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First of all, Congratulations! Very creative, and exciting and so enjoyable. You really have away with words! You're right, who can resist a pencil that sharp?
My Favorite Part:
I absolutely love and enjoyed this whole piece from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything at all that needs any kind of editing.
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My Thoughts:
I love recipes and I love to cook so I was excited to come in and I love your very creativity and I love how you made me fee welcome and left me wanting more. Thank you for the recipes!
My Favorite Part:
I have to say that I love this menu from the very beginning to the very end. Great Job!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by the title and the description and as I step in I was loving this very clever, unique, one of a kind, very creative poem.
My Favorite Part:
I enjoyed the whole poem but the line Nature's beauty surrounded the cabin, just stood out to me.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was completely drawn in by the Title, I mean who doesn't like Chocolate? I was also curious by the description! Wow! What a wonderful piece you have here. Very charming, creative, welcoming, well thought out. Great information and love the whole lay out.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this whole piece, as I love to learn new things and I so love chocolate!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description and as I step in to read I was happy that I did so as you really do have away with words as you know just how to reel your readers in!
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this poem and I love it from the very beginning to the very end!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything at all that needs editing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and the description and I am began to read I was really into your wonderful and very beautiful, heart felt and very creative poem
My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the whole thing hands down I really enjoyed this whole poem and I can not pick just one things out of this charming poem!
My Editing Comments:I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a wonderful piece and place that you have here. Very creative, unique, a one of a kind and I love the layout and how you broke every thing down. This is very warm and welcoming!
My Favorite Part: I love the whole thing from the beginning to the very end
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and as I began to read I was totally taken in with your words and oho wouldn't it be something for the mind to trade places with the soul even for just one day!
My Favorite Part: To be honest the whole piece is my favorite part from the beginning to the very end and there is no way I could possibly pick just one thing!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description and as I step inside I was drawn in by your little story in a poem that is very clever, unique, a one of a kind and a very creative poem! You really do have away with words as you can paint a very clear picture that your readers can see and your readers can also feel as well and that to me is talent. You left me wanting more! Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
What a really charming, creative, unique, a one of a kind, and very creative place that you have created here and you made it friendly for everyone by welcoming everyone and I think that is a wonderful ideal. I find it interesting because I do both sometimes organized writing things out and then times just by the seat of my pants! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and the description. A very clever, unique, one of a kind, and very creative poem. Full of talent even at 13!
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end but to me the very first line stood out to me: I stand alone on center stage.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious about the description and so I came on in to read with wonderful, clever, one of a kind, and very creative poem. I also like the description at the bottom of your poem letting your readers know about the forum of Pleiades and even giving the background of Pleiades and also giving a link to check this out ~ Love that!
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy the whole poem from the beginning to the very end this just stood out to me, solitary star: wish
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing
My Suggestions: continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a very well thought out, creative, unique, clever, and a one of a kind poem. A very inspiring read and you got it from a picture? Excellent job. For someone who doesn't know anything about poetry you sure do write it pretty good. I like it how it makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end, but I really liked it reading it from the bottom up!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Suggestions: I like how you can reel your readers in as you paint a very clear picture that your readers can see and you also make them feel and to me that is talent. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a very creative, well thought out, charming, unique, and a one of a kind poem that you have written here.
My Favorite Part: You dedicating your wonderful poem to the 5th and 6th graders at the School that is across from your office. I really enjoyed this poem.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Suggestions: You do have such a wonderful way with words. I like how you can draw your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you can make your readers feel as well and to me that is talent. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else..
My Thoughts: What a very interesting poem. I like the way it rhymes and the way it flows. I like the title and I really like the introduction that you give at top of your poem, very helpful.
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed this poem from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have away with words, you know just how to reel your readers in and paint a very clear picture that your readers and see and they can also feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! I really like this poem and the break down is really great too. Envy, greed, lust, pride, wrath etc. I love the way your poem flows and really goes together. I like that you give your readers something to think about.
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say that I really enjoyed your poem here from the very beginning to the very end, and could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Suggestions: You really do have such away with words and you really paint such a very clear picture with your words that your readers can really see and not just see but feel and to me that is talent. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
Love the newsletter and the images. And I agree black cats get a bad rap. You are so right, Halloween would not be the same without black cats! I love your newsletters and I look forward to everyone of them The two of you are very talented
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a really clever, unique, one of a kind, and a really creative piece that you have written here. I really like the break down and I really like everything that you say like for kindness, charity etc.
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say that I really love this whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job.
My Closing Comments: You know just how to reel your readers in as you have such away with words and you can paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and you also know just how to make your readers feel and to me that is talent.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! Very touching, heartfelt, unique, a one of a kind, a great dedication to your Dad, and a very creative poem indeed.
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say that I love this poem, and that I love this poem from the very beginning to the very end. I am really moved and touched by your poem and it makes me wish that I had meet your Dad.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job
My Closing Comments: You are very talented and have such away with words, you know just how to reel your readers in and paint such a really good and clear picture that your readers can see and can also feel and to me that is talent.
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! Very thought provoking, clever, unique, one of a kind, and creatively written. I like the way the poem flows and makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy the whole poem from the beginning to the end, this just stood out to me: Soaring through the skies, alone surrounded
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and can paint a picture that your readers not only can see but can also feel
My Claimer: I am happy to read your letter/memo. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a well thought out, clever, unique, one of a kind, and a very creative piece in which you have written here. I think we all wonder from time to time, what heaven is like.
My Favorite Part:
My Editing Comments: In the last sentence, where you say: Well, it's Heaven, it okay. The it okay should be like this: it's okay. But it does not take away from your clever and very creative piece that you have written here.
My Closing Comments: You have a way with words, Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
What a wonderful piece that you have written here. All good facts and great information about Audrey Hepburn. A very classy lady indeed. I love the way you told this and how you come across as creative, clever, unique, very interesting, and inviting. I love the images that you have put in here as well as they really go along with your piece. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My disclaimer: I am happy to read poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Love the title. Love the flow of your poem, and the way it made me feel. Sad how others think and act but I love the way you brought it out in a very clever, unique, a one of a kind, well thought out and a very creative poem.
My Favorite Parts: I can honestly say that I enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and write such a clear picture that your readers can see and feel very well. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! I love the way this poem flows as I am completely drawn into this very clever, creative, one of a kind, unique, and very wonderful written poem.And I love how it makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: I honestly love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and you know just how to reel your readers in like a web as you can make them see and feel what you are saying and that is real talent to me. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
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