My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
What a really clever, unique, an interesting piece and very creative and I also like how just a couple of words are in bold to stand out.
My Favorite Parts:
Razor-Blade!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by your title and as I came on in I found a really well thought out, thought provoking piece, educational, clever, a one of a kind for sure and very creative piece.
My Favorite Parts:
I sincerely really do like the whole thing.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
What a wonderful piece as you make a very clear point! Well thought out, clever and really creative as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoye the whole piece and it all goes perfectly together and so I would not pick just one single line.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found and as I came on in, I found a unique, honest, well thought out, clever, a one of a kind and very creative poem!
My Favorite Parts:
I was taken in right from the start and enjoyed this whole piece all the way through and as it all fits together so wonderfully I could not possibly pick just one line! I love the whole piece!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative while you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever and creative piece here and you do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed the whole piece, but I would say the first paragraph is my favorite as that is where I started picturing what you were saying.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was both drawn in and very curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very interesting, well thought out, unique, clever and very creative piece. You really do have a way with words as you draw your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed this whole entire piece from the very beginning to the very end. I love both cats and dogs though my most favorite animal of all has always been a tiger! Though I will never have one, though I have had cats and dogs!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creaitve and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and I am came on in I found a well thought out, one of a kind, unique, clever and very creative piece here as you weave your web drawing me in completely as paint a very clear picture for me to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I actually enjoyed this whole entire piece from the very beginning to the vrey end and there is no way I can pick just one line!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative as you paint a really clear picture, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very interesting, well thought out clever, unique and creative poem. I like how you paint a picture for your readers to clearly see.
My Favorite Parts:
I honestly like the whole poem from the beginning to the very end. However the lines "Just the beauty and sadness" really do stand out to me.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing.
My Suggestions:
If you break up your paragraph a little more it would be easier to read. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
It looks like this may be a really interesting good group, but I would like to see more? And read more about it.
My Favorite Parts:
A group for people who like to write fantasy and poems
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing
My Suggestions:
Tell us more about this group, what does one do if they wanna join? What are your rules?
My Rating:
Is three stars it would have been more and When you add more I will change it because I think it deserves more, but I wanna see more!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, well thought, a one of kind story, very creative and well thought out. I like how you paint the picture for me to see what you are saying.
My Favorite Parts:
I actually enjoyed the whole piece and it all goes well together and I can not simply just pick one piece.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description And as I came on in I found a very clever, well thought out, clever and a very creative piece here. I like the words that stick in my head of "how the door closes". You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for all of your readers to see. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars.
First let me say, WOW!! You need to give more details!! I was completely drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very thought provoking, witting, daring, a cliffhanger, unique, for sure a one of a kind and very creative piece that you have here! I do wish you would have broken up or spaced out some of your sentencing for an easy read. You sure do have a way with words as a paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you certainly know just how to leave your readers hanging and wondering what else happened! My rating is 4 and a half stars. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in a found a very clever, unique, heartfelt, a one of a kind, thought provoking and very creative. I like the way you reel your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel as well. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very thought provoking, unique, a one of kind, clever and a very creative poem. You rea lly do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to clearly see and you sure do know how to make your readers feel. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars!
Good morning! I was drawn in by your title " Fallen Angel" and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative piece. I enjoyed it from the very beginning to the very end and I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars.
I was drawn in by the title and the description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, a one of a kind, well thought out and very creative. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only can your readers see, but they can feel as well. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing. My rating is five stars.
Wow I did not know that they did not celebrate Thanksgiving in New England I make a lot of the European people that came to America are happy that they really did!! Oh I did not dress up for Halloween either, if I would have I dunno what I would have dressed up as though
Wow!! It sure would be nice to own something that was Jane Austen's and not for sale either I would really wanna keep it!! My goodness how sad that in the 17th century stone shield from a demolished house near her birthplace sold for $2,500 in London. That is really sad huh?
I am with you, I bet she was one of the nicest people ever. I would have loved to have spent a day with her too!
I absolutely enjoyed this news letter and I look forward to the next one! Thank you so much for all the info you give me in your newsletters! I love to learn. I will go check out your links at the bottom and if I haven't already I will be fanning each place so that I can keep coming back!! I love this place!!
Keep sharing, Continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
What another wonderful Jane Austen Newsletter! Love it!!
I agree with you, let's keep Jane Austen and supernatural separate. Although I would love to read and see the movie Northanger Abbey. Let me know what ya think after you read the book and watch the movie! I also love all the facts that you give as well and all the images are wonderful as well.
Keep writing these wonderful Jane Asten Newsletters, Keep sharing and keep being creative
I rate this wonderful newsletter five and a half stars!
I was both drawn in and very curious by the title and the description and when I came on in I was lured more in with your story by with the first sentence! I love when a story can grab me like that! It started out like any other day. Who’d have thought it’d end up so differently? is a really great way to start your story! A really good mystery and I enjoyed how it all unfolds as you have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Keep sharing, continue painting your picture for your readers to see and being creative and most of all keep writing! I rate this short story, five stars!
I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a charming, enlightened, funny, unique, well thought out, very enjoyable and very creative little story. I like how you can drawn in your readers with the picture that you paint so clear for your readers to see. The whole story is enjoyable from the beginning to the the very end. I rate this five stars. Continue being creative and weaving your web of a a painted story, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I step on in I was into your story just by the first line, I mean how many times have we fell asleep and thought as we had opened our eyes and looked around!? What a clever, unique, a one of a kind, thought provoking, well thought out and very creative poem! I was wondering why he was lost and could not remember his way home until the end a little suspense is always good! You have a way with words as you weave your web drawing your readers in and taking them on a ride as the story unfolds full fold and I for one enjoyed the journey! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My rating is five stars!
Hello! I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, charming, heart warming, unique, a one of a kind and very creative poem. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and also feel.
Continue being creative and painting that picture, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very charming, unique, clever and very creative and I really enjoy your poem.
My Favorite Parts:
To be truthful I enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one line as your whole poem goes together.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and painting a picture that your readers can clearly see and not just see but, feel and see what you are saying, Keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
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is a really great way to start your story! A really good mystery and I enjoyed how it all unfolds as you have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Keep sharing, continue painting your picture for your readers to see and being creative and most of all keep writing! I rate this short story, five stars!