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How did it make me feel? Happy What drew me in? Rain Falls like little stars What hooked me? You are my heart and soul What I like about it? Your love gives me wings to fly What I didn't like about it? There is nothing that I didn't like
Favorite Part: Your love gives me wings to fly
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This is a really awesome folder that you have here! I especially liked the articles on all of your review formats very detail information and very helpful! I love the concept of the Chatterbox Review and I love that name! Great Sigs you have in here as well. Great ideal for nominating your favorite author as well! Thank you so much for this wonderful place
Great ideal! Cleverly written making it rhyme and creative as well with a twist of truth thrown in! My favorite lines in this poem are this: "But Sunday when you rage at sin" Remember how you twist within" That just stood out to me. Thank you for sharing and keep writing
This is an excellent place you have here Sherri It is great to be loved and have all the wonderful friends you have
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Megan, This is an awesome place you have here and the images are wonderful to
You have such a way with words, and very keen eye for details and you really do have a way with words! And you really have a way of telling stories and your right not all live happily ever after! I use to wonder what happened after happily ever after! *lol* and by the way I play a Princess to
This is really good and one that comes from the heart, I do agree "There is never a reason to hurt a child". I also like the question you ask in here, " Don't you remember"?
The wounds may never heal is a truth in many ways!!
You have such a way with words and I see lots of talent in you!
Thank you so much for sharing this with me and asking me to review it
I love the way you start this poem Fighting for you and the land of the free and it really comes from the heart and the ending is awesome as you said "My friends do not sorrow for me for I will be in heaven watching over you and the land of the free" I love this! You have a lot of talent
Thank you so much for sharing this with me and asking me to review it
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