This is really good. You have a lot of women who have influenced you in one way or another and I think that is really good. I never got to meet my grandparents but, I sure hope my grandchildren think of me as an influence to them! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing
You have a wonderful place here, very neat and well thought out as you help others. I love the images that you have all through here to makes it feel more welcoming! Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do
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Wow! What an interesting way of looking at this as I was drawn in and even curious by both your title and your description as I could really picture what you were saying as I read it not once but twice and I like the way the rhythm goes and even the rhyme is good. You are very creative and have such away with words. I like this alot.
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I like everything about this poem and there is no way I would even try to pick just one line as each line really goes together making this a wonderful poem!
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I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep weaving your words and giving your readers something to think about, keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
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I was really drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came right on in I found a very clever, a one of a kind, unique, well thought out and very creative poem! I really like this poem as you weave your words and creative a web for your readers to really get into as a clear picture is what your readers can see!
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I enjoyed this whole piece, however, the line the planets and the moon is what stood out the most!
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I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep painting that picture for your readers to see, keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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I was drawn in by your title can curious by your description and as I came on in I found this very delightful, clever, unique and very creative poem. I was very into your poem as you have such a good way with words as you paint a picture for your readers to see and not only can your readers see but they can feel what you are saying! I also like the rythm and the rhyme in your poem.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed the whole poem and I like that that you put what style your poem is at the bottom too.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep sharing, continue being creative, keep painting that picture that your readers can see and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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I was both drawn in and curious by both your description and your title and as I step inside I found a very heartfelt, sincere, clever, well thought out and very creative letter. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to really see and not only see but feel.
My Favorite Parts:
I love your whole letter that you have so creativity written from the heart.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever and very creative poem that you have here. You have a way with words as you paint a clear picture for your readers to see!
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and the line, help me in changing you is what really stood out to me!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
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I was drawn in by both your title and your description and as I step on in I found a very heartfelt, sincere, honest, clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative piece. I can really relate as I have two beautiful daughters, who are grown, on their own, with families of their own!
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed your piece here from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single line as it all fits so well together!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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I absolutely love the way this poem makes me feel! I was drawn in by the title and description and as I came on in I found a wonderful, full of inspiration, clever, unique, a one of a kind and a very creative poem. You really have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only can you make your readers see but feel as well. Love this poem.
My Favorite Parts:
I love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and there is no way I could pick just one single line as your whole poem really does go together!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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I was completely drawn in by your title and description and can also relate as there are times that I myself have trouble sleeping! As I came on in found an honest, relatable, clever and very creative poem and one I totally can honestly say I relate too! I an officially a fan
My Favorite Parts:
I like this whole poem and relate to this poem and to me the whole poem goes together and I could not possibly pick just one line.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was both drawn in by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a delightful, charming, honest, heartfelt, clever and very creative poem. Good memories of an actor I am glad to hear you have. You really have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only cany your readers see, but they can feel as well.
My Favorite Parts:
I love this poem! From the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one line as your whole poem goes perfectly together! Great job!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in by the title and also curious by the title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever and charming poem. I like the way it goes together the rhythm and the rhyme.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the very end. And I think that the very last paragraph sums up the whole poem
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing
Oh I can't wait to hear what you think about JANE AUSTEN: A LIFE BY: CLAIRE TOMALIN, in your next newsletter of course Oho Megan (Denise) I love your newsletter and I am so glad to be apart of the group which I have fan so that I can easily find it and I will make sure I fan the writing place to come and write stories in.
Wow! What a heartfelt, clever, honest, sincere, well thought out and very creative poem that you have here! You really do have such away with words that move people and you paint a very clear picture for all your readers to see. You poem here is so true and when people hate it does cancel out love. Ya know you can correct me if I am wrong, but didn't Jesus go to sinners instead of the um religious people who claim to be right with God?
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
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Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very sincere, heartfelt, clever, unique, a one of a kind and very creative poem. You really do have away with as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see but, feel as well.
My Favorite Parts:
I really like your whole poem from beginning to the very end and could not possibly pick just one line! Nice Job.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
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Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing
I like the title of your poem and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever and very creative poem. Short but sweet and made every point of summer indeed! I know a lot of people who have problems with pollen in the air that really trouble their sense and making for very waterful eyes, I am lucky not to have this problem. Your next line hits the summer right in on the head mown grass, sunshine, prickly heat. Yeah aww them summer days And my favorite line is your last line. Longest day beckons! Sometimes it feels like the day will not end. I like summer yet Fall is my most favorite season of all!
I really enjoyed your little poem here. You are very creative and you really do have away with words as you weave your web drawing your readers in and painting a clear picture for your readers to see and not only see but feel. Keep sharing, Continue being creative and clever. And most of all keep writing!
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Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
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Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
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I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description. Anxiety sounds like a really scary thing I know a friend of mine gets these and at times it seems like he is having a heart attack and it is very scary! I like the way that you bring it out and how you make your readers feel what you are saying as well as painting a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really like this poem a lot and I could not possibly pick just one line for the whole poem goes together making a very clear piture. Great job!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative, and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very honest, very open, clever, and very creative and I can see why this would get you thinking!
My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely like this whole piece and I could not pick just one signal thing for it all goes together.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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I was both drawn in and curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very unique, thought provoking as this poem is relatable, clever, honest, and very creative. I like the way your poem unfolds and I like the way it took me back. You really do have a way with words and you paint a very clear picture that your readers can clearly see and not only see, but feel as well.
My Favorite Parts:
I honestly enjoyed your whole poem from beginning to end and I like the fact that with just one word no matter the age it can take you back to that time! And yet, they say words don't hurt!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and weaving your words that catch your readers with a clear picture how only you can do.
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How exciting feathered in the poetry wdc newsletter! I was completly into your poem with the first line as you really do have away with words and you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely love this poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one single line.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
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Five Stars
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What a wonderful poem you have here and it is full of emotion, clever, unique, a one of a kind, and very creative also encouraging! I like your style and they this poem makes me feel. You are very creative and you really have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see. Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing!
What a really clever, and very creative poll you have here. I have a lap top and can write anywhere but use a coffee table in my living room with lots of warm but I can also take it to my bedroom or my kitchen table or anywhere even outside if I wanted to and even at someone else's house Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! I would have given you five stars had you allowed ratings.
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I was curious and drawn in by both your title and description and as I came on in I found a very charming, full of emotion, unique, a one of a kind and very creative. I really like the way your poem flows and you really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all. Great job!
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
My Rating:
Five Stars
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My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was both drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a clever, thought provoking, and creative poem. You really do have away with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to clearly see.
My Favorite Parts:
Although I really did enjoy your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end, I would have to say I really liked the last paragraph the best, something about it just stood out to me.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing
My Disclaimer: Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a charming, passionate, clever, and creative poem. I like the way your poem unfolds and I like the way it makes me feel as you really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you sure can make your readers feel as well.
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed your whole poem from the very beginning to the very end and I could not possibly pick just one thing!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing.
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Oho Megan (Denise) I love your newsletter and I am so glad to be apart of the group which I have fan so that I can easily find it and I will make sure I fan the writing place to come and write stories in. 
And my favorite line is your last line. Longest day beckons! Sometimes it feels like the day will not end. I like summer yet Fall is my most favorite season of all!