I like ghost stories especially ones that take place in an old mansion. Secrets and mysterious. I enjoyed reading what you wrote and I clicked on the link you sent for Kindle. Sounds like a good intriguing story and ghosts are them. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes husbands are beautiful and they have bad times. You will, too. You get through them together . Love is the key and God is there for us. Lovely reflections and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and I enjoyed reading this . A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Perspectives in life. Wevgo through the circle and cycle of life. Good reflections and nice views. God is with us. This is uplifting and inspiring. Easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Good presentation. Always: Megan
I only played slot machines three times and lost twenty dollars. So I said forget it. I wasn't at Las Vegas. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easy to follow and draws the reader in. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Ocean tides. Lake Michigan. The waves do get rough. Easy to follow with good action words and suspense. Ruding the crest of the wave. Neat title. The waves sneak up on a person. A good style and beautifully stated. Always: Megan
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I am not always big on news but we do need to know what is happening in the world. Making ourselves is smarter is a must. Well defined details. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and some good views. Be a smart consumer of news. I like that line. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. My father weas a Vet and I appreciated that fact later on in life. Easy to follow with a good style. Some military men and women never came back home. Sad. I bow my head and pray. A good style and well chosen words and they are heartfelt. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A zebra wanting to get hitched. I take it this isn't about a person. Easy to follow and food for thought. The zebra is trying to make her own choice about getting married. The things she wants. Good views. A Neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some heartfelt words for a special dog having a Birthday. Some well chosen words and a pet deserves a Birthday Celebration. A good scenario. Doggie games are mentioned. Cute. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A fun read. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I feel the Stock Markets should close at Noon when they start to go down too low. I am not sure if they are fair or not. A good style and easy to follow. A good scenario with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Where i live, you go twenty miles, they are an hour ahead of you. Unreal. No wonder Father Time is mad. Nicely written details and food for thought. Easy to follow and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair . A good presentation. Always: Megan
It is hard when employees quit work and you miss them. I was the oldest one at my job. When we closed down, I never saw the people again. Nicely written details and food for thought. A good style and good byes are so hard. Retirement is good. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Our hearts do pound because of being in love and also having God's love in our hearts. Some good reflections and anxious moments. A good style and looks like you spent time with this . Inspiring and uplifting. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We seem to worry about so many things in life. The world is a mess. I pray and hope for the best. Some food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this . A good presentation. Always: Megan
You have shared many sudes of Sam Adams. I always smile at his many talents. He is a fake, snake and a rake. I think i dated him. Some good reflections. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern makes the words stand out. Entertaining. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Men and women have done famous things over the years. Celtic women lead men into battle. I admire them. Some good reflections and a nice style. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful with good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A good message in this short passage. Waking to a sound. Counting sheep. Never works ot seems. I try to thibk of stories to write when I can't sleep. My spirit is abound. A good line. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I wonder if yrees do have feelings and being torn down to make buildings. I hate seeing so msy buildings in a city. You captured the emotions well. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and well defined. Always: Megan
I have to ask what Dam Adams did to the cats that made them mad. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good action words and suspense. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Good descriptions. Creative and colorful i enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and amy fathe died in November. It still hurts. My Dad has a Birthday next month. Would have. Heartfelt words. Some good memories and nice reflections. Creative. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my sister went looking for her father, my father. We met and I had been an only child. I just read your mother's story and I was touched by her story and this. A good style andvwell defined details. Some good emotions and heartfelt. Glad you have a relationship with your bio mother and adopted parents. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be hard to give your baby up for adoption. Easy to follow and sad. Sometimes, mothers aren't able to keep their babies. You can feel the emotions in this. Love doesn't always work out. A good style and glad this has a happy ending. A good presentation. Always: Megan
We do have strange dreams. I worked in mental health and felt like I needed to see a Therapist. Easy to follow and rabid dogs crashing through your door in a dream. Scary. Good descriptions and good suspense and drama. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Trees are interesting. Nicely written details with lovely reflections. A good choice of words. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and an oak tree is nice. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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