Nicely written details and baby shark fishing. Scary and dangerous and having scars. Scars on wrists do look like suicide attempts. I used to work in mental health and dealed with this a lot. The Army thinking the worse. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. Quite a fish story but we'll defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Life isn't always kind and this is explained in this passage. Seeking a calm world . Hoping for better. We do need well deserved justice. Food for thought. This is uplifting. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and puts them in focus and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a kid has to be home early and wonders what their parents are upto leaving early. They are hiding something. The mother says it is about a Birthday party. Birthday parties are secretive. I appreciate the humor in this and what gives. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some parents don't know when their kids are on the computer interacting with people who are bad news. So sad. My friend luckily stopped her daughter from meeting a 45 year old con man. Creative and well defined. A good style and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. 23 cows. They have fun in a chat room. Cute. Meeting a potential groom. Friendship and romance. Sounds like quite a gathering. A good style and this holds the reader's attention. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and everything about Paranormal you wanted to know but we're afraid to ask. Vampires. Werewolves. Shapeshifters. I love vampires and werewolves. Looks like you researched this and used your imagination. A good style and easy to follow. Well rounded characters. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A wise lion. A good style. A neat scenario. Good lines and food for thought. Looks like you spent time with this. I was in tune with this. Creative and colorful. Outstanding writing. We are getting scared in life. A beautiful scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Don's song. A labored breeze. Stately ripples. A pond. Waters like glass. Age old playwright. Vikings. A variety of elements and reflections. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Tornadoes ate never nice and they are scary. I hate when the tornado warnings sirens blow. You described Tornadoes well and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Good imagery and nice descriptions. A neat scenario. A good style. This draws the reader in. Curtain call. Those are always nice. The words blend well and gives this a good flair. I love the reflections in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Spellbound. An interesting spell. Some well chosen words. A forced love is never real. Some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together, puts them in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Crepuscular mosaic. Creative concept.
A good description in itself. Some colorful words. Looks like you spent time with this. A good use of colors in this poem. A neat style and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hope my medicine cabinet doesn't talk to me. Like my medicines. Side effects are bad enough. Matilda talking to the Millicent character. Cute. Creative and colorful. I appreciate the humor in this. A good style and nice scenario. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I received a letter saying someone hecked in the computer system and took my nursing license staus but it got straightened out. A sticky situation. Well defined and food for thought. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Thanks for the warning. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I rode on a train three times. From Maryland to Indiana. I remember the smell of the train and it wasn't a fancy train back in 1965. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Some good descriptions. Well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
Some good descriptions about a fancy house and garden. Interesting characters. A funeral that seems like a dinner party. Creative and colorful. The family ignored his son. Seems like a cold situation and people putting on airs. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
This is interesting but I would like to see more of the dragons story line unless I am missing something. Good characters and I have never watched How To Train Your Dragon but I am missing something it seems. A busy council. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and trees can't talk but they see things. Easy to follow and this tells the story of a old lonely man. Creative and colorful.
Heartwarming but sad and yet there are some good reflections. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and parents getting divorced no matter how old you are would be rough. This ten year old boy thinking someday he could marry the girl he had a crush on and it would be good. We want good things at any age. We'll rounded characters. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Medieval times. Nicely written details and how embarrassing for men to produce their seed in front of everyone. The seeds are mixed together like a chemistry experiment and the woman gets pregnant. The devil is in the details. The man the young woman cares for wants them to be together and do the love making thing. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful and this holds the reader's interest. Glad the couple want to do this the way it should be. A good presentation. Every detail is included. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the IS always win it seems. The person works one day and owes the IRS money and it like really? The IRS has an answer for everything. Why argue about $5.43? I appreciate the humor in this and looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good style. A good journey. Some good reflections. This is inspiring and uplifting. Looks like you spent time with this. A love beyond. Some neat romantic sentiments and overtures. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Words to live by. A gift for my friend. A gift from God. Flying like a free bird. A man and his family. A new journey. Creative and colorful. This is uplifting and enlightening. A neat rhyme pattern plays out nicely and gives this a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some people fund some comedians funny and I am like what? I love old comedy shows. Thus is my entertainment. Like Saturday Night Live. It was funny years ago . I understand the wife's point of view in this story. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I seem to be finding your items today. You keep notes of things you are writing about. Me, too. I have a file of things I have written about. It's a mess. I know what you mean. This is well defined and holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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