Nicely written details and it does seem like ants are marching on our lives making us miserable. Red ants. Yikes. Some bad reflections and this is well defined. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and a good style and nice presentation. I appreciate the scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good scenarios. A little boy thinks a dog would keep the neighborhood from getting robbed. A realtor doesn't want to sell the house at a cheaper price. An employee would rather be home watching Gone With The Wind. These are well written and a good writing exercise. Always: Megan
This reminds me if Swan Lake with Natalie Portman and Mulina when the ballerina turned into a swan. Cute and I appreciate the humor in this. Looks like this was fun to write. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is sad when houses are abandoned and are in despair. Houses get old like people. Food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections and some sad ones. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Everyone hurts and has problems bothering them. Sometimes they can't sleep because of it. Easy to follow with food for thought. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Red can mean blood. Red is pretty for a dress. A bottle of wine. Apple or strawberry. Some good sentiments about the color red. Looks like you spent time with this. Good reflections. A nice style. This is lively and well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Autumn leaves and a faithful gardener and a faithful tree. Some good reflections. Neat imagery and a good scenario. A neat style. This is heartwarming. A good presentation. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I had a couple of boyfriends like this. Good descriptions and a nice style. A good scenario. Creative and well defined. A neat rhyme pattern evens this out and sums this up with a good flair. Some interesting reflections. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and step by step instructions. Looks like you researched this and have had experience with this. I used to knit but that was over forty years ago. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good guide to anyone wanting to learn this trade. Well presented and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I not big on sports but I used to love NASCAR until my favorite drivers left. Athletes work hard and if it makes them happy. Nicely written details and a good style. You gave good reasons about why you support the sport and why the athletes love doing this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Mountain tip. The fresh air. Bears. Birds. This holds the reader's interest. Some good reflections. A neat scenario and good style. A cute rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I have heard of people arguing over fence lines in their yards. Looks like this worked out. Some good action. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. It is sad when pets die. Birds. Dogs. Cats. Two birds thar were friends. Well defined and I felt sad when the bird died. Good characters. A nice style. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and which bird is the greatest. Eagles. Peacock. I love seagulls. I enjoy all birds. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. I guess the greatest bird depends on who the person chooses. This is uplifting and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sails of the waves. Clouds quake. Rolling roars ripple and tore. Happy creatures. Some good reflections and descriptions. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
A dedication to chocolate. Some good reflections and some good descriptions. Looks like this was fun to write. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I smiled as I read this. A cheery poem. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. With you. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures along with lovely reflections. Creative and colorful and easy to follow. Perfect prose for Valentines Day. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is sweet that an old man farmer loved his peacock and the peacock loved him. Marrying a peacock. Interesting. Well rounded characters. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I am reading this on Valentines Day and I enjoyed reading this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we all know a Fritz or feel like Fritz. Fritz being picked on. At least he had you for a friend. He died young in a hunting accident. Sad. He wrote a poem with you and this is well defined. He felt like a rock and was a rock to friends. A good style and heartfelt. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is like be careful what you wish for. Magic. Dale wanted magic and wanted to steal it. He researched the internet and went outside defying magic and he was wicked away and a white plastic bag took his place. The
man was jealous of his female friends power. Looks like he got his wishe. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we sing children's songs at Church after the children's story. Children's Bible songs are cute. A good lesson about Jesus healing the blind. This holds the reader's interest. Well defined and creative. Spiritual and enlightening. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Two candles. They don't last wrong but they do their job. One candle last longer then the other. The candles make for good characters. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I wondered if they were aliens or earth people. They were on a mission it seems. Andrea didn't like Derrick ot seems. It is hard to work with someone you don't like. Teamwork gets it done. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I did enjoy reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my father went to Vietnam three times and he was never the same. We got better with each other the last twenty-five years of his life and I am thankful for that. Well defined and creative and colorful. I understand how Joe changed. He was a nice cowboy and Vietnam changed him. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Spoils of war. You did this perfectly as this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This man sounds special. Dated Marilyn Monroe? Acted in Hollywood movies Words of wisdom and advice. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus and balances this out with a good flair. Sweet sentiments for a special man. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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