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Review of Above All Others  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Strong use of repetition for emphasis of your love for this special person. Romantic. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good with a unique rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece (lines 3, 6, 8, 10, 13, 16). Tone: lovely depth of feeling, a nice way to get his attention and tell him of your love for him. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read; write on.
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Review of Depression  
Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Dark. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express vividly this dark place of depression where one wants to be left alone, tortured yet still crying out for help, to be brought into the light. Been there and you describe it well. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Uplifting encouragement to this new life you see within yourself. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about yourself with understanding and hopeful change, a healing that takes place from within. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Why Smile?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt and uplifting. A beautiful message. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: Lovely depth of feeling; a smile is a gift as you have expressed so beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well written and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of The Eleventh Hour  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line four of stanza one. Tone: deep expression of emotion; lovely praise and adoration to our Lord, you beautifully express God's love and provision for us in an encouraging way. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Romantic. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of your love through the beauty of nature. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 6 / 6 / 8 / 4 in each stanza. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for this forbidden lover passionately in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write from the perspective of a mountain and how it views the moon. Good personification of the mountain. Imaginative. Nice use of simile. Nice soliloquy. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the moon as seen through the 'eyes' of the mountain. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the mountains longing to be a part of the cosmos like the moon. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of I Rise Above  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Dark. Heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice, a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; a cry for help from your heart for faith, trust and love from God. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Brothers  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the bond of brothers. Heartfelt. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the relationship between brothers, when it is good, solid and supportive, and when it breaks down and the bond seems broken. Word choice; is good with nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Thoughtful wonderances about the night sky. Imaginative. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of an evening sky filled with starts that the reader sees through the lens of your eyes. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your curiosity about what is out in the night sky very well in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt tribute to our soldiers, past and present. Nicely crafted couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling and remembrance of this day dedicated to them. Flow: is good with nice line to line transition and breaks. Tone: good depth of feeling; a lovely reminder to us to remember their service to us. Word choice: is nice as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling in line five, should be 'remembers'. Overall: nice penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Illuminated  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and well crafted Senryu. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is nice; you paint a lovely picture of hope. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; upbeat and encouraging. Word choice: is good with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of True love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt words of love. Nice use of simile. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; even though you are apart, your love is strong as is your faith in it. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of As I Dream  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A nice write. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Nicely crafted rhyming couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculined end line rhyme that is nicely executed in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express this fantasy love of your dreams nicely in this poem. Word choice: is nice as is the alliteration. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Very nice metaphor for your personalities, one thunderous, the other calming rain. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of your temperaments as described by rain and storm. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme (envelope rhyme - first and last lines of each stanza). Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; lovely contrasts of your tempers enhance your love for each other, his a calming influence to your volatility, that brings about balance. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of a chocolaholic, there's nothing better than sweet, rich chocolate. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; the first, third, fourth, sixth, seventh and ninth lines are feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your love for chocolate beautifully in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Autumn  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Nice personification of autumn as mother and sister. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of 'family' of seasons, from death and decay to hope and life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; hopeful. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Parallel Lives  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective. Nice use of simile (spirit will rise like the tide upon the shore). Lovely. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings, of the two lives you live, one hidden and the outer shell you let people see with hopes that one day these two lives will be reunited making you whole. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of A Friend  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write about true friendship. Concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Very nice metaphor (a friend being a flower). Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful message about the joy of friendship. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Pain  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write about your ill health. Heartfelt and introspective. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme. Perfect dactylic or masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the pain that is always there that you have to deal with daily, even when at times it does pass. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Silent Vengence  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Clever and humorous. A well crafted quatrain. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is rhyme scheme abba. Each line is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: fun and playful. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Colour of Night  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, dark. Nice use of repetition for emphasis a feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the darkness in life, from it into light and from the light into the darkness of death. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of A Masterpiece  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and compassionate. Uplifting. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyming flavor. Very nice dialogue. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the joy of the artist as he paints a sky so beautiful that it brings tears to her eyes. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. We see through your eyes the speed of love as seen by ocean waves hitting the shore. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice, a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling and expression of love. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The Lost Dream  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Passionate. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme abccdeff. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line six (me, be). Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love and your commitment to each other well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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