What a wonderful place you have here. It is clever, creative, unique, a one of a kind for sure.
Love the way you have you lay out. Your rules are simple enough and easy enough to understand and follow. Your prizes are more than generous. Love the prompts you have for this round. A Matter Of Trust!
My Thoughts: A very creative and thought out little place you have here. I like the way you think and really good questions too!
My favorites: Although I enjoy all of them these two are my favorites: If someone gets addicted to counseling..how do you treat them?
and How do you know when you run out of invisible ink?
Errors: I did not see any errors
Suggestions: Write on and keep bringing on these good questions to think about!
My Thoughts: Wow! Very creative, clever, unique, a one of a kind and well thought out. I really enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. You really do have away with words.
My Favorite Part: I have two favorite lines and they really just stood out to me:
My heart is dislodged from it's comfortable place of knowing what to say. and
My words feel awkward, clumsy in my mind. No way to query further without doing more damage.
I so love the way you written. You are so talented and have a way with words and you know just how to weave your readers in and yet leave me wanting more and more. Keep writing and sharing. I love your stories here so much!
My Thought: Wow! You are very creative, and this contest is not only unique and one of a kind it is also well thought out and clever indeed. Your rules are simple and your prizes are very generous.
Favorite Part: The description of each of your three children!
My Thoughts: You have some really good goals in your place here. I like that you share your first blog and invited us to come visit. I like your guestbook forum and your two polls too. I am pretty sure I have signed your guestbook and I also took both your polls! I also like all your images. And I have enjoyed your entries too! You are very talented Keep writing...
My Thoughts: This is such a wonderful and heartfelt ideal, very creative, unique and one of a kind! Letters From Home For Christmas how every touching and fills my heart to no end. I am so thankful all all of them as they protect us all
I also like how you break it into four parts and it is the most awesome thing that we can all do for Christmas and I also like that your contest will be judged on spelling, grammar, punctuation and content!
My thoughts: You are creative, as you weaver your words to spin me in right from the start! And that makes it clever.
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed your story from the beginning to the end, I must admit that this line alone drew me in: Who knows what happens in the darkness when the sun goes beyond the distant horizon? I mean that really did get my attention and I was hooked! I also loved the way you painted that picture at the grave site too.
My Thought: Very well written as you weave your words so carefully as you spin them weaving me in so cleverly. Heartfelt, raw, open, and well thought out!
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end, paragraph four really stood out to me and in some kind of way reveals the writer's heart of this poem.
Errors: I did not see any errors.
Suggestions: Keep writing with such a deep heart and soul.
My Thoughts: Very enjoyable poem that you have here. Clever and unique as you weave your words to spin me in!
Favorite Part: The words keep falling easily, like autumn leaves-- we talk so much and say so little. and this last part: I am alone-- once again, I learn to breathe... because it's been so long, but even so, I caught myself dreaming of you again...
These parts just really moved me and jump out at me! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem!
My Thoughts:What a nice poem you have. The first paragraph got my attention but the second paragraph is my favorite part of all, although I did enjoy it all as you spun your words weaving me in, very clever indeed. A nice rhyme as well. It is unique and a one of a kind.
My Thoughts: Wow! A very creative poem as you weave your webs of words and you draw me in! A clever poem full deep emotion indeed.
Favorite Part(s): God gave me the earth, the sun and the moon and My soul I poured into it, growing it mighty and strong, until it soared ever higher and it's rays reached beyond. Now I really did enjoy the whole poem but those lines jump out at me and just got me, love it!
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