Wow! You have a very wonderful place here Diane!! I have read each one and all full of emotion and so heartfelt. You really do have a way with words and it has touched my heart!
Sometimes you just never know how life is gonna turn out but we all have choices to make good or bad... Keep writing
My Thought: I love this!! You are really very talented and have such a timing matter with your words and a great eye for detail ~excellent~ You are very creative, clever, and charming! I love the little boys reaction, just like a little child would and how about that reckless government spending we are paying for so it seems!!
My Favorite Part: I love the whole thing from beginning to end!!
My Thoughts: Ohhh I love this concept! You are clever, creative, charming, and very talented and you really have a way with words! And you have a keen eye for details!
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed this whole story from beginning to end
My Thought: Wow! This is a very interesting story! You are very talented, creative, and clever as you have a great eye for details ~Excellent ~ You are a wonderful story teller as well.. Since the sun shines on ya once again is there more to tell?
Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end!
My Thought: WOW!! You have a really great place here!! You are really talented to, very creative and clever as you have away with words and a very keen eye for details.
My Thought: What an excellent place you have here. Very creative as you weave your words wrapping us in and taking our breath! You have such away with words and a great eye for details!! I love everything in this folder
This is a wonderful place that you have here all about friends and they are all really good! You do have a way with words! Thank you so much for sharing
My Thought: WOW!! This is heartfelt, honest and true.. Thank you for sharing!
Favorite Part: "I am God's creation, how dare you hurt me. You have no business being around me. I rebuke you in the name of JESUS! And command you to leave me alone."
Satan ran away. I have not had a seizure since rebuking him in the name of Jesus.
My Thought: This is really good. You are a pretty good story teller as you weave your words and get your readers wrapped up all in it and a great eye for detail!!
Favorite Part: I owe her too; she’s sure made my menu interesting! She displayed a thick recycled-paper card of pale green that had some really innovative names. Gone were Meg’s famous 'Fish Fingers’, she now had “Plaice Mats” and “Sage Salmon”. My inquiring eyebrows were nearing my hairline when Meg explained that fingers might not be what people would picture as a pleasant thing to eat. This was a bit of Nanni-wisdom; even the finger-chips were now “Tater Straws”. Customers liked the ‘green’ paper and were manoeuvred into trying old food in new guise.
My Thought: This is really good. You do have a way with words
Favorite Part: Instinct impels one to rise up and hold, A rustle of lace and well known scent,
Warm, caring arms are there to enfold, And banish all those fiends hell-bent. “It’s mother dear, I’ve brought a light I’ll tuck you in and say Good-night.”
My Thought: Great quote! You have a way with words and a keen eye for details!
Favorite Part: A sniff and averted face told me she was going to drag this out, I’ll oblige you dear, but you are going to be surprised. Parts of this made me laugh right out loud!
I really am, I should not have misled you like that. Litchis are nothing like frog’s kidneys.
Errors: None
Suggestions: Keep writing!!
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