I love this piece you have so beautifully written. This case really go to me too! It is sad that things like this goes on and we need to come together and make a change! Hugs
What a wonderful place you have here! I would like to donate 50,000 to your contest and I hope that it will help. Keep doing all the good things that you do here on WDC.
Cute little pep talk but I would have like to have seen some goals you want to achieve for 2013 even though liking or being friends with yourself is a challenge.
Enjoyable read and all any of us can really do is put forth the effort. a we all work hard to make something of this passion of our writing. Good luck goal in 2013!
My Thoughts: Very creative, clever, unique and what a way to create a name! You are very talented and I love just how this poem goes as you weave your words so carefully as you weave me into your poem so well.
Favorite Part: I was one of six and not the first.
I love your place here and looking though everything as you share with us. I have enjoyed being on the front porch with you and the lemonade was good too
My Thoughts: A very creative and thought out little place you have here. I like the way you think and really good questions too!
My favorites: Although I enjoy all of them these two are my favorites: If someone gets addicted to counseling..how do you treat them?
and How do you know when you run out of invisible ink?
Errors: I did not see any errors
Suggestions: Write on and keep bringing on these good questions to think about!
My Thoughts: Wow! Very creative, clever, unique, a one of a kind and well thought out. I really enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. You really do have away with words.
My Favorite Part: I have two favorite lines and they really just stood out to me:
My heart is dislodged from it's comfortable place of knowing what to say. and
My words feel awkward, clumsy in my mind. No way to query further without doing more damage.
I so love the way you written. You are so talented and have a way with words and you know just how to weave your readers in and yet leave me wanting more and more. Keep writing and sharing. I love your stories here so much!
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