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Review of Last Chance  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This review is from: SAJ Umbrella by Leger

Good afteroon Joy
I am reviewing: "Last Chance" 

My Thoughts:
This is a very creative, full of emotion poem that you have created here. I was actually hook and drawn in by the very first line: We shall have to make due with what is left. I have who has never been there? Right? I also like the title.

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs editing.

Suggestions:
Keep being creative, keep writing in the way that draws your readers in and not just painting a picture for your readers to see but write in a way that your readers can feel for to me these two things go hand in hand.

My Rating:
Four and half stars


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Good afternoon LostGhost: Seeking & Learning
I am reviewing: "After the last rites" 
For: "Invalid Item" 

My Thoughts:
Wow! What a very creative, clever, unique, full of emotion poem you have here.

My Favorite Part:
Nothing mine remained except a forgotten chair, a small night prayer, and a few images stained. Most everyone can relate to these things that remain.

My Rating:
Four and half stars

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning!

Wow! What a really very creative, honest and open and amazing poem. I really like this line: Study their expression for it is there that holds the truth. and the last two lines are my most favorite: Next time you look at someone, before you criticize, remember it is better, to look with your heart, not your eyes. My Mama taught me this when I was but a child. She told me no one is better than anyone and that we are all the same no matter how old or young, big or small, no matter the color it is the heart that tells you who they really are!
Keep sharing and keep being creative as you really do have away with words! And most of all keep writing!

Courtesy Of: "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review of In My Tiny Room  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This review is from: "SAJ Umbrella by Leger" 

Good evening Joy
I am reviewing: {item;457379}
For: "Invalid Item" 

My Thoughts:
A very creative poem you have written here. Full of emotion and it really makes me feel and think.

My favorite line is:
for I live my life in one tiny room. Sometimes I really felt like this in ways that are not so easily told.

My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing. keep being creative as you really do have away with words, weaving your readers. And most of all keep writing.

My Rating:
Five stars


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Review of When Mama Wrote  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review from: SAJ Umbrella by Leger

Hello Joy
I am reviewing: "When Mama Wrote" 
For: "Invalid Item" 

It is my please to read your poem . My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:
Very creative, well thought out and full of emotion. Lovely poem you have here.

What I liked:
The impressing I got when your Mother wrote was exciting and like you could not wait to hear what ever she wrote. And this is my most favorite part: That you still feel her ride going on inside your heart that holds her joy.

My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing your writings. Keep being creative as you really do have away with words that brings your readers in and can feel and see what it is your are saying. And most of all, keep writing.

My Rating:
Five stars

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Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
What a lovely story. Emotional and full of surprises. I love the way your story unfolds. You are so talented and really do have away with words. Keep being creative and weaving a web that catches your readers and reels them in. And most of all keep writing my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing this with me!


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Review of Thunderstorms  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This review is for:
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Good morning warriormom
I am reviewing: "Thunderstorms" 

My Thoughts:
Wow! Who knew such few words could have such a punch! I like the title: Thunderstorms for I am one who loves the rain and at times a thunderstorm is nice too! I like that next line as well, across the quiet once sky. I never really thought about the sky being quiet. And your last line: Shouting God's power really stands out in this creative haiku poem. Showing depth of emotion.

My Favorite Line:
Shouting God's power! I just love that. I mean I use to think when it was thundering God was mad about something. I am thankful for his rainbow which is his promise to never flood the earth!!

My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing. Keep being creative as you do have away with words and know just how to make your readers not only see what you what but you can make your readers feel. Most of all keep writing!

My Rating:
Five stars

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Review by Sunny
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Good afternoon Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

It is my pleasure to read your wonderful story and give you a review, I am a writing just like you and this review is my impression. My goal here is to be helpful and support, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

What Drew Me In:
Your Title and description and you had my attention by the first paragraph. Sunday School. I was remembering my days of Sunday School.

My Thoughts:
I loved how you gave a brief on Jesus, how he was born, baptized, tempted by the devil, his teachings, he did heal people. Made me think of this one song: http://youtu.be/oojJ1Gpv8yo I also like this in the reggae version as well *Smile* enjoy and I hope you like what your story made me think of!

My Editing Comment:
I did not see anything at all that needs editing.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, keep being creative writing with your heart. You are very talented and you sure do know how to draw your readers in with your style of writing in such a way that your readers can not only see but feel your writing as if you were painting a picture. And most of all keep writing!

My Rating:
Five Stars ~ That is if you were allowing ratings.

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a clever, interesting and creative poem! I liked all the things you saw in the clouds above a wonder as to what one can see if they would only just really look! I really like the way your poem rhymes and all the interesting things your imagination saw. A goat's head how funny, a horse jumping and even the color of chestnut red! and then a baby seal, this I would like to see and then how clever a jet plane moves it all away and nothing is revealed! This poem takes me back to when I was a kid and laying on the ground telling my friends what it was I saw I love this game! Thank you for bringing back a childhood memory I had so forgotten about *Smile*

You are very talented and you do have a way with words and you know just how to weave your readers in ~ I like that ~ keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!


This concludes our week together, I sure hope you have enjoyed your "Days Of Sunshine" 

and special gift from: harperpaul

Courtesy of: "Days Of Sunshine" 


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review from "Invalid Item" 

Hello Liam
I am reviewing: "The Danger of Writing" 

For your:
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It is my pleasure to read your poem and give you a review. Please remember I am just a writer like you and this review is my feelings and impressions. My Goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:
Wow! I love this. In just a few lines there is such emotion. Very creative, and clever.

My Favorite Part:
I really enjoyed the whole thing but this is what spoke to me:
Writing's a mirror soul's reflection laid bare in a verse.
These words just moved me. I can picture myself writing as if a mirror reflects my soul bare in a verse!

My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, keep being creative, you are very talented and have such away with words and you know just how to pull your readers in and make them feel with the heart. Keep Writing!

My Rating:
Five Stars

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello There! I love this game! I love the image you have at the top. II was drawn in not only by your email, but by the title and the description.

Your rules are easy and simple enough to understand and follow. I like your example and it looks like the first round will be interesting. Well thought out and organized.

What I like:
The GP's for each round will be divided
You are giving and helpful while you are still helping yourself. Great ideal.

I am sure you will be getting donations I know I will be sending some soon!

Keep being creative, keep sharing and giving, and most of all keep writing
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Review of Fishbones  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This review is part of your shower from: "SAJ Umbrella by Leger" 

Hello Jellyfish
I am reviewing: "Fishbones" 
For *Down*

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Please keep in mind that all I can do is offer you my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

My Thoughts:
The title and the description is what drew me in and I was hooked by the first paragraph. A really very creative piece you have here. I like your style of writing. I like the way this poem flows.

My Favorite Part:
I really enjoyed this poem from beginning to end and I was drawn into this poem by the first paragraph. I like the whole rhyming and flow of this poem.

My Editing Comments:
There is nothing that needs to be edited. A perfect poem.

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing. Keep being creative and weaving your words that you sure know just how to do as you web your readers in and keep their attention. You are very talented. And most of all keep writing.

My Rating:
5 Stars


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Review of Ten Loves to One  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a review from SAJ Umbrella by Leger

Hello Jellyfish
I am reviewing: "Ten Loves to One" 
For *Down*
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Please keep in mind that all I can offer is my opinions, my thoughts, and my suggestions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.


My Thoughts:
What a charming, clever, unique, one of a kind, and creative poem you have here. I was drawn in by the title and the description and I love the way that this poems unfolds as you explore there ten loves you have but most of of is writing at wdc *Smile*

My Favorite Part:
I really did enjoy this whole poem from beginning to end. But my favorite part is that you keep coming back to your first love which is writing!!

My Editing Comments:
This poem has nothing to be edited. Good job!

My Suggestions:
Keep being creative and being clever in your writings reeling your readers in as you are talented and do have a way with words. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.

My Rating:
5 Stars


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Review of Time  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello Jellyfish
I am reviewing: "Time" 
For for *Down*
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Please keep in mind that all I can offer is my thoughts, my suggestions, and my opinions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

My Thoughts:
The Title and description drew me in. To me you have a really clever, interesting, creative, unique poem here.

My Favorite Part:
Although I enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end. The whole second and third paragraphs is what stood out to me: To me they are full of emotions!

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, keep being creative and reeling your readers in with the way you weave your words webbing your readers in as you are really good with words. And most of all keep writing.

My Rating:
4.5 Stars


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Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This review is part of your shower at SAJ Umbrella by Leger

Hello LostGhost: Seeking & Learning
I am reviewing: 1943513}
For you shower at "Invalid Item" 

Please keep in mind that all I can do is give you my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

*Umbrellab* My Thoughts:
What a lovely and creative place that you have here. I love the image that you have in here and the title. The Title is what drew me in: Quilting The Poems. I also like how you give: WyrdNaos Trippin' on Yello credit for introducing you to the blog and I plan to check that out later on.

*Umbrellar* My Favorite Parts:
Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.
And These are just thoughts, sometimes inspired by prompts, sometimes random, and sometimes the memories.

*Umbrellav*My Editing Comments:
I did not see any editing that was need what so ever!

*Umbrellag* Suggestions:
Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!

*Umbrellao* My Rating:
5 Stars

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
SAJ Umbrella by Leger

This review is for part of your shower at "Invalid Item" 

Hello GabriellaR45

I am reviewing: "Messages of Motivation" 

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Please keep in mind that all I can do is offer my opinions, my thoughts, and my suggestions. Feel free to keep what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

*Umbrellar*Content Rating:
Your content rating is perfect and this should be for everyone *Smile*

*Umbrellao* My Thoughts:
What a lovely section of C-Note you have here. Uplifting, encouraging, and sure can make someone else feel good!

*Umbrella*What Worked For Me:
The uplifting part is what works for me,

*Umbrellav*My Rating:
5 Stars
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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
This review is part of your review for "Invalid Item" 

Good afernoon Jellyfish

I am reviewing: "Gardener's Delight" 

please keep in mind that all I can do is offer my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything thing else:

My Thoughts:
The Title is what drew me in: Gardener's Delight and I was hooked by the first few lines. What a charming, very creative, fun poem you have created here very clever and I can really picture what you are writing in here! Great job. Love it! I have to admit that the first paragraph of your poem made me laugh right out loud, a crowd of tomatoes waving back at me!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything what so ever that would need any kind of editing. Great job!

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing your awesome imagination with your very creative way of bring your readers into and keeping their attention, Keep being creative and painting a picture that you readers can clearly see and leave them wanting even more. And most of all keep writing.!

My Rating:
5 Stars

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Review of Theft of Words  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+
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Good evening Nixie

Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, opinions, and suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

I am reviewing "Theft of Words "  for your order in "Invalid Item" 

My Thoughts:
I like the Title. I like the way you begin this story, very clever, unique, a one of kind, very creative story you have here. Very enjoyable. You really have away with words and you are talented and paint the picture that your readers can really see. This charming, delightful, funny, heartfelt and encouraging. I like the feel of this story and the layout.

My Favorite Parts:
I really did enjoy this story from beginning to end. But here is a few things that stood out to me and not in any order: The man was hiding in plain sight. It made sense. Why would anyone think to look here? And from the point of, Months later a letter arrive.

My Editing Comments:
I saw no editing that was need at all in your wonderful story. Good job!

My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, keep being creative and painting that picture with words that you do so well so that your readers can clearly see and picture as they read your story. And most of all keep writing!

My Rating:
5 Stars ~ that is if you were excepting ratings!

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Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts:
What a clever, creative little poem that you have here! I like the flow and how it all falls in place.

My Favorite Parts:
Is absolutely the whole part but these are the parts that stood out to me most in no certain order: My favourite part of spring. The moment that is best. The gift of love for summer sadly is not mine. It's the time when Spring draws a fresh and faultless breath. I really like the phrase you chose and these stood out to me the most!

My Editing Comments:
I did not see any errors what so ever in you wonderful poem.

My Suggestions:
Keep being creative and paint the picture and weave your words that you so clever do in knowing just how to reel your readers in! Keep sharing and opening up for you do have away with words!

My Rating:
5 Stars


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Review of The Mirror  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This review is for part of your shower at "Invalid Item" 

Good evening Shawlyn

I am reviewing: "The Mirror" 
For part of your shower at "Invalid Item" 

My Thoughts:

I love this poem very honest, open, sincere, truthful, creative, unique, one of a kind and wonderful poem. I like the way it made me feel as I am sure many have had these kinds of feelings in sometime or other in their life! I know I sure have.

My Favorite Parts:

But looking in my mirror, I wonder…… How could they get it so wrong? And the whole second paragraph blew me away! Very powerful! The real me is but a shade. and then you put: The real me is lock away! You sure do know how to use words very creative!

My Editing Comments:

There were no errors in your wonderful poem! Great job.

My Suggestions:

Keep being creative, writing in the way that you do painting a picture your readers can very clearly see and not only see but feel as well. Keep sharing, for your writing is enlightening.

My Rating:

5 Stars


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Review of Night Dancing  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review for part of your shower at "Invalid Item" 

Good evening Charlie ~ *Smile*

I am reviewing: "Night Dancing"  for your shower at "Invalid Item" 

My Thoughts:

Wow! Very thought provoking, realistic, honest, since, open, creative, and I was moved by your poem. it is a one of a kind for sure, and I like the way I can picture what your words are saying. I am sure many have felt this very same way. You really do have away with words. This is a very touching poem.

My Favorite Part:

Hear that you don’t feel, How you feel. Find out you are truly alone. No one will go down with you.
These lines really stood out to me! I really enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing!

My Editing Comments:

I did not see one single little error in your wonder poem. Good job!

My Suggestions:

Keep writing from your heart, let more things out and keep being creative and use your words like a paint brush painting a picture that your readers and see clearing with your words. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!

My Rating:

5 Stars. Excellent Job


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a review for part of your shower at "Invalid Item" 

Please keep in mind that I can only offer my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions, feel free to take what benefits you and discard anything that you want.{/s}

My Thoughts: The title is what drew me in and I was glad that I did, as you have a way of telling a story that reels the reader in, I also like that you paint a picture that can be clearly seen and to me that is a good thing.

My Favorite Part: The first line then the paragraph after the first line and then the line after the first paragraph which is this: Theresa, are you going to tell my brother that you are carrying his child? She froze in the act of putting her resignation letter on the large mahogany desk. He wasn't supposed to be here. He was supposed to be dancing with some silly chit at Lady Winter’s ball not sit here in the dark library as if waiting for his errant secretary to sneak in. Are you going to tell Darius about the child?

Errors: I did not see any errors: Good job1

Suggestions: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!

My Rating: 4.5 stars


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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a very creative and wonderful well thought out and very organized place that you have here! All good information and a great break down on how to do a review. I look the whole folder over and you did an awesome job. You are very helpful. Keep being creative, keep sharing, keep writing, and keep doing all the wonderful things that you do here. I also like that you link other helpful places for others to go to. Great Job!


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Review of Helping Links  
Review by Sunny
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a very creative, well thought out, very organized place that you have here. Very helpful and very informational With a great break down and it makes it easier to get around. I like your images that you have in here too. You are very helpful. Keep being creative, keep sharing, keep writing, and keep doing all the wonderful things that you do! I have fan this page so I can keep coming back here and looking it over and over and all that.


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Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Charlie ~ This is a review from:
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Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, opinions, and suggestions. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.

My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and I am so glad that I can on in as you have written a very creative piece here and you have such a way with words that I could actually picture what you were telling and that to me is a really good thing.

What I liked: Truth is I really enjoyed the whole piece. But the first paragraph is what really got me and stood out as I began to picture and the bench is where you first saw her and I just like the scene that I picture.

Errors: As far as I could see, I did not see any errors, great job!

Suggestions: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing and be sure to continue to write where your readers can actually see it and picture it!

My Rating: 5 stars

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