Love the newsletter and the images. And I agree black cats get a bad rap. You are so right, Halloween would not be the same without black cats! I love your newsletters and I look forward to everyone of them The two of you are very talented
My Disclaimer:I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a really clever, unique, one of a kind, and a really creative piece that you have written here. I really like the break down and I really like everything that you say like for kindness, charity etc.
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say that I really love this whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job.
My Closing Comments: You know just how to reel your readers in as you have such away with words and you can paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and you also know just how to make your readers feel and to me that is talent.
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My Thoughts: Wow! Very touching, heartfelt, unique, a one of a kind, a great dedication to your Dad, and a very creative poem indeed.
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say that I love this poem, and that I love this poem from the very beginning to the very end. I am really moved and touched by your poem and it makes me wish that I had meet your Dad.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job
My Closing Comments: You are very talented and have such away with words, you know just how to reel your readers in and paint such a really good and clear picture that your readers can see and can also feel and to me that is talent.
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My Thoughts: Wow! Very thought provoking, clever, unique, one of a kind, and creatively written. I like the way the poem flows and makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy the whole poem from the beginning to the end, this just stood out to me: Soaring through the skies, alone surrounded
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and can paint a picture that your readers not only can see but can also feel
My Claimer: I am happy to read your letter/memo. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: What a well thought out, clever, unique, one of a kind, and a very creative piece in which you have written here. I think we all wonder from time to time, what heaven is like.
My Favorite Part:
My Editing Comments: In the last sentence, where you say: Well, it's Heaven, it okay. The it okay should be like this: it's okay. But it does not take away from your clever and very creative piece that you have written here.
My Closing Comments: You have a way with words, Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
What a wonderful piece that you have written here. All good facts and great information about Audrey Hepburn. A very classy lady indeed. I love the way you told this and how you come across as creative, clever, unique, very interesting, and inviting. I love the images that you have put in here as well as they really go along with your piece. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: Love the title. Love the flow of your poem, and the way it made me feel. Sad how others think and act but I love the way you brought it out in a very clever, unique, a one of a kind, well thought out and a very creative poem.
My Favorite Parts: I can honestly say that I enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and write such a clear picture that your readers can see and feel very well. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! I love the way this poem flows as I am completely drawn into this very clever, creative, one of a kind, unique, and very wonderful written poem.And I love how it makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: I honestly love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and you know just how to reel your readers in like a web as you can make them see and feel what you are saying and that is real talent to me. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: My Disclaimer: My Claimer: I am happy to read your poetry piece. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was really drawn in by the title and when I step inside I was wrap up into your poem that you have so cleverly, and very creatively created.
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end, I would have to say that the fourth paragraph really stood out to me the most!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You are very talented and really have such away with words, continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and just had to step inside. Wow! What a heart felt, charming, unique, one of a kind, well thought out, and very creative poem that you have written here.
My Favorite Part: Although I really did enjoy the whole poem from beginning to end this is what stood out to me: Your love can not be destroyed.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really have such away with words, continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: My Disclaimer: My Claimer: I am happy to read your poetry piece. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and had to come inside and what a very creative, charming, unique, and a one of a kind poem you have here. I really like the feel and tone of your poem.
My Favorite Parts: Evergreen shadows catch the full moon.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words, continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem, my goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title: Beneath The Spring Rain. I personally just love the rain. You have a wonderful, clever, unique, and very creative
My Favorite Part: I can honestly say I really enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have away with words and you know how to draw your readers in and you can paint a picture so well that not only can your readers see but can feel what you are saying. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem, my goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Catchy title and I had to come on in and I really like the flow and tone of this very clever, creative poem that you have uniquely written.
My Favorite Part: May I not pray that prince charming will come today, today?
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I had to come in and read your poem as the title made me curious and I had to come inside. Such a haunting indeed. I like the little story your poem does weave.
My Favorite Parts: I did enjoy the whole poem however, the second paragraph is what stood out to me the most. Good job.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: Continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing.
Disclaimer: I am happy to read your poem. My goal here is to be helpful and supportive. Please take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was curious by the title and had to come in and read. I was drawn in with your clever, unique, and very creative poem as you sure do have a way with words.
My Favorite Parts: I honestly enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing in this unique poem.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Closing Comments: You really do have a way with words and can make your readers not only see what you are saying but you can make your readers feel what you are writing, and to me that is talent. Continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title which is by the way really catchy and you are really good with words making your readers not only see what you are saying but you make your readers feel what you are saying and to me that is talent. This is a really clever, well thought out, create, unique, and a one of a kind poem that i really enjoyed reading
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job.
My Final Comments: Continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Thoughts: Wow! You really do have a way with words and can make your readers not only see but feel what you are saying. Your poem is inspiring. I love the way it flows and the way it makes me feel. This is a really clever, unique, one of a kind, and creative poem.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comment: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Final Comments: Keep being creative, continue sharing, and most of all keep writing
My thoughts: I really love the images that you have at the bottom of your well written and creative short short. I love the way you tell your story and I feel like I am a part of it all wrap up into it as you leave me wanting more. You have such a way with words and can really make your readers feel what you are saying as well as see and to me that is real talent.
My Favorite Part: I honestly enjoyed this whole little story from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any editing.
My Final Comments: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Rating: Five Stars Well that is what I would have rated if you were excepting ratings.
Good morning! I love the image you have at the very top of your contest. You really thought your contest through and have created a really great contest. I love how you broke down every rule which makes your contest really very organized and your prizes are very generous too! Good luck with your contest!
My Thoughts: Love the title: Earth's Poem. And a very clever description too. What a wonderful, truthful, clever, creative, unique and a one of a kind poem that you have written here. Love it!
My Favorite Parts: I love this poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing in the poem at all.
My Final Comments: I really like the way this poem is, keep sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing as you really do have a way with words and you can make you readers feel as well as see what it is that you are saying!
My Thoughts: I was grab by the title and curious by the description and I just had to come in and what a very well organized, well thought, clever, creative, unique, a one of a kind new paper. Full of all kinds of goodies and a really good lay out too!
My Favorite Part: I honestly like the whole thing from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Final Comments: Keep being really creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Thoughts: I like the title and your description. I love how anything can inspire us all to write and I think your poem is clever, unique, honest, and very creative. I like the way your poem flows.
My Favorite Parts: Truth is, I enjoyed this poem from the very beginning to the very end and could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Final Comments: Keep sharing, keep being creative and I love how you can make your readers also feel as well as make them see what you are writing! Keep Writing.
My Thoughts: Wow a wonderful story that you have here. What a really creative, unique, story in which you have written here. I like the way your story unfolds as you really do have away with words as you can make your readers not only see what you are saying but you can make them feel what you are saying. A what a picture you have written indeed. You really give enough detail that your readers can feel as if they are more than drawn in and I like that a lot. Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Editing Commits: I did not see anything that would need any kind of editing.
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My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the Title and description. Very heartfelt, warm and yes your Mom will always be in your heart And some day you will see her again!
My Favorite Part: I truly love this poem from the beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick one thing as the whole poem stood out to me!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Final Comments: Keep sharing, keep being creative, I so enjoy your talent as it rolls right off the pages and you have this way of making your readers not only see what you are writing, but you can make your readers feel so keep writing!
My Rating: Five stars Well, if you were allowing rating that is what I would have gave
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My Thoughts: I love the images that you have up at the top. You are creative, funny, charming, and have such away with words, I feel like I know you just a little better by reading your journal here!
My Favorite Part: Although I have enjoyed the whole thing that you have in here so far I would have to say the indoor traffic entry stood out the most!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any editing.
My Final Comments: Keep sharing, Keep being creative, Keep most of all keep writing
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