What a wonderful Valentine Jane Austen Newsletter. I learn so much in these newsletter and what a great ideal for making a valentine card too and all the quotes are very good to use as well. I so look forward to your newsletters
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step inside I found a very enlightening, charming, honest and very open, well thought out, clever, and very creative. You really do have a way with words and paint a very clear picuture that your readers can not only see but feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and description. What a beautiful, heartwarming, clever, unique, a one of a kind song/poem, and a very creative piece. And I like your note at the bottom of your piece and letting your readers know that it is in the style of an Eric Clapton tune.
My Favorite Parts: I acutally enjoyed the whole thing from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for your readers and not only can they see but they can feel what you are saying too! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five stars
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My Thoughts: Wow! What a wonderful goatl thing that you have here for the week of January 10th! I sure hope that you meet all your goals
My Favorite Parts:b The whole thing from the beginning to the very end. I also like seeing your progress status too.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: Keep creating and conquering your goals, keep being creative, keep sharing, most of all keep writing!
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I was both drawn in and curious by the title: Crumbling World. And as I can on in to read your poem I found it to be very charming, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and full of creativity!
My Favorite Parts:
Truth is I really did like your whole poem from the very beginning to the very in, but I will say that I was reeled in by the first three lines and I stayed into it. Nice job. I also think that at times we can all feel this way and even go through these things too. Also the last line stands out too. Attempt to start again. Now that is something we all do from time to time and over and over again! I like that I can see me in this part. Sometimes in life things are not repairable but sometimes they are!
Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
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You really do have a way with words and you can paint a very clear picture that not only can your readers see but feel as well and to me that is real talent. Continue being, creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. I also like that you left me wanting more!
I love this! You are such a wonderful free spirit person with lot of love in your heart. Sounds like a really good time. I wish I could have been there just to see you howl I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!
What an honest, heartfelt, unique, one of a kind, clever, unique, and very creative poem that you have written here. In some ways very sad that anyone must go through this.
I like the way your poem is telling a story in which you have a way with words and paint a very clear picture, that your readers can not only see but feel as well. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by both the title and the description, and as I step on in to read I found a very well thought out, warm, charming, unique, a one of a kind , and very creative poem and full of passion.
My Favorite Part: I absolute love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love that you have such a way with words and that you paint such a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and the description as I really like these types of poetry, and as I step in to read your poem I found, it very creative, I like that the Title is in bold as for it to stand out more.
My Favorite Part: I like the whole poem and could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by both the title and the description, and as I can on in to read I found I found this very creative, clever, well thought, and well thought piece. And you would never know that this is your first attempt, great job!
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end I would have to say that the last two lines of your poem stood out to me the most.
My Editing Comments: I did not find anything that needs editing at all of any kind.
My Suggestions: You have a way of painting a clear picture for your readers to not only see but you can also make them feel and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title, and curious by the description, and as I step inside to read, I found a very clever, funny, well thought, and very creative piece.
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you paint a picture for your readers to see and not only see but they can feel what you are saying. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! What a wonderful piece you have here. I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step on in I found a well thought out, creative, full of emotion, unique, a one of kind and very creative piece.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed you whole piece from beginning to end and the line don't build a shrine for me stands out the most.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing in any way at all.
My Suggestions: You keep speaking out on things that matter to you. I love that you paint a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by the title: Beautiful Stranger. And as I step inside I found a very unique, one of a kind, clever, and very creative poem. I like that you use the same two lines to get the readers attention in each paragraph except the last one and to me it works really well.
My Favorite Part: Beautiful stranger across the room and the very last paragraph
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: I like that you can paint a very clear picture as you drawn your readers in and they can not only see what you are saying but they can feel what you are saying and that is talent to me. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
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My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by the title. You poem has a rhyme and it appears to be well thought out and very creative.
My Favorite Part:
My Editing Comments: In the third line you have spines but I think it would sound and read better if you had spine
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
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My Thoughts: I like the strong title and the fact that you wrote this in the 7th grade and it is flying off the paper with talent just shows how creative you really are! I love this whole poem and it is full of emotion, creativity, it's clever, unique, certainly one of a kind, and amazing!
My Favorite Part: I love this whole poem from the beginning to the very end andI could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You really do have away with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well and to me that is talent! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by your title and your description. And as I step inside I found a very clever, honest, full of emotion, well thought out, and very creative. I remember when I was a teenager feeling these same things so on an adult perspective it gives one something to think about and your are right not all of us adults are like that!
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed this whole poem from beginning to end and I think my thing is ~ I like that it brought back feelings that I had when I was a teenager! Great Job!!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you can paint a very clear picture of your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel, continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by your title and by your description and as I came on in to read your poem I found it clever, troublesome, heartfelt, sad and exciting and really creative.
My Favorite Part: I like the whole poem from beginning to end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title of your poem and I was curious by the description and as I step inside I found a very charming, clever, unique, wonderful, uplifting and very creative poem.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to the end I like the part when you wanted to pluck the yellow rose but decided to leave alone and grow even though it did not belong in that garden of red roses. For sometimes it is better to stand out from the rest. I did enjoy the your poem.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything at all that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see as you do have a way with words and you even left me wanting more! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and description and as I step inside I found a charming and creative poem and I like the way it seems to go together.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: Up at the top {{c:navy} you need to take off the first { so that your color will be navy see what I mean>
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description, and as I step inside I found a long but pretty good story. Fill of information and drama and it was creative.
My Favorite Part: It was an enjoyable story and I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: I did not find anything that needs editing.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description and as I step on in to read your poem I found it amazing, charming, unique, a one of a kind poem, and very creative.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anyting that needs any kind of editing in any kind of way at all.
My Suggestions: I love the way you have with words as you draw your readers in as you know just how to paint a very clear picture and you know just how to make your readers feel and you absolutely left me wanting even more!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by your title and curious by your description and as I came on in to read your poem I found it charming, unique, a one of a kind, clever, funny, and very creative
My Favorite Part: I really did enjoy this whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title: Among The Branches and as I step inside I found this wonderful image that to me was very inviting and I found a very clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative poem
My Favorite Part: Living life among the branches is what really stood out in this poem to me but I still enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing in any way at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: WOW! I was completely drawn in by the title and even more curious by the description and as I came on in to read I was completely wrapped into this poem that is more like a story and I found it full of heart, honesty, unique, a one of a kind, clever, emotional, and very creative.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love the way you have with words as you know just how to weave your readers in as you know just how to paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel and I love that you left me wanting more!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and I love the picture you have for this item and that is very inviting to me. And as I came on in to read your poem, I found a very creative, unique, one of kind, clever and very charming poem here!
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love that you have such a way with words that you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know just how to make them feel and I like that you left me wanting more. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!
