Nicely written details and we do need to treat people better no matter their position. Jane fibbed about Randal to see Alice would do. Easy to follow and I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and fictional fairy characters make for a good story. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This is mixed with modern times. Good call. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Rose Red and Snow White. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a leprechaun and a part of gold. They are gold buttons. Well rounded gold characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow and I appreciate the humor in this. How to capture a rainbow. Good call. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. I have always been captivated by King Arthur and Camelot. So, a good start on how King Arthur came to be. Easy to follow. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good introduction and this draws the reader in. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, we think our life is over and something great happens. Ee get another chance. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out with a good flair. It is always nice when things turn out for the best . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and love is a wonderful thing when it is returned. Good romantic overtures and nice sentiments. Heartwarming. A good style. True love is endless and knows no bounds. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds balances this out. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and some sas romantic sentiments and overtures. Looks like you spent time with this and put your heart into this. Creative and colorful and easy to follow . A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and looks like scientists had better be careful what they invent and make sure the experiment goes perfect. This holds the reader's interest with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and looks like the end result went back too far. I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
Nicely written details and a Arizona Viking. I never heard that term but it is interesting. Sad the man died of the virus. Some good reflections. Winter is rough. Good descriptions. A good style. Sounds like the man was special. Heart warming and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I remember people in The 60s and 70s wearing T shirts that say End The War and Dog Tags, too. Funerals and gravestones are so sad. Creative and something to think about. All soldiers are tagged with honors. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
We want to age well. Posting pictures and hoping she doesn't look her age. Some food for thought and friends being nice telling her she looks good for her age but she doesn't. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I live in Indiana but I hate the cold and nd snow. My sister visits from Florida and she had to buy a coat in November because she didn't bring one. She doesn't know how we handle it. I can relate to this. A good style and easy to follow . Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a fairy godfather. Good concept. Easy to follow with good characters and suitable dialogue. The man kept hoping to see his fairy godfather again but didn't again until he died. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
We do hand things down to each other. Something borrowed. Something blue. Something new. Wedding traditions. A good style. Some good reflections. A nice style. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern sets this the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man can't handle his sons Birthday. He refuses to go with his wife to see their son. The ending we know why. Sad and this holds the reader's interest. Well structured characters. Easy to follow and tugs at your heart strings. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I would hate to have kids come to my door and find out they were escaped hostages and I get kidnapped and in the cross fire as well. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Some good details, interesting characters and seems like a computer or phone message alerted the police. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and bunnies, holes in a dream. Was this like Alice In Wonderland? Well rounded characters and a good imagination. The dialogue works well. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Looks like this was fun to write. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and as robot being a friend. Good call. Looks like the robot has positive things and plans for the earth. Easy to follow and this made me smile. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Playing with legos. Cute. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It would be nice to save the planet. Aliens must not think too highly of us. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and food for thought as well as suitable dialogue. Kind of a sad story. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details. I think this cloud of pain is visiting me. Too bad we can't make it go away. Sally the dog being faithful when the woman is lying on the ice. Well rounded characters but I don't like the pain character. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Making a million off power drinks is better then trying to win a ribbon off making drinks. Not giving up is a plus. Nicely written details with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style an this captures the reader's attention. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. What ever will be, will be. These words I never liked. I guess I like positive results. I remember being in talent shows. It was always exciting and fun. I get this. Well defined and things worked out for you. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Only God can comfort us but sometimes I feel he is on vacation. I do pray. I keep the faith. We do learn a lot as we go through life. Easy to follow. Birthday thoughts are nice. We do get another year older. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and and a good word flow. Sadly, the man didn't have time to sail with his love and he lost her at sea. Easy to follow with heartbreaking words. He finds her lace on the shore. He ends up joining her by sailing off in a boat. They are together again. Good characters. A neat rhyme pattern plays out nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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