I was both drawn into your crossword puzzle by your title and your description and I love Autumn/Fall. You puzzle is short and concise. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! Looking forward to seeing more!
Good morning! You have been gifted a week of "Days Of Sunshine"
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a really welcoming place with lots of goodies inside. It is well organized and well thought out. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing and my rating is five stars. I fanned your place here so I may keep coming back!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found an honest, thought provoking, unique, a one of a kind poem for sure, well thought out, clever and very creative. I like the way your poem made me feel.
My Favorite Parts:
I actually like the whole poem from the beginning to the very end but, I do have to say tat I was completely in by the first paragraph.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative and painting a picture that your readers can clearly see, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, honest, real, sincere and I love the way it makes me feel. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really did enjoy the whole poem from beginning to the very end but, this line right here is what really stood out to me the most, "Someone somewhere is not as happy as you".
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all what so ever.
My Suggestions:
Continue painting that picture, keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
Wow! This is powerful, clever, unique and very creative. I never really thought of memories of moments like this before, but it is so true! Isn't it funny how some memory or other is remembered or even differently than someone else remembers?! Thank you for sharing and giving me another way to look at memory moments! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was really curious by both your title and description and as I came on in I found a lot of action, well thought out, clever and creative.
My Favorite Parts:
I like it all, but my pick would be what you put in bold writing as you said I am tired of your constant tricks!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing and painting a picture for your readers to see.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found out that this was a contest that did not go to well and I am sorry to hear that! Then as I kept reading I found you opened this up again as a new improved refuge. Depression is a terrible thing and can cause a lot of damage.
My Favorite Parts:
I like that you have decided to open this back up!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all
My Suggestions:
Maybe you can define what this is all about. Give us some more details on how this works!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in. Wow! What a really thought provoking poem. Very clever, well thought out and very creative. I love how you paint a picture for your readers to see and you sure can make us feel as well.
My Favorite Parts:
I was taken in with this whole poem and to me it all fits together and there is no way I could pick just one line!
I am such a fan!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue painting that very clear picture, keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in found an interesting poem, well thought, clever and creative.
My Favorite Parts:
I like your poem and this is what stood out to me: As shadows piling on the earth. There is just something about that line.
My Editing Comments:
She lies dead *red*every so often in the flowerbed.
I think the word may sound better with ever
She lies dead ever so often in the flowerbed.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep wriring.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a really good poem and I really like the way it flows. Well thought out, clever and very creative.
My Favorite Parts:
Although I really did enjoy your whole poem, the first paragraph is what stood out the most to me and in that pair a graph this line really stood out to me: "the beauty is mostly in-between"
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creaive, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by both your title and your description.
Wow! What a wonderful poem that is very well thought out, honest, sincere, clever and very creative. I really love the way your poem flows and the words just together as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I absolutely love the whole poem from the very beginning to the very end.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep painting that picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel as well! Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
What a really clever, unique, an interesting piece and very creative and I also like how just a couple of words are in bold to stand out.
My Favorite Parts:
Razor-Blade!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by your title and as I came on in I found a really well thought out, thought provoking piece, educational, clever, a one of a kind for sure and very creative piece.
My Favorite Parts:
I sincerely really do like the whole thing.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
What a wonderful piece as you make a very clear point! Well thought out, clever and really creative as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoye the whole piece and it all goes perfectly together and so I would not pick just one single line.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious by your title and your description and as I came on in I found and as I came on in, I found a unique, honest, well thought out, clever, a one of a kind and very creative poem!
My Favorite Parts:
I was taken in right from the start and enjoyed this whole piece all the way through and as it all fits together so wonderfully I could not possibly pick just one line! I love the whole piece!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative while you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever and creative piece here and you do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I really enjoyed the whole piece, but I would say the first paragraph is my favorite as that is where I started picturing what you were saying.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was both drawn in and very curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very interesting, well thought out, unique, clever and very creative piece. You really do have a way with words as you draw your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I enjoyed this whole entire piece from the very beginning to the very end. I love both cats and dogs though my most favorite animal of all has always been a tiger! Though I will never have one, though I have had cats and dogs!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creaitve and most of all keep writing
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was both curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and I am came on in I found a well thought out, one of a kind, unique, clever and very creative piece here as you weave your web drawing me in completely as paint a very clear picture for me to see.
My Favorite Parts:
I actually enjoyed this whole entire piece from the very beginning to the vrey end and there is no way I can pick just one line!
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all.
My Suggestions:
Continue being creative as you paint a really clear picture, keep sharing and most of all keep writing!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very interesting, well thought out clever, unique and creative poem. I like how you paint a picture for your readers to clearly see.
My Favorite Parts:
I honestly like the whole poem from the beginning to the very end. However the lines "Just the beauty and sadness" really do stand out to me.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any editing.
My Suggestions:
If you break up your paragraph a little more it would be easier to read. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
It looks like this may be a really interesting good group, but I would like to see more? And read more about it.
My Favorite Parts:
A group for people who like to write fantasy and poems
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing
My Suggestions:
Tell us more about this group, what does one do if they wanna join? What are your rules?
My Rating:
Is three stars it would have been more and When you add more I will change it because I think it deserves more, but I wanna see more!
My Greeting:
Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy. I know that I will enjoy my visit and I will more and likely be back another time or two.
My Disclaimer:
Hello! Please keep in mind that all, I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, and my suggestions, feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging and helpful.
My Thoughts:
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very clever, well thought, a one of kind story, very creative and well thought out. I like how you paint the picture for me to see what you are saying.
My Favorite Parts:
I actually enjoyed the whole piece and it all goes well together and I can not simply just pick one piece.
My Editing Comments:
I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing.
My Suggestions:
Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing.
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description And as I came on in I found a very clever, well thought out, clever and a very creative piece here. I like the words that stick in my head of "how the door closes". You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for all of your readers to see. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars.
First let me say, WOW!! You need to give more details!! I was completely drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very thought provoking, witting, daring, a cliffhanger, unique, for sure a one of a kind and very creative piece that you have here! I do wish you would have broken up or spaced out some of your sentencing for an easy read. You sure do have a way with words as a paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and you certainly know just how to leave your readers hanging and wondering what else happened! My rating is 4 and a half stars. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing!
I was drawn in and curious by both your title and your description and as I came on in a found a very clever, unique, heartfelt, a one of a kind, thought provoking and very creative. I like the way you reel your readers in as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel as well. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing. Continue being creative, keep sharing and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars
I was curious and drawn in by both your title and your description and as I came on in I found a very thought provoking, unique, a one of kind, clever and a very creative poem. You rea lly do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to clearly see and you sure do know how to make your readers feel. I did not see anything that needs any kind of editing at all. Keep sharing, continue being creative and most of all keep writing! My rating is five stars!
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