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Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Thought: Wow! You are very creative, and this contest is not only unique and one of a kind it is also well thought out and clever indeed. Your rules are simple and your prizes are very generous.

Favorite Part: The description of each of your three children!

Suggestions: Keep doing all the things you do!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

My Rating: 5 *startb*'s

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Review of Snow Melt  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: You have some really good goals in your place here. I like that you share your first blog and invited us to come visit. I like your guestbook forum and your two polls too. I am pretty sure I have signed your guestbook and I also took both your polls! I also like all your images. And I have enjoyed your entries too! You are very talented Keep writing...

Suggestions: Keep writing!

My Rating: 5 *Starb*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
My Thoughts: This is such a wonderful and heartfelt ideal, very creative, unique and one of a kind! Letters From Home For Christmas how every touching and fills my heart to no end. I am so thankful all all of them as they protect us all *Heart*

I also like how you break it into four parts and it is the most awesome thing that we can all do for Christmas *Heart* and I also like that your contest will be judged on spelling, grammar, punctuation and content!

Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do!

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
You give some really good advice. Thanks for sharing! I have added this to my favorites so that I can come back and do more digging!

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Review of Truth  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thought: Very well written as you weave your words so carefully as you spin them weaving me in so cleverly. Heartfelt, raw, open, and well thought out!

My Favorite Part: Although I really enjoyed the whole poem from beginning to end, paragraph four really stood out to me and in some kind of way reveals the writer's heart of this poem.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing with such a deep heart and soul.

My Rating: Four and Half *Starr*'s

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Review of Haunted  
Review by Sunny
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Very enjoyable poem that you have here. Clever and unique as you weave your words to spin me in!

Favorite Part: The words keep falling easily, like autumn leaves-- we talk so much and say so little. and this last part: I am alone-- once again, I learn to breathe... because it's been so long, but even so, I caught myself dreaming of you again...

These parts just really moved me and jump out at me! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem!

Suggestions: Keep writing!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

My Rating: 4.5 *Starr*'s

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Review of District 12  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thoughts:What a nice poem you have. The first paragraph got my attention but the second paragraph is my favorite part of all, although I did enjoy it all as you spun your words weaving me in, very clever indeed. A nice rhyme as well. It is unique and a one of a kind.

Favorite Part: The Second Paragraph

Suggestions: Keep writing!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

My Rating: 3.5 *Starr*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Wow! A very creative poem as you weave your webs of words and you draw me in! A clever poem full deep emotion indeed.

Favorite Part(s): God gave me the earth, the sun and the moon and My soul I poured into it, growing it mighty and strong, until it soared ever higher and it's rays reached beyond. Now I really did enjoy the whole poem but those lines jump out at me and just got me, love it!

Suggestions: Keep writing!

Errors: I did not see any.

My Rating: 4.5 *Star*'s

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Review of Connie's Corner  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You have a wonderful place here *Smile* Thank you for sharing *Exclaimr*

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Review of Not Alone  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.0)
My Thoughts: A nice little poem you have here. Creative, clever and well thought out

Favorite Part: I really enjoyed the whole poem but this kind of stood out to me: Sitting on a crowded bus going across town. They are not alone

Something about sitting on a crowded bus going across town, suddenly I could just see it!

Suggestions: Keep writing and being creative!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

My Rating: 4 *Staro*'s

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Review of Fairy sig  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a gorgeous fairy *Heart*

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Review of LOTS OF WORDS  
for entry "Brainstormers" 
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love your place here and I am happy to say I am part of the brainstormers and your right it is an awesome group *Smile* I also like your journal you have here *Heart*

Keep writing!!
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Review of Master  
Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Interesting. You do have a way with words. Although there seems to be no puncuation I still like the way it flows.

My Favorite Part: Are the very last two lines, they really stuck out to me. Great job!

Errors: I seen on miss spelling at all.

Suggestions: Keep Writing!

My Rating: 4.5 *Star*'s

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you have a wonderful place here and it is creative, and you get to know things about others as well. Looks like it was well thought out and a unique place as well.

I enjoyed it as I looked all through it. A really nice and enjoying place!

Keep doing all the good things you are doing!

My rating: FIVE *Star*'s

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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Thoughts: What a really cool story you have created here, very clever, unique and you reeled me in right from the start and that makes you talented! I also love the signature / image you have at the top of your story, it really fits very well.

Favorite Part: I enjoyed the whole thing from beginning to end.

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing and being unique and creative!

My Rating: 4.5 *Stary* 's

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Review by Sunny
Rated: E | (5.0)

First I have to say I love your image sig up at the top *Heart* I like that you tell about your delivery service and what you deliver and I especially like that it is stress free for me *Heart* You really do have a unique, special, one of a kind place here and one that is really well thought out *Heart*

Keep doing all the wonderful things that you do *Smile*

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Review of Halloween  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: I like your Chronos poem. Very nice for your first attempt! I really enjoyed it and I could picture the scene as Autumn smells in the air *Smile*

Favorite Part: The whole thing, from beginning to end!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep on writing and being creative!

My Rating: 4.5 *Staro*'s

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very entertaining, clever, unique, funny and well thought out!

Keep writing and being creative

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Review of A Lesson In Less  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thought: A lesson in less, very cleverly and creative.

Favorite Line: The numberless days of a slumberless agony.

Errors:could use some commas and periods in it

Suggestions: Keep writing and being creative!

My Rating: 3.5 *Staro*'s

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you so much for sharing and I enjoyed the memories you shared before the recipes which both sound yummy!
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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A very awesome group you have here! Keep doing all the good and wonderful things that you do *Heart*
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Review of Her Secret  
Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
My Thoughts: Very interesting poem and one I enjoyed very much! And the title fits your poem nicely.

Favorite Part: Even though I enjoyed your poem from beginning to end here is what stuck out at me: She faked a smile everyday. Deep down inside she knew, She wasn’t okay. and one more line: She fools all, including herself. These are the three lines that stood out to me!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep on writing and sharing!

My Rating: 4.5 *Starbr*'s

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Review by Sunny
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
My Thoughts: I really like your poem! Good title too: As Luck Would Have It

Favorite Part: As luck would have it, I have no luck at all and Maybe just maybe luck will become my friend. I really liked these two lines *Smile*

Errors: I did not see any errors

Suggestions: Keep writing!

My Rating: 3.5 *Staro*'s

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Review of God's Telephone  
Review by Sunny
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My Thoughts: I like had you brought this out, very creative

My Favorite Part: Was the very last part: After my sister's funeral, my three-year-old daughter said: "Don't worry. Aunt Jude called on God's telephone and said she's happy."
I just loved that part!

Errors: I did not see any errors.

Suggestions: Keep writing

My Rating: Five *Staro*'s

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for entry "9-24-2012" 
Review by Sunny
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
How sweet *Smile* Sounds nice *Bursto*
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