I love your place here and I am happy to say I am part of the brainstormers and your right it is an awesome group I also like your journal you have here
I think you have a wonderful place here and it is creative, and you get to know things about others as well. Looks like it was well thought out and a unique place as well.
I enjoyed it as I looked all through it. A really nice and enjoying place!
My Thoughts: What a really cool story you have created here, very clever, unique and you reeled me in right from the start and that makes you talented! I also love the signature / image you have at the top of your story, it really fits very well.
Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end.
Errors: I did not see any errors.
Suggestions: Keep writing and being unique and creative!
My Thoughts: Very interesting poem and one I enjoyed very much! And the title fits your poem nicely.
Favorite Part: Even though I enjoyed your poem from beginning to end here is what stuck out at me: She faked a smile everyday. Deep down inside she knew, She wasn’t okay. and one more line: She fools all, including herself. These are the three lines that stood out to me!
Wow Gurl you still got that gift Writing from not only the mind and heart but that soul as well. Very touching and I could not only feel it but I could see it
Excellent, excellent writing. Please keep writing and sharing more
Just My Thoughts: }A very interesting poll on "manic-depression," but is now called "bipolar disorder.
I have known of people of this disorder and have been around people with this disorder and if they take their meds they are better than without their meds! They can be moody, unpredictable. But who is not, I mean really? And don't we all have bad days and good days?
My Thoughts:What a creative, unique, one of a kind place you here have here. I love the way you break everything down and you make it very welcoming , inviting, easy and simple enough to not only follow but understand. You ever throw in two examples of how a review may go down and look like!
Thank you how for having such an awesome place. I have added this to my favorites and I will be adding this to my sunnystarr corner as well, right after I send this to you!
Keep the creativity and reviewing soaring and flowing
My Thoughts:Thank you for the update and letting me know that you revises this and I like the fact that you post a note at the very top of your revised version here which adds a nice touch! You are very creative and have painted a picture that I can clearly see.
My Favorite Parts or Lines: The panic is setting in. It's getting harder and harder to write. Will anyone remember me when I'm gone? This isn't death. Whatever this is, it's worse.
My Thoughts: Wow! What an awesome place you have here! And y'all really do a lot too!! Very creative, unique, clever, well thought out and a one of a kind wonderful kind wonderful place you have here!
My Favorite Part: Everything!
Suggestions: Keep doing all the wonderful things that you are doing
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