Nicely written details and which bird is the greatest. Eagles. Peacock. I love seagulls. I enjoy all birds. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. I guess the greatest bird depends on who the person chooses. This is uplifting and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sails of the waves. Clouds quake. Rolling roars ripple and tore. Happy creatures. Some good reflections and descriptions. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A dedication to chocolate. Some good reflections and some good descriptions. Looks like this was fun to write. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I smiled as I read this. A cheery poem. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. With you. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures along with lovely reflections. Creative and colorful and easy to follow. Perfect prose for Valentines Day. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sweet that an old man farmer loved his peacock and the peacock loved him. Marrying a peacock. Interesting. Well rounded characters. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I am reading this on Valentines Day and I enjoyed reading this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we all know a Fritz or feel like Fritz. Fritz being picked on. At least he had you for a friend. He died young in a hunting accident. Sad. He wrote a poem with you and this is well defined. He felt like a rock and was a rock to friends. A good style and heartfelt. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is like be careful what you wish for. Magic. Dale wanted magic and wanted to steal it. He researched the internet and went outside defying magic and he was wicked away and a white plastic bag took his place. The
man was jealous of his female friends power. Looks like he got his wishe. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we sing children's songs at Church after the children's story. Children's Bible songs are cute. A good lesson about Jesus healing the blind. This holds the reader's interest. Well defined and creative. Spiritual and enlightening. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Two candles. They don't last wrong but they do their job. One candle last longer then the other. The candles make for good characters. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I wondered if they were aliens or earth people. They were on a mission it seems. Andrea didn't like Derrick ot seems. It is hard to work with someone you don't like. Teamwork gets it done. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I did enjoy reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my father went to Vietnam three times and he was never the same. We got better with each other the last twenty-five years of his life and I am thankful for that. Well defined and creative and colorful. I understand how Joe changed. He was a nice cowboy and Vietnam changed him. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Spoils of war. You did this perfectly as this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This man sounds special. Dated Marilyn Monroe? Acted in Hollywood movies Words of wisdom and advice. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus and balances this out with a good flair. Sweet sentiments for a special man. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Shadow people. We sometimes wonder if Shadows are just shadows or are something more. This is creative and colorful and easy to follow. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. Some scary elements. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A neat short passage and I haven't heard the word obtuse in years. I think I last heard the word when I went to College. This is creative and colorful. This made me smile. Comprehend. Sometimes, things and people are hard to understand. A neat rhyme pattern and well chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman doesn't want to be controlled. A man set in his ways. Just be set in your ways. Swirley Girl. I am with her. Good descriptions and a well rounded character. Jimmy Calhootee. I had to laugh at the last name. This holds the reader's interest. Jimmy needs a miracle to change his attitude. A good style and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Lost time. We can never get lost time back. Some good reflections and food for thought. A good tone and easy to follow. A neat style and good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and balances this out with a good flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and World War 2 was rough. Some good descriptions and some dark moments. Easy to follow and well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and puts them in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little boy losing his back pack. He is worried about his back pack and missing the bus. Grandma tries to help him figure out how he lost it. He says it was heavy and his kite was in it. This holds the reader's interest and the little boy remembers where he left his back pack. Cute story. Always: Megan
I can't say I love the BMV but I have had a better relationship with them over the years. Nicely written details and a good word flow. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Seems like we are always trying to find put what life means to us and it's purpose. A boy and a woman talking about life means to you. Nicely written details and food for thought. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A song of nature. Some good reflections. Neat imagery and nice descriptions. A good scenario and nice style. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ruth is a favorite with me and so is Daniel. Children can learn from this and know more about the Bible. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. A good style. This will hold a child's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A Christmas gift. A monkey playing a violin. A little girl loves it. She dreams the monkey rides crocodiles and plays in the jungle. The monkey loved his green giant home. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Cute and creative children's story. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some drama and scary aspects on Halloween. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Good descriptions of apparition, fog, misty beings and hallucinations. Well chosen words and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A fish has a hard time of things. Being caught by men, a bear or a bird. Nicely written details and a sad life for a fish. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Who is the moghtest? There is always a more powerful being, human or creature. Well defined and creative. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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