What a very adorable, clever, creative, a one of a kind, unique, story that you have here. You really do have away with words and you know how to make your readers not only see what you are saying but you can make your readers feel and to me that is true talent. You always seem to leave your readers wanting more too! Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
First I have to say that I really love the image up at the top! What a really clever, unique, a one of a kind, very creative little story that you have here. I like the title and I like the description as well, A day like no other, at the amusement park. You have such away with words and left me wanting more. As you can make your readers not only see what you are saying but you can make them feel and to me that is talent! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
This is wonderful I know this is for last year and another year has came up on us and Writing Dot Com is a wonderful home for each and everyone of us. I am so excited for the WDC Site for The StoryMaster and for the The StoryMistress and they have made this site the best place to come and be at and it out does all the other ones that are out there. WDC is certainly my second home.!
I love this title: If I were President. I love all the changes you would make and I would vote for you too! And what is with all them dark suits? And I have to say that I absolutely love the image at the bottom. Where can I get one of those? So when you decided to run let me know cause ummm the government are to expensive and I am sure you know how to shop for bargains! It would so nice not to have to flip the bill!
My Thoughts: First I have to say that I love the images you have in here and I love the one up at the very top that says: What a wonderful world! You place here is welcoming, warm, charming, honest, heartfelt, full of emotion, unique, clever, one of a kind, and very creative. I feel like I know you just a little better by coming in here and reading your blog and I have really enjoyed it as well. And I also like the links that you share in here and the way you encourage your readers.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything at all that needs editing. Great Job!
My Final Comments: Keep being creative, as you certainly really do have away with your, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: I love the way you bring every point out and knowledge is power that is something I have always said. It a good thing and talent to have a reader not only picture what you are saying but to feel what you are saying.
My Favorite Part: Each person's life experience is limited to this one life and this one set of circumstances. This is what really stood out to me, and it is so true.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
WOW!! What a totally delightful, enjoyable and very creative folder that you have here. I love the images that you have in this folder and through out the folder as well. This is such a welcoming place full of charm and heart. You are very talented and so creative. You also have such away with words and making your readers feel what you are saying and not only just picturing what you are saying and to me that is talent! Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do around here at writing dot com, keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing, no matter what.
I love that you put this at the very top of your place here: "Do not, under any circumstances, belittle a work of fiction by trying to turn it into a carbon copy of real life; what we search for in fiction is not so much reality but the epiphany of truth."
Azar Nafisi -author of Reading Lolita in Tehran. Good information for all of us to really understand and know. I also like your break down and very helpful! Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I love your newsletter. Well thought out, creative, clever, full of information and your how you show it is very understandable. I totally agree that, Dialog can make or break a story. Don'tcha just love words and how we can rearrange them to make a difference? Playing with words can be fun but it can also be tiresome! Keep being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title: Heat Rises and as I began to read I was wrap up into the story, which is very creative, clever, unique, one of a kind, heartfelt, sad, and full of emotion.
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy the whole story from beginning to end I would have to say that the very last paragraph is what stood out to me the most!
My Editing Comments: As fall as I there is nothing that needs any kind of editing.
My Final Comments: Keep sharing, keep being creative as you really do have away with words and you left left me wanting more. And most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: I love the title and that you put this: inspired by a dragonfly that was flying above me. I never did see him, only his shadow. I love to see the different things that inspires all us writers to write, I love that you start and end with the same sentence
My Favorite Part: ‘Neath the dragonfly’s shadow
My Editing Comments: There is no editing that needs to be done, as far as I can see.
My Final Comments: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five stars, is what i would have given if you had allowed ratings.
First I have to say that I love your image up at the very top of your blog, where can I get one of those? What a wonderful blog place that you have here, clever, charming, funny, unique, full of information, a one of a kind, very creative place that you have here! A very enjoyable place. I feel like I know you just a little better by coming in here and reading your delightful place here! I love that you put this in here: Failure is unimportant. It takes courage to make a fool of yourself. A quote from: CHARLIE CHAPLIN. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: First I really like the title and this: Told from the point of view of a nine year old child. Interest, unique, clever, creative, and well thought out.
My Favorite Part: Told from the point of view of a nine year old child. Kids are so honest, aren't they?
My Editing Comments: I did not see any thing at all that needs any kind of editing.
My Thoughts: Interesting title and so I was curious and had to come in and read, I was laughter out loud with in the first few lines I love the way you bring these things out about spiders as you cleverly, creatively, well thought have written this adorable poem
My Favorite Part: Are you kidding? I really enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end! Great Job!
My Editing Comments: There is nothing that needs editing as far as I can see.
My Final Comments: Keep writing in away that grabs your readers from the start as you really do have away with words and you left me wanting more! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five Stars is what I would have given had you allowed ratings!
My Thoughts: I love the title and as I begin to read I see you are rhyming really nicely and the rhythm is not bad at all. This is a well thought out poem that is clever, unique, one of a kind and creative.
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end, this is what stood out to me: I cannot see beyond my own reflection. I don't know why, but I really do like this line a lot.
My Editing Comments: I did not see any thing that needs editing.
My Final Comments: Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: First I drawn in by the title: Faithlessness and as I became to read was completely wrapped up in your little short story and who would have ever thought of a loved being shot in the cross fire and the spouse's life was ruined because of it! How sad and this is well written, well thought out, creative, clever and to me it makes the reader really think
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy your whole story from beginning to end, your last line: You got to have faith is what stood out though out your whole story and there is something in each of us that seems to push us forward!
My Editing Comments: I really did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Final Comments: Keep reeling your readers in and giving them something to think about as you do have away with words. You left me wanting more. Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Thoughts: I was curious by the title and had to come in. Wow was my first thought and then it was who doesn't like butterfly ornaments and I also enjoyed how you creatively tell how the sunny butterfly ornaments came to you from your bubbly daughter. Then as I read how you and your daughter became estranged and you do not talk or see one another ~ And I thought how sad... Joyful memories are a good thing to have and hold on too.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything what soever that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Final Thoughts: Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: Wow!! I was totally wrap up in your story, as I wondering you there was truth put this or was it made up? It is really good, creative, unique, one of kind, clever, and really well written. I never had any problems with bullies but I use to stick up for the ones that others pick on!
My Favorite Part: Wow are you kidding? The whole thing is my favorite part from the beginning to the very end!
My Final Comments: You really do have a way with words and you are such a good story teller, keep reeling your readers in with the way you write and you can make your readers see and feel what you are saying and to me that is talent. And you left me wanting more! keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
First I have to say that I love, I mean I love all the images you have here in your contest~ Happy 14th Writing Dot Com!
Your rules are easy and simple enough to understand and follow and your prizes are very generous as well. I really like the prompts too! Very creative and well thought out. Keep being creative and keep sharing, but most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful, clever, well thought out, I like the way you bring this little story out as I find I get wrap up in this as you really do have a way with words as you can make your reader not only see but feel what you are saying. Although I really enjoy the whole piece from beginning to end I would have to say that the last two paragraphs is what stood out to me. Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: Tribute to Robin Williams, what a great ideal and this piece is very enjoyable and I found my own self walking down memory lane thinking about Robin Williams and you are so very right about depression and doesn't it strike you odd that the most funniest people of all where the heaviest masks of all? I just know that he will be dearly missed. I love your piece that you have so warmly, honestly, cleverly, creatively, and with most heartfelt have written.
My Favorite Part: I have to say that I absolutely love this piece from the very beginning to the very end and there is no way that I could possibly pick one thing! Great Job
My Editing Comments: As I read over your wonderful piece, I honestly did not find one thing that needs any kind of editing.
My Final Comments: You have a big heart and you have a way with words keep being creative, keep sharing and leaving your readers wanting more, and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: I really was drawn in by the title: Re-Creation and When it all ends, will God start again? And as I found my self thinking about that I came on in to read your poem, which is really clever, creative, unique, one of a kind, clever, a well thought out poem full of really good questions.
I really enjoyed your little poem from beginning to end but I would have to say that the very last two lines stood out. Will the Lord say, let there be light? There is just something about that line.
Keep being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing! I would have rated this poem five stars if you were allowing ratings.
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