My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title of your poem and I was curious by the description and as I step inside I found a very charming, clever, unique, wonderful, uplifting and very creative poem.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to the end I like the part when you wanted to pluck the yellow rose but decided to leave alone and grow even though it did not belong in that garden of red roses. For sometimes it is better to stand out from the rest. I did enjoy the your poem.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything at all that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I like that you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see as you do have a way with words and you even left me wanting more! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and description and as I step inside I found a charming and creative poem and I like the way it seems to go together.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: Up at the top {{c:navy} you need to take off the first { so that your color will be navy see what I mean>
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description, and as I step inside I found a long but pretty good story. Fill of information and drama and it was creative.
My Favorite Part: It was an enjoyable story and I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end.
My Editing Comments: I did not find anything that needs editing.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description and as I step on in to read your poem I found it amazing, charming, unique, a one of a kind poem, and very creative.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anyting that needs any kind of editing in any kind of way at all.
My Suggestions: I love the way you have with words as you draw your readers in as you know just how to paint a very clear picture and you know just how to make your readers feel and you absolutely left me wanting even more!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by your title and curious by your description and as I came on in to read your poem I found it charming, unique, a one of a kind, clever, funny, and very creative
My Favorite Part: I really did enjoy this whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in by the title: Among The Branches and as I step inside I found this wonderful image that to me was very inviting and I found a very clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative poem
My Favorite Part: Living life among the branches is what really stood out in this poem to me but I still enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing in any way at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: WOW! I was completely drawn in by the title and even more curious by the description and as I came on in to read I was completely wrapped into this poem that is more like a story and I found it full of heart, honesty, unique, a one of a kind, clever, emotional, and very creative.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love the way you have with words as you know just how to weave your readers in as you know just how to paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know just how to make your readers feel and I love that you left me wanting more!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in and curious by both the title and the description and I love the picture you have for this item and that is very inviting to me. And as I came on in to read your poem, I found a very creative, unique, one of kind, clever and very charming poem here!
My Favorite Part: I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love that you have such a way with words that you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know just how to make them feel and I like that you left me wanting more. Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I love these kinds of poems and I know that the double ones are a little harder and I see you did a wonderful job writing this type of poem. Very clever, unique, a one of a kind, and very creative. I like the way it just rolls very smoothly as you read this poem.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely enjoyed this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all in any way.
My Suggestions: You have a way with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and you know just how to make your readers feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was drawn in and curious at the same time by the title with description as it is the same and as I came in to read this poem I found that it was realistic, honest, truth, clever, unique, a one a kind, and very creative. And you left me wanting me.
My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the very last paragraph. Though I did enjoy the whole poem from beginning to the end the last paragraph is what stood out to me the most!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Suggestions: Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
First I love the images up at the top and I so like the layout too. Music is wonderful and you have creative another wonderful, delightful, charming place here! You are really good with words and know just how to paint a clear picture for your readers to see and you know just how to make them feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description and as I step inside I found a delightful story poem that was well thought out, clever, charming, unque, one of a kind, and very creative. You really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know how to make them feel and you left me wanting more! Keep sharing and continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
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I was drawn in by the title and curious by the description! Short but to the point and in away some have never look at before as this poem is pack with energy, it is unique, clever, well thought, executed well, a one of a kind, and very creative! I like it from the beginnging to the end, I like the flow of this poem and it makes you stop and think of all the things that people have gone through that have been in a war and it appears that most people don't give the time of day or even care and noone really thinks about the aftermath of a war!
You really do have away with words and you left me wanting more! Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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Wow! I love this 12 months of Christmas project! Very unique, giving, charming, and so very creative. You are very talented and have such a way with words. I love how you ended with where it was July 25th five months to Christmas! You are very talented! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
I will see you sometime tomorrow for another review!
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I was drawn in by the title and the description and who doesn't like clowning around from time to time. This piece is very enjoyable, creative, unique, charming, one of a kind and clever. You really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you can make your readers feel as well. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
This review is from your: Secret Santa and you will be getting three reviews today Courtesy of: "Days Of Sunshine" and then one reveiw tomorrow, and one review Friday!
First let me say you have a wonderful place here!
I like the title of this poem as you really do have away with words. I like the title and the description and the line: I am surrounded by new life really stood out to me. I like spring though fall is my most favorite! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing
You have a well thought out, and very creative contest. You rules are easy and simple enough to follow and do and your prizes are very generous too. I do have one question because I really do not know, LGBT now I think I know what LG is but I really do not know what BT means could you please explain this to me? I think you have a wonderful contest and keep being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
Oh I love this! Very creative and it is a wonderful a Christmas tree! With a star at the top and hmmmm chocolate for the stand!! You are so talented. And you are right: joy, hope, peace, and believe all part of Christmas. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
I would like to wish you a very Merry Christmas
My Thoughts: I like the title and the description and as I came on in a found a charming, delightful, heartfelt, well thought and creative poem
My Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and could not possibly pick just one thing, but I can tell you I really like how this poem made me feel ~ excited, and happy and full of that Christmas Magic!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing.
My Suggestions: Keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I like the title and was also curious by the title and the description and as I step inside I found a very clever, well thought out, unique, one of a kind, intense and very creative short story in which you left me want more!
My Favorite Part: To be honest I was wrapped up into this whole story from beginning to end and I could not possibly pick just one single thing! Great job.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: I love how you story tell as you know how to paint a very clear picture of your readers to plainly see and you know just how to make your readers feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I like the title and the description. And interest piece, clever, honest, fore right, creative poem that you have written here.
My Favorite Part: I really like the whole thing from beginning to the end and could not pick just one single thing.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Suggestions: Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! What a charming, delightful, unique, a one of a kind, and a creative poem that that you have so cleverly made.
My Favorite Part: I absolutely really enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end and I couldn't possibly pick just one single thing!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You really have away with words! Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I was curious by the title and even more curious by the description and so I had to step in side and I find this poem charming, unique, welcome, creative. I like the style and how it makes me feel.
My Favorite Part: To be honest I enjoyed the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing. Good job!
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have away of reeling your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you know how to make your readers feel. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: I like the title and the description and as I step inside I see a very heart warming, charming, and nicely creative poem.
My Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole poem, from beginning to end.as you express your feelings of love.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else.
My Thoughts: Wow! I really enjoyed this very clever, charming, unique, one of a kind, and a very creative poem. I like the title and the descrption as it drew me ins
My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed the whole poem, to me the last paragraph and the very last line is what stood out to me.
My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions: You have away of painting a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see so keep being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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