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My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and you description. And as I came on in to read your poem I faound a very charming, and very creative poem.
My Favorite Parts:
Although I enjoye the whole poem, I would have to say that the very first paragraph is what stood out to me the most and I believe it set the whole tone for your poem. There is just something about that paragraph to me! Loved it.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative, as you really do have a way with words as you plan a very clear picture that your readers can really feel and not only feel but also your readers can see. And most of all be sure to keep writing too.
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My Thoughts:
I like the title, but I was both drawn in and curious by your description. What a well written blog, charming, creative. I think everyone should have a journal/blog as a way to write whatever they chose. I like that you share and are welcoming in your journal/blog. May you continue to write in you blog.
My Favorite Parts:
I like your blog from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
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My Thoughts:
I was drawn in by both your title and yoru description. What a wonderful heartfelt poem on how you feel for your granddaughter. You really have a way with words and you can really paint a very clear picture of your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel.
My Favorite Parts:
Truth is I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end. Love how you began this poem and I love that you show real love for your granddaughter. Children are precious that words can never tell.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. Keep painting picture with the stories you have that your readers will clearly see and not only see but feel as well.
I was drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and as I step inside I was hooked by the very first line; I am a worthless angel, in battle I was killed! I knew that this was about a soldier by just those two lines! Sad that there are unknown graves who fought in a war. You poem is heartfelt, clever, unique, a one of a kind poem and very creative it. Thank you for writing this. You really do have a way with words and you can paint a very clear picture for all your readers to see and you know just how to make them feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
I like the title and was curious by the description and I also have to say that I love the image at the very top of your poem. I love the way your poem flows and the way you have so cleverly and very creatively written this very heartfelt poem. You really do have a way with words and know just how to make your readers feel and see what you are saying. Keep sharing, continue being really very creative, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by both the title and the description and had to come on in and as I did so I was taken in by the first line. It was the wind that woke me. Very catchy indeed. You really do have such a way with words as you know just how to draw your readers in and you not only paint your readers a picture, but you can make your readers feel what you are saying. I really like this piece you have so creatively written here. I like the style and I love the way it unfolds as it is like a little mini story that unfolds a picture so clear that I can see it! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in by both the title and the description and as I came on in I found a very charming, unique, a one of a kind, clever, and very creative poem here. Although I never really thought about it I too envy the evergreen tree and sorry for it as well! I love the way you draw your readers in as you really do have away with words as you know just how to paint a picture that your readers can not only picture but feel and to me that is talent.
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by both your Title and the description and as I came on in I was enlightened by your very realist, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and very creative poem. I like the way you made me feel as you have a way with words and know just how to draw your readers in. I would have to say I liked your poem from the very beginning to the very end but, the last paragraph is what stood out to me the most! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a very interesting, creative, clever, unique, honest, poem that you have here. I like the flow of this poem. I was drawn in by the title and by the description and was hook with the very first line: Shattered Futures and broken dreams. How may time have we all felt this and some of us even more than once of shattered futures and broken dreams!
You really do have away with words as you know just how to make your readers not only see what you are writing but feel and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful Valentine Jane Austen Newsletter. I learn so much in these newsletter and what a great ideal for making a valentine card too and all the quotes are very good to use as well. I so look forward to your newsletters
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step inside I found a very enlightening, charming, honest and very open, well thought out, clever, and very creative. You really do have a way with words and paint a very clear picuture that your readers can not only see but feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and description. What a beautiful, heartwarming, clever, unique, a one of a kind song/poem, and a very creative piece. And I like your note at the bottom of your piece and letting your readers know that it is in the style of an Eric Clapton tune.
My Favorite Parts: I acutally enjoyed the whole thing from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for your readers and not only can they see but they can feel what you are saying too! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five stars
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My Thoughts: Wow! What a wonderful goatl thing that you have here for the week of January 10th! I sure hope that you meet all your goals
My Favorite Parts:b The whole thing from the beginning to the very end. I also like seeing your progress status too.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: Keep creating and conquering your goals, keep being creative, keep sharing, most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts:
I was both drawn in and curious by the title: Crumbling World. And as I can on in to read your poem I found it to be very charming, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and full of creativity!
My Favorite Parts:
Truth is I really did like your whole poem from the very beginning to the very in, but I will say that I was reeled in by the first three lines and I stayed into it. Nice job. I also think that at times we can all feel this way and even go through these things too. Also the last line stands out too. Attempt to start again. Now that is something we all do from time to time and over and over again! I like that I can see me in this part. Sometimes in life things are not repairable but sometimes they are!
Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
You really do have a way with words and you can paint a very clear picture that not only can your readers see but feel as well and to me that is real talent. Continue being, creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. I also like that you left me wanting more!
I love this! You are such a wonderful free spirit person with lot of love in your heart. Sounds like a really good time. I wish I could have been there just to see you howl I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by both the title and the description, and as I step on in to read I found a very well thought out, warm, charming, unique, a one of a kind , and very creative poem and full of passion.
My Favorite Part: I absolute love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love that you have such a way with words and that you paint such a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and the description as I really like these types of poetry, and as I step in to read your poem I found, it very creative, I like that the Title is in bold as for it to stand out more.
My Favorite Part: I like the whole poem and could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by both the title and the description, and as I can on in to read I found I found this very creative, clever, well thought, and well thought piece. And you would never know that this is your first attempt, great job!
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end I would have to say that the last two lines of your poem stood out to me the most.
My Editing Comments: I did not find anything that needs editing at all of any kind.
My Suggestions: You have a way of painting a clear picture for your readers to not only see but you can also make them feel and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title, and curious by the description, and as I step inside to read, I found a very clever, funny, well thought, and very creative piece.
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you paint a picture for your readers to see and not only see but they can feel what you are saying. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! What a wonderful piece you have here. I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step on in I found a well thought out, creative, full of emotion, unique, a one of kind and very creative piece.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed you whole piece from beginning to end and the line don't build a shrine for me stands out the most.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing in any way at all.
My Suggestions: You keep speaking out on things that matter to you. I love that you paint a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by the title: Beautiful Stranger. And as I step inside I found a very unique, one of a kind, clever, and very creative poem. I like that you use the same two lines to get the readers attention in each paragraph except the last one and to me it works really well.
My Favorite Part: Beautiful stranger across the room and the very last paragraph
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: I like that you can paint a very clear picture as you drawn your readers in and they can not only see what you are saying but they can feel what you are saying and that is talent to me. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
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My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by the title. You poem has a rhyme and it appears to be well thought out and very creative.
My Favorite Part:
My Editing Comments: In the third line you have spines but I think it would sound and read better if you had spine
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I like the strong title and the fact that you wrote this in the 7th grade and it is flying off the paper with talent just shows how creative you really are! I love this whole poem and it is full of emotion, creativity, it's clever, unique, certainly one of a kind, and amazing!
My Favorite Part: I love this whole poem from the beginning to the very end andI could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You really do have away with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can not only see but feel as well and to me that is talent! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by your title and your description. And as I step inside I found a very clever, honest, full of emotion, well thought out, and very creative. I remember when I was a teenager feeling these same things so on an adult perspective it gives one something to think about and your are right not all of us adults are like that!
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed this whole poem from beginning to end and I think my thing is ~ I like that it brought back feelings that I had when I was a teenager! Great Job!!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you can paint a very clear picture of your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel, continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by your title and by your description and as I came on in to read your poem I found it clever, troublesome, heartfelt, sad and exciting and really creative.
My Favorite Part: I like the whole poem from beginning to end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
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I also love all the images that you have at the bottom. You are so talented and have such away with words and you left me wanting more!! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing! I would have given this five stars had you allowed ratings!
