I was both drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and as I came on in I found thing very well thought out and charming and you give good choices as well. You are very creative and good luck with your poll here. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in by both your your title and your description and so I had to come on in as I did, I was hooked by the very first paragraph as you really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture. A charming, and very creartive poem. I like how this poem makes me feel. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
Autumn is my favorite season and so I ran across your poem here and I had to come on in. I love your poem from the beginning to the very end and you really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture ((Winter is coming)) and you know how to make your readers feel too. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
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My Thoughts: Wow! What a deep poem you have written here. I was drawn in by both your title and your description and as I step inside I found a very well thought out, clever, unique, charming, a one of a kind, and very creative poem you have here. I like the way it makes me feel as it also makes me think. You really do have a wonderful way with words as you know just how to paint a picture that your readers can see, and they can also feel as well, and me that is talent!
My Favorite Parts: I love your whole poem from the very beginning to the the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything tha needs any kind of editing at all. Good job!
My Suggestions: Continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
What a beautiful newsletter! I love the whole thing. Y'all really do a wonderful job with the newsletters and thank you so much for allowing me to be a part of your newsletters! I really do enjoy reading them Keep up the wonderful job that the two of you do.
I love the title and the description in fact I understand the description completely and as I came on in, I was into it by these lines alone; Precious time. Irretrievable time. Months, years. The time it takes, To disappear into one's self.
Okay, To disappear into ones self you do not have the ' before the s. But I have read these lines alone three times! Very catchy indeed.
You really do have a way with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can see and you can also make your readers feel as well and to me that is talent!
Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in and curious by your title and your subscription. And as I came on in I found it to be clever, unique, a one of a kind, interesting, educational, surprising, well thought out and very creative. I was surprised that there was no mention of 1965 where they march on that bridge in Selma and all the bad things that happened when they were fighting for Voting Rights! Martin Luther King was a good leader and a lot of people do not realize this but he was for everyone! Anyway your piece is very enjoyable. I was only a child a young child when that went on but thought since it is part of history and it would be fitting in your piece here. No, I am not saying you should add it I am merely mentioning it as it made me thought of it because of your piece that you have and I believe changes in those times were made and most of them were for the better even though nowadays they are trying to take people back to the 20's - 60's as they are trying to take rights away. Your piece here, as you can see has inspired me!
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by the title and subject line and as I step inside I found this piece to be clever, well thought out, unique, a one of a kind piece and creative as you give your readers something to think about. You do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture and not only can your readers see what you are saying but they can feel as well. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
Good morning! I was drawn in by both your title and your subscription though in your subscription the think the word mu should probably be the word my. As I step on in I found a very charming, clever, unique, a heartfelt, and very creative poem. You really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and not only see but feel. I was drawn in by the first few lines as this line stood out to me the most: I walk softly, quietly when I want to run I whisper! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful place you have here. I was curious by the title and the description and as I step inside I was welcomed by your very creative image and I like the set up of your challenge as well. Your rules are easy to understand and follow and your prizes are very generous too. And your place here is the first that I have ever seen with a Cash Prize Policy. Very is a very clever, unique, one of kind, and very creative challenge that you have here. Along with the reivew, I would like to donate 30,000 to your challenge. Hope that it helps, and I look forward to the merit badge too. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and you description. And as I came on in to read your poem I faound a very charming, and very creative poem.
My Favorite Parts:
Although I enjoye the whole poem, I would have to say that the very first paragraph is what stood out to me the most and I believe it set the whole tone for your poem. There is just something about that paragraph to me! Loved it.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative, as you really do have a way with words as you plan a very clear picture that your readers can really feel and not only feel but also your readers can see. And most of all be sure to keep writing too.
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I was drawn in by both your title and yoru description. What a wonderful heartfelt poem on how you feel for your granddaughter. You really have a way with words and you can really paint a very clear picture of your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel.
My Favorite Parts:
Truth is I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end. Love how you began this poem and I love that you show real love for your granddaughter. Children are precious that words can never tell.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. Keep painting picture with the stories you have that your readers will clearly see and not only see but feel as well.
I was drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and as I step inside I was hooked by the very first line; I am a worthless angel, in battle I was killed! I knew that this was about a soldier by just those two lines! Sad that there are unknown graves who fought in a war. You poem is heartfelt, clever, unique, a one of a kind poem and very creative it. Thank you for writing this. You really do have a way with words and you can paint a very clear picture for all your readers to see and you know just how to make them feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
I like the title and was curious by the description and I also have to say that I love the image at the very top of your poem. I love the way your poem flows and the way you have so cleverly and very creatively written this very heartfelt poem. You really do have a way with words and know just how to make your readers feel and see what you are saying. Keep sharing, continue being really very creative, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by both the title and the description and had to come on in and as I did so I was taken in by the first line. It was the wind that woke me. Very catchy indeed. You really do have such a way with words as you know just how to draw your readers in and you not only paint your readers a picture, but you can make your readers feel what you are saying. I really like this piece you have so creatively written here. I like the style and I love the way it unfolds as it is like a little mini story that unfolds a picture so clear that I can see it! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in by both the title and the description and as I came on in I found a very charming, unique, a one of a kind, clever, and very creative poem here. Although I never really thought about it I too envy the evergreen tree and sorry for it as well! I love the way you draw your readers in as you really do have away with words as you know just how to paint a picture that your readers can not only picture but feel and to me that is talent.
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by both your Title and the description and as I came on in I was enlightened by your very realist, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and very creative poem. I like the way you made me feel as you have a way with words and know just how to draw your readers in. I would have to say I liked your poem from the very beginning to the very end but, the last paragraph is what stood out to me the most! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a very interesting, creative, clever, unique, honest, poem that you have here. I like the flow of this poem. I was drawn in by the title and by the description and was hook with the very first line: Shattered Futures and broken dreams. How may time have we all felt this and some of us even more than once of shattered futures and broken dreams!
You really do have away with words as you know just how to make your readers not only see what you are writing but feel and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful Valentine Jane Austen Newsletter. I learn so much in these newsletter and what a great ideal for making a valentine card too and all the quotes are very good to use as well. I so look forward to your newsletters
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step inside I found a very enlightening, charming, honest and very open, well thought out, clever, and very creative. You really do have a way with words and paint a very clear picuture that your readers can not only see but feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and description. What a beautiful, heartwarming, clever, unique, a one of a kind song/poem, and a very creative piece. And I like your note at the bottom of your piece and letting your readers know that it is in the style of an Eric Clapton tune.
My Favorite Parts: I acutally enjoyed the whole thing from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for your readers and not only can they see but they can feel what you are saying too! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five stars
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My Thoughts: Wow! What a wonderful goatl thing that you have here for the week of January 10th! I sure hope that you meet all your goals
My Favorite Parts:b The whole thing from the beginning to the very end. I also like seeing your progress status too.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: Keep creating and conquering your goals, keep being creative, keep sharing, most of all keep writing!
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I was both drawn in and curious by the title: Crumbling World. And as I can on in to read your poem I found it to be very charming, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and full of creativity!
My Favorite Parts:
Truth is I really did like your whole poem from the very beginning to the very in, but I will say that I was reeled in by the first three lines and I stayed into it. Nice job. I also think that at times we can all feel this way and even go through these things too. Also the last line stands out too. Attempt to start again. Now that is something we all do from time to time and over and over again! I like that I can see me in this part. Sometimes in life things are not repairable but sometimes they are!
Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
You really do have a way with words and you can paint a very clear picture that not only can your readers see but feel as well and to me that is real talent. Continue being, creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. I also like that you left me wanting more!
I love this! You are such a wonderful free spirit person with lot of love in your heart. Sounds like a really good time. I wish I could have been there just to see you howl I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by both the title and the description, and as I step on in to read I found a very well thought out, warm, charming, unique, a one of a kind , and very creative poem and full of passion.
My Favorite Part: I absolute love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love that you have such a way with words and that you paint such a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!