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Review of Ode To The Smoker  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of the bad habit of smoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; a warning with humor. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the importance of our memories of love and family. Heartfelt. Concise and succinct well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your memories of love, happiness and laughter beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in the first word of the last line of your poem; should be 'They.' Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of The Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt. Delightfully sensual. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of love and togetherness as seen through the lens of your eyes and heart. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express the beauty and love that you both share. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Nice form, 8 lines with a descending syllable count for each line, 8 / 7 / 6 / 5 / 4 / 3 / 2 / 1. A nice story poem and well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling, a sad lament of lost love as he waits and dreams. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nice penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write from the perspective on a mouse and newt, ingredients of a witches brew. I like the humor of the piece. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a funny picture of a raging witch who has lost her ingredients as seen through the lens of humor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice depth of feeling; very imaginative. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Nice use of simile and rhetorical questions. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is well executed in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for her and how it deepens each day beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Angel By My Side  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write about true friendship. A lovely tribute to your friend Erika. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. You're blessed to have such a friend and to be a friend to her. I can relate to these feelings you express. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Mystic Meadows  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write. Imaginative and magical. Melodic. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of this land of enchantment that you paint with the brush of your imagination. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. In your last stanza the beat and rhythm reminds me of the song 'Home on the Range' except the home you speak of is one in the land of enchantment of dragons, unicorns and maidens. Tone: good depth of feeling about this dreamlike place, your Mystic Meadow. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt words of wisdom. Well crafted free verse with a tinge of internal rhyme in line three of your poem. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts beautifully in this interpretation of Ecclesiastes 3, thoughts that I can relate to very well. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Without You  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and poignant. A skillfully crafted dodoitsu, perfect 7 / 7 / 7 / 5 form. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of love and loss that tugs at ones heartstrings. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice meter and rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your loss as you question why God has taken your child home to be with Him. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Gallery Season  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. You capture the autumn season beautifully in this piece. Nice personification of autumn (as dancing on mountaintops). Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eyes you paint a vibrant picture of fall that any reader can see in their minds eye. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, you express your feelings about the fall season with verve and I can relate to it very well. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Night Dreams  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, almost dreamlike. Delightfully sensual. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of 'loving' seen through the lens of your eyes and strength of his touch as you experience each nuance of his sensuality merging with your own. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done; nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion, erotic. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Painted Pink  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write; clever. Very nice use of double entendre. You personify the sun very well in this piece. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of basking in sunshine to get the perfect tan. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, delightfully sensual. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Above All Others  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Strong use of repetition for emphasis of your love for this special person. Romantic. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good with a unique rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece (lines 3, 6, 8, 10, 13, 16). Tone: lovely depth of feeling, a nice way to get his attention and tell him of your love for him. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read; write on.
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Review of Depression  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Dark. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express vividly this dark place of depression where one wants to be left alone, tortured yet still crying out for help, to be brought into the light. Been there and you describe it well. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Why Smile?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt and uplifting. A beautiful message. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: Lovely depth of feeling; a smile is a gift as you have expressed so beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well written and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of The Eleventh Hour  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line four of stanza one. Tone: deep expression of emotion; lovely praise and adoration to our Lord, you beautifully express God's love and provision for us in an encouraging way. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Romantic. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of your love through the beauty of nature. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 6 / 6 / 8 / 4 in each stanza. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for this forbidden lover passionately in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write from the perspective of a mountain and how it views the moon. Good personification of the mountain. Imaginative. Nice use of simile. Nice soliloquy. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the moon as seen through the 'eyes' of the mountain. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the mountains longing to be a part of the cosmos like the moon. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of I Rise Above  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Dark. Heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice, a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; a cry for help from your heart for faith, trust and love from God. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Brothers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the bond of brothers. Heartfelt. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the relationship between brothers, when it is good, solid and supportive, and when it breaks down and the bond seems broken. Word choice; is good with nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Thoughtful wonderances about the night sky. Imaginative. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of an evening sky filled with starts that the reader sees through the lens of your eyes. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your curiosity about what is out in the night sky very well in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt tribute to our soldiers, past and present. Nicely crafted couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling and remembrance of this day dedicated to them. Flow: is good with nice line to line transition and breaks. Tone: good depth of feeling; a lovely reminder to us to remember their service to us. Word choice: is nice as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling in line five, should be 'remembers'. Overall: nice penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Illuminated  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and well crafted Senryu. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is nice; you paint a lovely picture of hope. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; upbeat and encouraging. Word choice: is good with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of True love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt words of love. Nice use of simile. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; even though you are apart, your love is strong as is your faith in it. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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