Neat short passage and the cover art of this eagle sitting om a gravestone in Arlington Cemetery is heartfelt and looks like the eagle is showing respect and knows the story. He is paying his respects. Some well chosen words with good reflections. Creative and well defined. Always: Megan
There are some nicely written details but you made the story into one big paragraph. Some suggestions. Indent two spaces when starting a new line of dialogue or a new paragraph. What was the answer to getting out of the old house that the old woman told them about? Interesting characters and this story has good potential. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sounds like the beginning of a novel. An introduction that draws the reader in and hooks them. Sounds like some interesting characters and good concepts. Ww always have echoes of the past and hopes of the future . Easy to follow well defined as a woman vows her parents didn't die in vain for their invention. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Sometimes, we do dream and space off in public. A coffee shop is a nice time to reflect. Nicely written details and a good character. She seems to have her mind on other things. Food for thought. Good dialogue. Creative and colorful. The answer is always out there. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and kids taking wedding vows seriously and having a slumber party. They wanted to do it legally. Cute. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Kids have good imaginations. The mother thinking she is raising her son right. Entertaining. Always: Megan
I assume you mean Valentines Day. Too bad love isn't perfect always. Good details and a good message in this short passage. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern tops this off with a good flair as well as blends them together. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Loving the sea. It is relaxing. Good imagery and good descriptions. Lovely reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and this is emotional and easy to follow with a good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and balances them out with a good flair. Creative and colorful with a happy ending. Always: Megan
A mysterious code on a rock and everyone tried to decipher it and it was all over the internet. It had everyone's attention. I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like you spent time with this. The message at the end is cute. I think it is a message we have all asked a parent for. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details with well rounded characters and looks like two genies or Jeanies found their way back together. I don't think I would want to live in a bottle but this is cute and entertaining with good descriptions. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. A Good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Cheese puffs. A package delivered at the door. A hockey player. A romance in the making . This holds the reader's interest and makes one smile. A good style and a good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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