My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very charming, clever, unique, and really creative poem. I like the way your poem flows and you really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for all your readers to see and you sure do know just how to make your readers feel.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of keep writing
Hello! I was drawn in and curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a charming, clever, and creative poem. I love the rain so I enjoyed your poem from the beginning to the end and this one sentence stood out to me the most: Eventually he becomes part of the gloom.
Lots of people put gloom and rain together yet I love the rain to me it is soothing, calming, relaxing, and I hear tell that it is good sleeping weather too!
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
What a wonderful place that you have here. Well organized, well thought out, very welcoming. Very creative. Very easy to follow and understand. Love each section that you have here and I love going into every link that you have in this form
My Favorite Parts:
The truth is I love everything that you have here in your forum from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing! Great job!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions:
Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by your description and as I step inside I found a very thought provoking, enlightening, honest, heartfelt, clever, unique, and very very creative poem. The very first line: The burning ridge... not only stood out to me but pulled me right on in. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture that your readers can really see and you have this way of making your readers feel what you are saying.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end but as I said before the very first line stood out to: The burning ridge. There is just something about that, that stands out to me.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and weaving your words, keep shairng, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description. As I came on in I found a very thought provoking poem that is well thought out, clever, unique, very creative, and a one of a kind poem. You have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see but feel as well. I was weaved in by your first line; Sleeping for 45 years.
My Favorite Parts:
I really like the whole poem here and I could not pick just one certain things as it all goes together so very well.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing
My Suggestions:
Keep being creative and weaving your words that paint a very clear picture, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in by your by your title and description and who can not relate to rumors? As I step on in I found a very honest, real, well thought out, passionate, clever and very creative poem. I like the way your poem unfolds. You have a way with words that paints a very clear picture that your readers can see and also feel.
My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely like this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I also like the way your poem makes me feel.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all. Good job!
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and pouring out your heart as you weave your words to drawn in your readers, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I have a new twist to Snow and I really enjoyed the whole poem as it is very clever, well thought out, and very creative. You really have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for all your readers to see and also feel.
My Favorite Parts:
I love the way your whole poem goes as it has it has a flow and I enjoyed it from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs editing. Great job!
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and painting a very clear picture, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
Good evening! I was both drawn in and curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very honest, charming, delightful, unique, a one of a kind, clever, and very creative poem. I was completely drawn in by the very first line for he does know our thoughts! You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you can also make your readers feel as well. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, charming, full of emotion, a one of a kind poem, and very creative.
I like the way your poem unfolds and I really like how it makes me feel but this one thing I must know, what does the line: Mea culpa, mea culpa dulce est. Mean?
You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you sure know just how to make your readers feel!
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found my self grab by your words right from the start! This is very well thought out, charming, full of emotion, one of a kind poem, and very creative piece that you have here and love this poem and those words I can't leave myself, I've tried stick out in this poem!
You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you can also make your readers feel!
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in, I found a very charming, fun loving, clever, unique, a one of a kind poem that is very creative and well thought out. Caring for other! You do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see. Love how this poem makes me feel.
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was both drawn in and curious by the title and the description.and as I step inside I found an interesting plot, clever, creative piece you have here as you really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for your reader to see and not only see but your readers can feel what you are saying and I love the twist and plot as well. I did not see anything that needs any editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing. You have left me wanting more please let me know what happens I need to know!!
I was curious by both the title and the description and as I came on in I found a very well thought out, clever, unique and very creative poem. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture that your readers can see and not only see but feel. I enjoyed the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
Congratulations on being nominated oho that would have been wonderful had you won.
Wow, who wouldn't want to be a princess and cousin to Jane? I sure would love to be! Oho I love tea.
I love your Jane Austen newsletter. I learn so much and you are very creative and I just love the way you present the newsletter, well organize, well thought, and full of good information and Angel does a wonderful job with your images
I am so glad I am part of your Jane Austen Group. I need to buy some of her books and start writing about them in the group!
I was both drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and as I came on in I found thing very well thought out and charming and you give good choices as well. You are very creative and good luck with your poll here. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in by both your your title and your description and so I had to come on in as I did, I was hooked by the very first paragraph as you really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture. A charming, and very creartive poem. I like how this poem makes me feel. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
Autumn is my favorite season and so I ran across your poem here and I had to come on in. I love your poem from the beginning to the very end and you really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture ((Winter is coming)) and you know how to make your readers feel too. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
Good morning! You have been gifted a week of sunshine from Alexi
I had to come on in here and have a look around in your C-Note shop. You have a very well thought out, charming, inviting, warm, something for everyone, reasonable and very adorable. You have a wonderful heart and I am so glad I ran across you here in writing dot com. Keep sharing, continue being very creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts: Wow! What a deep poem you have written here. I was drawn in by both your title and your description and as I step inside I found a very well thought out, clever, unique, charming, a one of a kind, and very creative poem you have here. I like the way it makes me feel as it also makes me think. You really do have a wonderful way with words as you know just how to paint a picture that your readers can see, and they can also feel as well, and me that is talent!
My Favorite Parts: I love your whole poem from the very beginning to the the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything tha needs any kind of editing at all. Good job!
My Suggestions: Continue sharing, keep being creative, and most of all keep writing!
What a beautiful newsletter! I love the whole thing. Y'all really do a wonderful job with the newsletters and thank you so much for allowing me to be a part of your newsletters! I really do enjoy reading them Keep up the wonderful job that the two of you do.
I love the title and the description in fact I understand the description completely and as I came on in, I was into it by these lines alone; Precious time. Irretrievable time. Months, years. The time it takes, To disappear into one's self.
Okay, To disappear into ones self you do not have the ' before the s. But I have read these lines alone three times! Very catchy indeed.
You really do have a way with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can see and you can also make your readers feel as well and to me that is talent!
Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in and curious by your title and your subscription. And as I came on in I found it to be clever, unique, a one of a kind, interesting, educational, surprising, well thought out and very creative. I was surprised that there was no mention of 1965 where they march on that bridge in Selma and all the bad things that happened when they were fighting for Voting Rights! Martin Luther King was a good leader and a lot of people do not realize this but he was for everyone! Anyway your piece is very enjoyable. I was only a child a young child when that went on but thought since it is part of history and it would be fitting in your piece here. No, I am not saying you should add it I am merely mentioning it as it made me thought of it because of your piece that you have and I believe changes in those times were made and most of them were for the better even though nowadays they are trying to take people back to the 20's - 60's as they are trying to take rights away. Your piece here, as you can see has inspired me!
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was curious by the title and subject line and as I step inside I found this piece to be clever, well thought out, unique, a one of a kind piece and creative as you give your readers something to think about. You do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture and not only can your readers see what you are saying but they can feel as well. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
Good morning! I was drawn in by both your title and your subscription though in your subscription the think the word mu should probably be the word my. As I step on in I found a very charming, clever, unique, a heartfelt, and very creative poem. You really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and not only see but feel. I was drawn in by the first few lines as this line stood out to me the most: I walk softly, quietly when I want to run I whisper! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
What a wonderful place you have here. I was curious by the title and the description and as I step inside I was welcomed by your very creative image and I like the set up of your challenge as well. Your rules are easy to understand and follow and your prizes are very generous too. And your place here is the first that I have ever seen with a Cash Prize Policy. Very is a very clever, unique, one of kind, and very creative challenge that you have here. Along with the reivew, I would like to donate 30,000 to your challenge. Hope that it helps, and I look forward to the merit badge too. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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