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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow Gurl you still got that gift *Heart* Writing from not only the mind and heart but that soul as well. Very touching and I could not only feel it but I could see it *Heart*
Excellent, excellent writing. Please keep writing and sharing more *Heart*

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Review of the perfect man  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
A beauty poem indeed Jesssie but in the fourth line:
Before you were for put on this earth i loved you.

before you were for put on this earth I loved you/

The word for I underlined shoud not be there *Smile*

I love this poem gurl... I hope you continue to write just as you always have.

Nothing like a special poem for your son *Heart* I know you will teach him all the things he will need to know and so much more *Heart*

Thanks for letting me be a part of your life, your writings, and for a good solid friendship which you are more like family just so ya know *Heart*
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Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Just My Thoughts: }A very interesting poll on "manic-depression," but is now called "bipolar disorder.

I have known of people of this disorder and have been around people with this disorder and if they take their meds they are better than without their meds! They can be moody, unpredictable. But who is not, I mean really? And don't we all have bad days and good days?

My Favorite Part: Is your Noteworthy Bipolars

Error: I saw no errors, good job!

My Rating: 4.5 *Star*'s

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Review of I Am Not a Hero  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My thoughts: A very enjoyable read, creative, clever, unique, one of a kind and eventful.

My Favorite Part(s): Is you note above before the story, although I did enjoy your whole story from beginning to end and do look forward to more!

Errors: I did not see any errors, good job!

Suggestions: Keep the motion of your creativity, keep your creative soaring, flowing,and going *Smile*

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
My Thoughts:What a creative, unique, one of a kind place you here have here. I love the way you break everything down and you make it very welcoming , inviting, easy and simple enough to not only follow but understand. You ever throw in two examples of how a review may go down and look like!

Thank you how for having such an awesome place. I have added this to my favorites and I will be adding this to my sunnystarr corner as well, right after I send this to you!

Keep the creativity and reviewing soaring and flowing

I rate the awesome place: FIVE *Star*'s

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Review of Fade Away  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My Thoughts:Thank you for the update and letting me know that you revises this and I like the fact that you post a note at the very top of your revised version here which adds a nice touch! You are very creative and have painted a picture that I can clearly see.

My Favorite Parts or Lines: The panic is setting in. It's getting harder and harder to write. Will anyone remember me when I'm gone? This isn't death. Whatever this is, it's worse.

That just stood out to me is all I can say!

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Clever very clever, unique, creative, well thought out and a one of a kind poem you have here *Smile* I even found my self laughing a few times

My Favorite Parts or Lines: I completely enjoyed this whole poem from beginning to the end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep Writing and keep that clever creativity soaring! You may also like to check out : "Noticing Newbies"  and "Newbies Corner" 

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thoughts: Wow! What an awesome place you have here! And y'all really do a lot too!! Very creative, unique, clever, well thought out and a one of a kind wonderful kind wonderful place you have here!

My Favorite Part: Everything!

Suggestions: Keep doing all the wonderful things that you are doing *Heart*

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review of Your Today  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: A creative, charming well thought out poem you have here

My Favorite Parts or Lines: By merely going back in time to change events that have gone by. and I also like the whole second paragraph!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing and keep the creativity going.

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: You have a great place here, very creative, clever, unique, a one of a kind place here and you made me feel welcomed *Smile*

My Favorite Parts of Lines: I like your whole lay out from beginning to end and your picture is a nice personal touch too *Smile*

Errors: No errors did I see.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing.

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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for entry "1-9-2012" 
Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thought: Great place you have here! Very create, unique, one of a kind and makes me feel welcomed.

My Favorite Parts or lines: You lay out from beginning to end.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thought: Wow! What an awesome place you have here well so far! Very creative, clever, unique, and you make me feel welcome in here too *Smile*

My Favorite Parts or Lines: I love your whole lay out from the beginning to the end.

By the way I do hope your back is better!

Errors: I did not see any errors at all.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going and flowing!

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: Wow! What a very creative, clever, unique, one of a kind, make you fell welcome blog you have here!

My Favorite Parts or Lines: Is your whole set up, I totally love the whole set up from beginning to end!

Errors: I did not find any error at all.

Suggestions: Keep your creativity in motion, soaring, going, and flowing!!

My Rating: 5 *Star*'s

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Review of Boxed In  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thoughts: Per your request, though this one is really good too, I really loved the other one better... This is very creative, warm, and well thought out.

My Favorite Parts of Lines: Although I enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end the last two lines are my favorite.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing and the creativity flowing also you may like to check out: "Noticing Newbies"  and "Newbies Corner" 

My Rating: 4 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is one of my favorite places *Heart* I love the name, love the blogging area.

Your rules are few and simple and easy enough to understand and follow and I do say I agree with each and everyone of them! I also really like how you have section every one's blog to a section rated accordly *Smile* I also love the sig/images up at the top!

Keep the creativity soaring and flowing!

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Review of Paranoid  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
{size}My Thoughts: Wow! Very creative, clever, unique, clever, and one of a kind.

My Favorite Part or Lines: I really enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end as it got my attention right from the start!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing, also you may want to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and "Newbies Corner" 

My Rating: 4 *Star*'s

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Review of My Marine  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.0)
My Thoughts: Very nice, warm and touching. Short but sweet and to the point. Is there more you could add to this nice little piece?

My Favorite Parts or Lines: His loving eyes looking into mine with such love and compassion, like he can see right though my heart and soul. I really love this part!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

My Suggestions: Keep writing and keep the creativity flowing. You may want to come and check out : "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 3 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Wow! Nice very nice, creative, clever, well thought out and rhyming well

My Favorite Part: I honestly enjoy the whole piece from being to end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing using that awesome creativity and you may be interested in taking a look at: "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review of Night  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thought: A very creative piece you have here, clever, and well thought out.

My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing!! You may want to check out: {item: 126963}

My Rating: 4 *Star*'s

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Review of "U"  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thought: A moving poem full of passion, a well thought out poem. Thought it left me wanting more!

My Favorite Part: You love me day or night, you never judge me if I’m not right.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity going. May be you might like to check out: "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 3 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review of The Red Angel  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Wow! Full of passion and inspiration, this piece is well thought out, clever and creative.

My Favorite Par: I actually really did enjoy the whole thing from start to finish!

Errors: I did not see any erros.

Sugguestions: Keep the creativity soaring and flowing. You may also want to check out: "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 4 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thoughts: Awesome! Well thought out, clever, unique, full of passion, a creative poem you have here.

Favorite part: I really enjoyed the whole piece from start to finish.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep the creativity flowing and you may like to check out: "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 4.0 *Star*'s

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Review of Head vs. Heart  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thought: Very nice poem nicely written, well thought out, clever and creative

Favorite Part: My body's at war, head vs. heart, it tears me apart.

Errors: I did not see any errors

Suggestions: Keep writing and you may like to check out "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 3 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review of Left Out  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thoughts: Full of feeling and creative indeed

My Favorite Part: There is so much pain inside me, but no one seems to care.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing. Keep the creativity flowing and going. Also you may like to check out "Noticing Newbies" 

My Rating: 3 1/2 *Star*'s

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Review of Eve  
Review by Sunny
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
How clever, very creative, well thought out, unique, and certainly one of a kind. Very enjoyable and much truth though out your poem!

I love coming and visiting you. You have so much talent *Heart*

Love the signature image as well as it goes with your poem very well *Smile*
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