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Review of The Rose  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My Thought: Wow! Very creative and cleverly written as it was well thought out.

Favorite Part: The very last two paragraphs! Wow!! I can picture that smile you must of seen!!

Errors: Not a one!!

Suggestions: Write on, Write on, Write on!!

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Review of Peace Be With You  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thought:

Favorite Part: Just keep this piece, of my now broken heart and lay it next to the hollow wound.

Errors: One question: at the end you put Piece should that be peace?

Suggestions: Keep Writing

My rating: 4.0 ~nice job!! ~


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Review of Pirates Treasures  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thoughts: This is a wonderful and packed with short stories and siggies! I have enjoyed reading your pirate stories very creative and well thought out

Favorite Part: Pirate stories, Captain Jack Sparrow, pirate sigs and anything about pirates is here, Matey! and of course I love all three of those sigs at the very top!

Errors: Not a one!

Suggestions: Write On!!!

My Rating: 5.0 Excellent!

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Review of The Learning Tree  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Thoughts: WOW! This is awesome pack with all kinds of goodies and very creative and well thought out and most helpful

Favorite Part: First I have to say I love it all but that siggie just steals the show and those merit badges bring it even more life! And every piece in here is well thought out and most helpful.

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Keep doing all the wonderful things you do and Write on!!!

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I have a question: May I add this to my sunnystarr corner?
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Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: A wonderful heartfelt, honest, sincere place you have here! I love all the sigs you have in here can't wait to see the whole simpson family sigs you will be adding! Cute the one you have already.

Favorite: I love people that open up and share there thoughts, lives, and what ever else they may choose. Great Job and best of luck!

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Keep Writing!!!

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Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Thoughts: Love the title: Welcome to my world and it is full of wonderful folders here all of which is really good.

My favorite: Everything you wrote just above the folders below like the first line to the very end. You are funny and charming, creative and this was really thought out which is what I like most of all!

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Write On!!!

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Review of The Walk  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: A very nice poem. Well thought out and an easy flow.

My Favorite:Wandering thoughts traveled to whom I might meet, what sights of nature I would be blessed to see. and, Serene setting lifts my spirit to praise, surrounded by God’s miracles everywhere.

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Write on

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: What an awesome place you have here and I love the title, that was very creative and clever/

Favorite Part: each folder is pack with something about the Enchanted Forest and I also love all the information you wrote just at above all your folders making this a warm and welcoming place you have here

Errors: Not a one!

Sugguestions: Write on!!!

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thought: This is wonderful and very informational, as well as helpful. The reason are easy enough

Favorite Part: The challenges, which are very creative and cleverly well thought out!

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Keep doing all the wonderful things that you are doing!

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Review of Childhood Story  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thoughts: A pretty good story

Favorite Part: Little Miss Muppet, Nan had affectionately called me that since I could remember along with Chatterbox and Goldilocks.

Errors: None, that I see...

Suggestions: Write On

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Review of A Second Sight  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A really sweet short story you have here! You have a way with words and a good eye for details... Great Job! Write On

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very informational... I just could not picture prisons being closed... Thank you for sharing this!

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Review of Spirit of Faith  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
What an awesome folder you have here! Excellent title, Spirit of Faith!

You are very talented and do have away with words and a keen eye for details.

Thank you so much for sharing all of these!!

Write on, write on, write on!!!

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Review of Poem #2  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thoughts: This is a pretty sweet poem.

Favorite Part: Down and snap the hollow twig, lest death befall on thee and thine

Errors:seel should be seal ~ in your last paragraph, third line. also in my favorite part, lest should be least or am I saying it wrong?

Suggestions: Keep writing!!!

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Review of Revenge  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Thoughts: You are a pretty good story teller as you have a way with words and a keen eye for detail...

Favorite Part: His voice was filled with new found enthusiasm and love of life.

Errors: I saw none.

Suggestions: Keep Writing!!

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Review of Rosalie  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Sad and heartbroken as you do have a way with words and a great eye for detail!

Errors: Did you mean to say: and didn't know to do or say... or is there a word missing?

Suggestions: Write on!!!



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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thought: How sweet! It made me laugh out loud!!

Favorite Part: I'll be with you darling, through all eternity.

Errors: Not a one

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review of Off the Ground  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thought: Full of emotion!

Favorite Part: I fell away from the world, away from myself!!

Errors: Not a one.

Suggestions: Keep writing!!


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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Awwww how sweet! Very heartfelt and proud Mom I see, you have a way with words and have a keen eye for details!

Favorite Part: All I do is think about you those 8 hours I'm not there

Errors: None that I see.

Suggestions: Write on!


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Review of Ghost of Me  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thought: Wow! This is really good, clever and very creative! As you do have a way with words

Favorite Part: You have the ghost of me! and It walks the paths, that we once walked, and lives the life, that we will not!

Errors: Not a one!

Suggestions: Write on!

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Review of Waiting  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: A nice poem

Favorite Part: I sat outside, watching the brown and green leaves fall, the wind hitting my cheek, the tingling of the brisk air on my nose.

Errors: Not a one

Suggestions: Write on@

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Review of Love for Him  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Very creative, crystal clear, heartfelt, honest, and sincere.

Favorite Part: My heart is forever true.

Errors: None that I see.

Suggestions: Write on!!

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Review of The Liar  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thought: Awesome... Honest, open, sincere, and heartfelt!

Favorite Part: Your life is ruled by charming betrayal. and My trust and faith in truer friends
Shows me love and I can mend.

Errors: Not a one...

Suggestions: Write on!!!

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
How adorable! You have a way with words and have a good eye for detail! Great Job

In this paragrah: He taught to love Sunday School. Is there a word missing?

Favorite Part: He taught me of a Savior. He taught me of a Savior. Who now is my Lord.

Suggestions: Write on!!!

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Review of Home  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful web page you have here

Great Job!

Thank you for all the wonderful things you do!!

Keep'em up *Smile*

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