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I was drawn in by the Title: Loss Of Color. This is a well thought out, clever, creative poem in which you have written here. I like the way that it flows and the way it makes me feel. I like the whole poem from the beginning to the end but my favorite is the last paragraph as it just leaps off the page! You do have away with words and a really good style as well. Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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I was curious of your title and what you wrote under it: Will you look on the other side and so of course I had to come in take a look, and I was into it by the first line. You really do have away with words and you can tell a story and leaves your readers wanting even more. You can make your reader not only see what you are writing but feel what you are saying and to me that is real talent! I really like the whole poem from beginning to end. I also like that you started and end it with the same question ~ give the reader something to really think about. Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all keep writing!
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I was curious about the title and I was curious when you wrote this: I'll immortalize you. And then I step in side and was wrapped up in your very clever, raw, creative, unique and well thought out poem! You really do have away with words and I can not only see what you are saying but I can feel what you are saying and to me that is being really very talented! You even left me wanting more. You have a unique way of expressing in your poetry! Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all keep writing!
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I was intrigue by the title and that is was drew me in and as I began to read I was swept up with the way this poem began and unfolds, I also like the flow of this poem. Very deep, raw, and full of emotion, clever indeed, as well as unique, one of a kind and very creative! I was moved from the beginning to the very end. You really do have away with words and you left me wanting even more! Thank you for sharing the creative poem! Keep sharing and most all keep writing
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I really like the creative poem that you wrote, and I really like the you broke it down to us that really don't know a whole lot about poetry but I do like how it makes me feel! It does look easier than how it really is and that also makes you not only creative but clever as well! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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I really like the title: The Narrow Alley and the subtitle and I also love how you broke it down: Innocence, corruption, control, escape, haunting, and you end with healing. I think this is very creative, clever, unique, and I do like the flow of this poem. I was completely drawn in by the first line! You are very talented and have away with words! I really enjoyed this poem and you have left me wanting even more! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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First I have to say that I was drawn in by the title and subtitle and I was into it by the very first line! Wow!! Very creative, unique, a one of a kind, clever, emotional, and left me wanting even more!! I really like the way this poem/story unfolds as the story unfolds and reveals the dark side of fate that slowly unfolds! Wow!! You are really talented!! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
Wow! What a dark yet very clever, unique, one of a kind, well thought out, creative piece in which you have written here. I never thought of writing from a stalkers point of you and I think that you have capture it very nicely! I like how you describe your person of interest in the beginning and at the end. Very dark and yet so interesting! Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing
You really have a very vivid memory from when you were only four years old! Sounds like some good memories that you have well the back yard don't sound all that great but the possibilites!
Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in by the title and hook by the very first line. Such a tenderhearted, heart felt, wonderful poem of your Mama and a very beautiful picture of her too! I think this must be my most favorite poem you have. I love the way you should how you really feel and it is beautiful! Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in by the Title and caring away by the writing bull name Hooves! This is such a clever, unique, a one of a kind, very well thought out, fun, very creative short story that you have here. I loved the ideal of a time machine and influencing Ernest Hemingway writing! And a time travel machine is the best way to go!! I love your creativity and your style of writing! Keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful song indeed and I noticed the tune right off and I think I like this very clever, well thought out, unique, one of a kind and most creative song that you have so cheerfully came up with! You are so talented and sure do have a way with words! Keep being creative, keep sharing, but most of all keep writing!!
I love that you dedicated to your teacher and also to your Mother! You are a really good story telling and you are very talented and so creative too. I love the creativity of the little story. I love the way you told this story as I caught myself laughing right out loud! Keep sharing, keep being so creative and unique and most of all keep writing!
This is a really cute, very creative, well thought out and even funny very short story story. You are really good with your words. I really like the feel of this story as it is a really enjoyable story. Keep being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
First I have to say that I love the image up at the top of your very creative poem!
Wow! You are very talented and really have a way with words! I like this whole poem from beginning to the end. I was drawn in by the Title alone and the words just jump off the page as it leaves me wanting more! Keep sharing your talents and your words, keep being so cleverly talented, and most of all keep writing!
This concludes our week together, I sure hope you enjoyed as much as I really did
Wow! What a lovely, very creative, unique, one of a kind beautiful poem you have here. I like the whole thing from beginning to end as you really do have away with words as you know how to reel your readers in and leaving them wanting even more! Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
First I have to say that I love the image up at the top! Like the title as well. You are very creative. I love this piece from the beginning to the end. A really good flow, creative, well thought out, unique, one of kind, and you really do have a way with words! Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all, keep writing!! I think this is one of my favorites
The voice of thunder that title alone drew me into your poem here! This is a very creative, unique, one of a kind, well thought out poem.
My favorite lines: The chaos of this rainstorm,is a mirror of my thoughts. I have often felt this way mostly because I just love the rain and all that but to me this lines just stands out in your well written poem. I also like the line: It is the thunder that sees my soul!
Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all, keep writing!
I like what you have put at the top of your poem by: Mark Twain! I also like the title you have for this poem. And I was drawn in by the very first line. This poem is very creative. My favorite lines are the very first paragraph and I think everyone fits this or can fit it! Keep sharing, keep being creative and unique, keep doing all the wonderful things you do here in WDC, but most of all keep writing!
Thank you for sharing this with me! I love it. I love the way it starts and the story just takes off and I got all wrap up in it too! You are such a good writer, creative, clever, unique, a great story teller and you always seem to leave your readers wanting even more! Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all keep writing!
Wow! I like this a lot. Well thought out, very creative. Open and honest. I like the way you can bring your readers in while you paint a picture so clear for them all to see as you also have away of making your readers feel just what it is you are saying! Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all, keep writing!!
Wow! What a heartfelt, creative, realistic, sincere, clever poem you have written here. I was drawn in with the very first paragraph for I love the rain but not to wash away any pain!
You have a way with words and paint a picture that your readers can really see and also make your readers feel what you mean as you write your words so free.
Keep sharing, keep being creative and most of all, keep writing!
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My Thoughts:
I like the feel of your poem. You got my attention with the first two words. Rain falls. I love the rain, it me it is soothing, calming, and relaxing.
I also like the line:contemplating petty things while rain pierce s his once wispy coat, to him petty things are nonexistent.
You do have away with words. I like how you wrote this and saying that you could learn from the coyote and together you both could trout up the hill with lightning at your backs!
My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.
Suggestions:
Keep writing in away that paints a picture that all your readers can clearly see. Keep being creative, and keep writing.
It is my pleasure to read your journal that you have created here. And give you a review, I am a writer just like you and this review is my impression. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Thank you for sharing your work.
My Thoughts:
I like the break down that you have in your Writing Practice Journal.
Well thought out, creative, charming, I like the style you have. You know how to reel your readers in as you paint a very clear picture that you readers can see and you can also make your readers feel and I think that they are both important. I also like the image that you have in here too!
My Suggestions:
Keep keeping creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Editing Comments:
I did not find anything that needs editing.
My Rating:
Five Stars ~ That is if you were allowing any ratings!
What a very creative, unique, delightful poem you have written here. You do have a way with words as you draw your readers in as you paint a picture oh so clear and know just how to make you readers feels as you pull them completely in. I like the way this poem made me feel. I like the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. Keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing. And by the way I love the image that you have in your portfolio!
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