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Review of LOTS OF WORDS  Open in new Window.
for entry "Brainstormers" Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love your place here and I am happy to say I am part of the brainstormers and your right it is an awesome group *Smile* I also like your journal you have here *Heart*

Keep writing!!
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Review of Master  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Interesting. You do have a way with words. Although there seems to be no puncuation I still like the way it flows.

My Favorite Part: Are the very last two lines, they really stuck out to me. Great job!

Errors: I seen on miss spelling at all.

Suggestions: Keep Writing!

My Rating: 4.5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you have a wonderful place here and it is creative, and you get to know things about others as well. Looks like it was well thought out and a unique place as well.

I enjoyed it as I looked all through it. A really nice and enjoying place!

Keep doing all the good things you are doing!

My rating: FIVE *Star*'s

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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Thoughts: What a really cool story you have created here, very clever, unique and you reeled me in right from the start and that makes you talented! I also love the signature / image you have at the top of your story, it really fits very well.

Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing and being unique and creative!

My Rating: 4.5 *Stary* 's

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Review of Halloween  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: I like your Chronos poem. Very nice for your first attempt! I really enjoyed it and I could picture the scene as Autumn smells in the air *Smile*

Favorite Part: The whole thing, from beginning to end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep on writing and being creative!

My Rating: 4.5 *Staro*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very entertaining, clever, unique, funny and well thought out!

Keep writing and being creative

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Review of A Lesson In Less  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thought: A lesson in less, very cleverly and creative.

Favorite Line: The numberless days of a slumberless agony.

Errors:could use some commas and periods in it

Suggestions: Keep writing and being creative!

My Rating: 3.5 *Staro*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you so much for sharing and I enjoyed the memories you shared before the recipes which both sound yummy!
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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A very awesome group you have here! Keep doing all the good and wonderful things that you do *Heart*
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Review of Her Secret  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Very interesting poem and one I enjoyed very much! And the title fits your poem nicely.

Favorite Part: Even though I enjoyed your poem from beginning to end here is what stuck out at me: She faked a smile everyday. Deep down inside she knew, She wasn’t okay. and one more line: She fools all, including herself. These are the three lines that stood out to me!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep on writing and sharing!

My Rating: 4.5 *Starbr*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thoughts: I really like your poem! Good title too: As Luck Would Have It

Favorite Part: As luck would have it, I have no luck at all and Maybe just maybe luck will become my friend. I really liked these two lines *Smile*

Errors: I did not see any errors

Suggestions: Keep writing!

My Rating: 3.5 *Staro*'s

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for entry "9-24-2012" Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
How sweet *Smile* Sounds nice *Bursto*
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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow Gurl you still got that gift *Heart* Writing from not only the mind and heart but that soul as well. Very touching and I could not only feel it but I could see it *Heart*
Excellent, excellent writing. Please keep writing and sharing more *Heart*

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Review of the perfect man  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A beauty poem indeed Jesssie but in the fourth line:
Before you were for put on this earth i loved you.

before you were for put on this earth I loved you/

The word for I underlined shoud not be there *Smile*

I love this poem gurl... I hope you continue to write just as you always have.

Nothing like a special poem for your son *Heart* I know you will teach him all the things he will need to know and so much more *Heart*

Thanks for letting me be a part of your life, your writings, and for a good solid friendship which you are more like family just so ya know *Heart*
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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Just My Thoughts: }A very interesting poll on "manic-depression," but is now called "bipolar disorder.

I have known of people of this disorder and have been around people with this disorder and if they take their meds they are better than without their meds! They can be moody, unpredictable. But who is not, I mean really? And don't we all have bad days and good days?

My Favorite Part: Is your Noteworthy Bipolars

Error: I saw no errors, good job!

My Rating: 4.5 *Star*'s

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Review of I Am Not a Hero  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My thoughts: A very enjoyable read, creative, clever, unique, one of a kind and eventful.

My Favorite Part(s): Is you note above before the story, although I did enjoy your whole story from beginning to end and do look forward to more!

Errors: I did not see any errors, good job!

Suggestions: Keep the motion of your creativity, keep your creative soaring, flowing,and going *Smile*

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
My Thoughts:What a creative, unique, one of a kind place you here have here. I love the way you break everything down and you make it very welcoming , inviting, easy and simple enough to not only follow but understand. You ever throw in two examples of how a review may go down and look like!

Thank you how for having such an awesome place. I have added this to my favorites and I will be adding this to my sunnystarr corner as well, right after I send this to you!

Keep the creativity and reviewing soaring and flowing

I rate the awesome place: FIVE *Star*'s

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Review of Fade Away  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My Thoughts:Thank you for the update and letting me know that you revises this and I like the fact that you post a note at the very top of your revised version here which adds a nice touch! You are very creative and have painted a picture that I can clearly see.

My Favorite Parts or Lines: The panic is setting in. It's getting harder and harder to write. Will anyone remember me when I'm gone? This isn't death. Whatever this is, it's worse.

That just stood out to me is all I can say!

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Clever very clever, unique, creative, well thought out and a one of a kind poem you have here *Smile* I even found my self laughing a few times

My Favorite Parts or Lines: I completely enjoyed this whole poem from beginning to the end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep Writing and keep that clever creativity soaring! You may also like to check out : "Noticing Newbies" Open in new Window. and "Newbies Corner" Open in new Window.

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thoughts: Wow! What an awesome place you have here! And y'all really do a lot too!! Very creative, unique, clever, well thought out and a one of a kind wonderful kind wonderful place you have here!

My Favorite Part: Everything!

Suggestions: Keep doing all the wonderful things that you are doing *Heart*

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review of Your Today  Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: A creative, charming well thought out poem you have here

My Favorite Parts or Lines: By merely going back in time to change events that have gone by. and I also like the whole second paragraph!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing and keep the creativity going.

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: You have a great place here, very creative, clever, unique, a one of a kind place here and you made me feel welcomed *Smile*

My Favorite Parts of Lines: I like your whole lay out from beginning to end and your picture is a nice personal touch too *Smile*

Errors: No errors did I see.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing.

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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for entry "1-9-2012" Open in new Window.
Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thought: Great place you have here! Very create, unique, one of a kind and makes me feel welcomed.

My Favorite Parts or lines: You lay out from beginning to end.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thought: Wow! What an awesome place you have here well so far! Very creative, clever, unique, and you make me feel welcome in here too *Smile*

My Favorite Parts or Lines: I love your whole lay out from the beginning to the end.

By the way I do hope your back is better!

Errors: I did not see any errors at all.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing!

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: Wow! What a very creative, clever, unique, one of a kind, make you fell welcome blog you have here!

My Favorite Parts or Lines: Is your whole set up, I totally love the whole set up from beginning to end!

Errors: I did not find any error at all.

Suggestions: Keep your creativity in motion, soaring, going, and flowing!!

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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