Nicely written details and a kid putting a dog in the dryer. He needs a spanking. No TV and Video Games will do it for him. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. The mother says there are rules. Good dialogue. Poor dog avoided the dryer on the way out the door. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
I knew a jerk boy in high school who deserved the jam trick. Nicely written details and suitable dialogue with well rounded characters. Sometimes ww do have to stick together. I smiled as I read this. A good style. Creative and colorful . I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Waves. Gotta love the ocean. Easy to follow. Good descriptions. Some lovely reflections. I can see the ocean waves in my mind. This holds the reader's interest. Well chosen words and a good presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and dark eerie overtones. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue this draws the reader in. The dark girl taking Mara and the power of the locket. The boys are being haunted by the bad ghost. Creative and a good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and photos age like we do. Crinkled photos. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario. Finding hope and peace. This holds the reader's interest. Make memories. You will find peace. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. An ambush bug. Good descriptions and easy to follow. Birds know this bug. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with. Creative and colorful. A spainard fancies himself French. A good call. I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Birds do fight as well. Good descriptions. A good choice of words. I like that you included a lot of birds. I like ravens. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good fantasy land if womwn with flowers and being in the woods. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue with good imagery. Good reflections. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Owing fifty bucks for sneakers after ruining them with paint. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed the humor in this. Watching a Dragon Marathon. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is creative and colorful with well chosen words and a good style. Lavender sky, That I like. Golden sunset. Pastel pink. Horizon beautiful. I like these lines. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and the man was at the wrong place, wrong time and got set up. He is making a fresh start and the young woman understands. He is being honest about his six months in prison. Well rounded characters and sounds like the start of a romance. This gets the reader's interest. Good presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and one Halloween, a kid gave me a card and said it was a trick. I asked what the card meant. He said it's a card. The man gives the kid all the candy and the kid isn't really a kid. He is from Mars and he and his friends do Halloween every year. This is entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I think we all have an inner voice telling us what to do and what not to do. Sometimes, I hear my grandmother's voice. A good style and easy to follow with good advice. It is always nice to write our thoughts out. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and going through Nebraska and Oklahoma on a bus. Bus trips are boring and would be hot. That was sweet giving the ice cream to the dog. She was old and deserved it. Good descriptions and easy to follow. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and alofe is a journey it seems. Looking at the stars. Be kind and free sounds good. Some good reflections and a nice scenario. This is cheery and holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a it is hard to find a travel agent and sometimes it sounds too good to be true. A gap in the map. Good call. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A man whose last name is Dooper. I once knew a guy named Dooper but spelled differently. Easy to follow with a good style. The guy because super. I appreciate the humor in this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Thinking about someone we love is a favorite past time. Some good reflections and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Some good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a kid doesn't want to study history and doesn't think that it is important. Mention Video Games being no longer and would it be worth fighting over, the little boy is studying history then. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue, I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do our best to be a good mother. We always wonder what could we have done differently. Some good reflections and a nice style. A rhyme pattern is hidden. It plays out well. Looks like you put some thought into this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Jesus made a sacrifice by being crucified. Easy to follow and this is uplifting and inspiring. It is always nice to be reminded of God and Jesus's love for us. Looks like you spent time with this. I always enjoy your words of wisdom. Always: Megan
I saw a man at Church wearing glasses and had God on my mind and I thought that must be God. I think of him when I hear God. Maybe he looks like Jesus. I always wish and still wish God and Jesus could sit with me on my couch. Nicely written details and we could never learn too much about God. This holds the reader's interest. Good writing. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and sorry your son got stuck in a tank. Oouch. Parademics helped and firetrucks were there. Quite a drama. Easy to follow. Good drama and suspense. This holds the reader's interest counts as an adventure. Glad this had a happy ending. Good presentation. Always: Megan
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I like ghost stories especially ones that take place in an old mansion. Secrets and mysterious. I enjoyed reading what you wrote and I clicked on the link you sent for Kindle. Sounds like a good intriguing story and ghosts are them. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes husbands are beautiful and they have bad times. You will, too. You get through them together . Love is the key and God is there for us. Lovely reflections and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and I enjoyed reading this . A good presentation. Always: Megan
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