My Thought: This is really good. You do have a way with words
Favorite Part: Instinct impels one to rise up and hold, A rustle of lace and well known scent,
Warm, caring arms are there to enfold, And banish all those fiends hell-bent. “It’s mother dear, I’ve brought a light I’ll tuck you in and say Good-night.”
My Thought: Great quote! You have a way with words and a keen eye for details!
Favorite Part: A sniff and averted face told me she was going to drag this out, I’ll oblige you dear, but you are going to be surprised. Parts of this made me laugh right out loud!
I really am, I should not have misled you like that. Litchis are nothing like frog’s kidneys.
My Thoughts: Scary, heart breaking and heartfelt, open and honest. You do have a way with words and a great eye for details..
Favorite Part: could no longer work for a place that clearly didn't have compassion or respect for the residents that we were hired to take care of. It blows my mind away how these people landed this job so easily. I searched for some time even after taking numerous courses. It saddens me to see the neglect and abuse that hides behind the walls of some institutions.
I know that the director was "quietly transferred" about six months after I had quit. From what I hear now, the residents are being taken care of and there is no longer any neglect or abuse happening. At least I pray that it's true.
My Thoughts: This is awesome. You have a way with words and a keen eye for details
Favorite Part: Pressure builds, rises, cracks the surface. Without warning gives in
every muscle tenses, every thought turns to the helpless victim. Explodes.
My Thoughts: cute ending! Made laugh right out loud! A pretty good tale I have to say cute and made me think of the drinking problem that people always say they do not have! You have a way with words and a keen eye for details!
Favorite Part: One of the last steps was to identify everyone my writing had harmed and apologize to them. I have done that and now tender this written apology. Written apology? Written? AAAgggghhhhhh.
My Thoughts: This is really good I really like it! You have told the truth
Favorite Part: God used His son as a bridge to meet our needs, Even with our sinfulness, wickedness, and vile deeds. God created the bridge to end the strife, And now we all may have eternal-life.
Favorite Part: I really and truly loved it all but if I were to pick on it would be the very last paragraph!! Which is: There is only now. There is only God and me, and my faith in His power to restore me.
I love that!!!
My Thoughts: Very sweet. Heartfelt, honest, and sincere.. Lovely poem
Favorite Part: A gift unfolded through the Golden Gate. My beloved treasure from far above. Settled in our world on this blessed date. And found me years later to claim my love
Favorite Part: Hoping you will have, a great wonderful day, wishing I could be with you
loving you always, thinking of you this day, thoughts drifting with thee.
Errors: Isn't there suppose to be some kind of comma's or periods?
An Excellent place you have here! Looking forward to more! You have away with words and an excellent eye for details!! Great Job! Keep doing all the wonderful things you do and most of all keep writing!
My Thought: Your off to a pretty good start. You have a keen eye for detail and a pretty good way with words.
Favorite Part: Having a family can be a very good thing, although at some times we all have wished we didn’t. Oh how true a statement or sentence is sure is!!
Errors: bedroom bathroom bedroom…). maybe just the three periods will do.
Favorite Parts: There is no moon tonight out come the vampires, lost people, flat tires and she wants to fight. and also this line: This is love caught in a storm where bad habits are born.
My Thoughts: First let me say that I love the siggie it really livens up you wonderful poem as I think it is a really awesome poem and I love the way it flows and the way you made a certain line stand out!
Favorite Part} is the very first paragraph, it just out at me and I can see it and I like it when I can do that.
My Thoughts: This is really good. You have a way with words and a great eye for details. I could picture you story here and enjoyed doing so.
Favorite Part: The newspaper made that crackling sound as he folded another page back, trying desperately to make that crease that never wanted to go just right in it so you could read it and hold it at the same time. I was thinking about how many times I myself tried desperately to make that same crease that never wanted to go back!!
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cute ending! Made laugh right out loud! A pretty good tale I have to say cute and made me think of the drinking problem that people always say they do not have! You have a way with words and a keen eye for details!
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