Nicely written details and we can compare our life to a lighthouse and a path and lighting the way on any of our journeys. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections and this draws the reader in. Well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written and we can get news on the internet so we can always be informed. The little boy thinking clips meant getting clipped. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The little boy learned about technology. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a elderly lady gets to go back to Hamburg and things have changed but her memories didn't. Good characters and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. Going back to a place with bad memories would be hard. Well defined and creative. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It would be nice if we could write letters to people who discovered lands and all the things that happened centuries later. Maybe things would have happened differently. Some food for thought. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good scenario. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it would be nice if planets were religious. I guess I had never thought of it before. Some food for thought and a good idea. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening as well as spiritual. Well rounded characters and a decision was made. A good style and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Children going to school and being happy. Some children being abused and bullied. Children should enjoy their childhood. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some people do make a difference in our life. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. We think of writing about heroes and we find out some heroes are unknown and local. Those are the best kind. Easy to follow and heartwarming. A good presentation. Always: Megan
It is good to have today. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Love. Enjoy the day. River flows. Clouds drift by. Some good reflections. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative. A good scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do a lot of waiting. Wait for forgiveness in love. The morning mist dances. A stage of pastoral hues. Winds of passion. Some good reflections. Some well chosen words. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and cats are our friends. I have one I love dearly and I love all cats. Dogs. Yes. They are loyal. Yellow bird in the spring. They are pretty. They do sing well. Some good reflections and this is creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young girl discovers her grandmother is an elf. Or was. Neat. Hopefully, her grandmother wasn't an evil elf. I appreciate that this holds the reader's interest. A good character. Creative and colorful and I hope to read more. What secrets does the book hold? A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The creator made the world and it is beautiful. Some good reflections and this is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A poem I didn't write. It is nice to read poems and wish you would have written it. Some good reflections. Love makes for a good poem. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Shattered ice. Sometimes, life is like that. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections and some nice memories. Creative and colorful with a nice style. Well chosen words . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the first day on the job is important. Watch your step. This poor woman fells. She thought there was a window. Hopefully, people helped her get up. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good scenario and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Some people go through a lot and we keep going foward in spite of things. Most things do get better. You are right. There is a lot of sadness in the world. Looks like you put some thought into this. A good style and studying people. I have done that. I appreciate your views which are well written. Always: Megan
I make cakes from boxes and never baked a pie in my life except chocolate creme and I bought the crust already made. We do have great expectations in life and sometimes we do things until we get it right. Looks like the pie baking thing worked out. This was well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a dog can save a person like in war time or after an injury. This is heartwarming and sad that the dog was given up. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful and well defined. A good style and nice presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I seem to be finding your items today. My Dad flew C130s and bought bodies home from the war. I loved seeing C130s. Nicely written details and homecoming are sad. Some good descriptions and Dad was a flight engineer. I thought about him as I read this. Creative and well defined. I salute you and all military men. Always: Megan
I am finding your items tonight. A lost relative comes home. Santa Claus or a relative like Santa Claus? Heartwarming and some well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A mystery here. Looks like you spent time with this.
A happy endin. A good scenario and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and horses have done our work and bidding for years. I sometimes feel for horses but owners love them. Some horses are wild. These horses ran away. This holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue from the horses. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Clash. Our hearts do clash in a romance. Some good reflections and some sad ones. Well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and traveling to another planet and being curious about the aliens who live there. Good characters and suitable character names for aliens. Looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Neat fantasy elements. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes parents are uncaring and just tolerate the child. They believe every bad thing said about the child. That makes it hard for a child as an adult to love and trust others. Some good storytelling and this holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I used to love NASCAR and I would never be able to drive that fast and not wreck. The thrill of the race. Some good action words and looks like you spent time
with this. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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