I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. A man kills to survive. An angel of war? I guess there could be an angel of war. A witch, warrior and a sibling. Some good concepts. The angel is guiding and trying to protect everyone. You threw this out there and this comes together well. Looks like you thought about this and the words work out well describing a war situation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. A short passage but a good message is related in this. Gifts of love and joy. This is what Christmas is all about besides remembering Santa, Jesus and being with family. One holy night all those years ago. Good concept. A good style and a pleasure to read. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details an heart touching words. Sorry your "father" died. I lost my father three months ago. Easy to follow. Winds of passion, breeze of love. Some good concepts. Looks like you spent time with this. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair and arranges the words nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Monet was a great painter. Some good reflections and a nice style. Painting* nature and scenery. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details about winning a game. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and a good word flow. We do struggle with things in life. A good style and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair . A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be awful if Christmas was canceled. Something to think about and it is nice to believe in Santa Claus but it is fun. A nice bounce and it does get cheery. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful. Well structured and a nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I worked as a charge Nurse on midnights. I got along with everyone and made friends and bought them Christmas cards. I can relate. I had a boss who was rough. I had to get firm with those who worked under me but I was nice. A good presentation and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. The life of a tree wouldn't be easy. Enduring the weather. Tornadoes breaking it in two. Being chopped down. They are beautiful. A good style. Easy to follow. Good descriptions. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I had romances like this. Cold hearted. Sad. This gets the readers attention. Some well chosen words. Easy to follow. You can feel the sad emotions in this. Creative and colorful with well structured sentences. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I was an only child and my father was in the Air Force and we moved a lot. It was hard to be accepted by some kids. I have friends but I am not social. Once i get to know people, I am a lot of fun. A good style with well chosen words and I can relate . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the person is embarking on a journey. Mr. Moonlight. Interesting name. Going to a hotel and the credit card ha no limit. Easy to follow with a good flair and nice style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation and off to a good start. Always : Megan
I often wondered if trees have feelings and resentment. Nicely written details and this draws the reader in. Looks like you spent time with this. Dark and eerie and a talking bird. Priceless. A good style with good descriptions and this draws the reader in. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I like th through it in the microwave, Crockpot or oven. I don't like cooking over a stove. Grilling doesn't work fir me. My husband grills. I have never tried an Air Fryer. I have never heard of an Insta Pot. I like eating out the best or get take out. A good poll and good methods. Nice job. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews,. Nicely written details and good romantic overtures and sentiments. Well chosen words and a good scenario. Easy to follow with a good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair and blends the words together. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and they say a picture tells a story and the incident at the Funfair. No one knows who the criminals are. This holds the reader's interest. The pictures reveal the criminal and a girl who was always seeking attention did the right thing. Well rounded characters and a good presentation. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. Flying planes would be fun. I hate being a passenger. I have been inside military plane when my father flew planes in the Air Force. Good anticipation about flying the real plane and being ready. This holds the reader's attention. Good writing. Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. Writing.com is great. We do get to store our written stories and items in one place and can go back and read them over and over. Nicely written details and this is like a resume of your writing background. A good style and easy to follow. A good presentation. Happy 22 Years! Always: Megan
I am reviewing this for Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and the point of view from a book. Good descriptions and well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this. The book doesn't seem unhappy. It seems to feel comfort. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this Always: Megan
Don't you just love it, that's the way we did it back then? When I was a kid. In the good ole days. I had to smile at this. Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. Easy to follow. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sad to lose someone you love. Easy to follow and some good heartfelt feelings. Creative and colorful. We think never again after a bad romance. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Desert interlude. The desert isn't always friendly. A good style and easy to follow. Some interesting reflections. This holds the reader's interest and is creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. After losing my father, this made me think of him. Heart-warming and good reflections. We wish we could see our departed loved ones again. I know I do. A good style and easy to follow. Bittersweet memories we do have . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some why questions and they are answered well. Why does the breeze tease? Why do the clouds scurry? Why does the snow fall? Some good questions and cute answers. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Potters Field. A young woman walking in Potters Field and meets a ghost. This holds the reader's interest and draws you in. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Sad about the ghost and her family. A good presentation . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Thanking Gid and Jesus for his sweet love. Priceless. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and this is uplifting, inspiring and good words of wisdom. A good devotional and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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