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1376
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and heartfelt lament. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Skillfully crafted free verse. Very nice personification of love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your pain and betrayal by love with rancor. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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1377
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. A heartfelt testimony of faith. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love and trust in God beautifully in this piece. Lovely praise and adoration for God. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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1378
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of message. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; a beautiful message about purpose that God gives to each of His children. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Devil's Gaze  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of our poem. A very good short write. A clever chestnut. Skillfully crafted free verse. Concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; much wisdom in these words. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Levitations  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Creative form. Uplifting and encouraging, much like call and response. Very good use of repetition for emphasis of encouragement. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line and second line in couplet is perfect feminine or masculine end line rhyme that you execute with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; an excellent message of inspiration to overcome ones trials. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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1381
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good dark write and lament of love's end. Concise and succinct free verse with a bit of rhyme. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a note, the last line seems awkward, the tense is off; changing 'fell' to fallen will smooth out that line and its rhythm (but this is my opinion). Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your feelings in a powerful way, painful and dark. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of The Impossible  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good short write; dark, heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; resigned to falling to the darkness of his demons. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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1383
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and skillfully crafted rhyming acrostic. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of halloween that trick or treat for fun and candy. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed beautifully in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; entertaining and fun. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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1384
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write, heartfelt. Poignant memories of love, loss and release through tears. Very good use of repetition for emphasis of feelings. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line throughout poem is perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute beautifully in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line three of your fourth verse. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Beautiful expression of love and healing tears, good advice received from the one you loved and still love. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Innocence  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Thoughtful. Skillfully crafted free verse. Effective use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts of your life, love for your children, achievements and accomplishments very well in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Mirror  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective. Nice use of metaphor 'floating in sea of emotion.' Nice use of repetition for emphasis of emotion. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of yourself, of how you see yourself through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line throughout poem is near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings fervently in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of pansies  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Nicely penned free verse. Nice use of personification for the flowers 'smiling faces.' Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of the different colors of pansies planted in your garden. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling. I sense your joy of gardening and I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of God sent me you  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and prayerful. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for this special person with verve. One can sense the sadness you feel about that love slipping away as you pray for this man, that you find again the man God sent you. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling in the last line of your poem, should be 'again.' Overall:
nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of My Father's Hands  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and tribute to your father. Poignant. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a loving picture of your father, his character seen through the strength of his hands that gave comfort to you. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Touching. You express your love and respect in these beautiful memories of your father that you share in this poem. He was a blessing to you and your family. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Cherry Blossoms  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Excellent use of personification of a cherry tree. Very nice use of simile. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of this tree and its display as seen through the lens of your eyes. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express her beauty very creatively. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Show Some Love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, collaboration and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting and encouraging. Nicely crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling and good advice. Everyone can use a hug, it lifts ones spirit. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of A Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write; heartfelt. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of your walk that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nice done. Nice rhythm. Just a note, there is a typo in line three, should be fancied. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express you enjoyment of nature and the season. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Stirred Memories  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and thoughtful. A lovely way to express memories. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you poignantly express how important memories of those who pass on are to the ones left behind. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Haven  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your prose. A very good write. Heartfelt. Imagery: is very good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of this special place that we see the the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhythmic. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; the calmness and serenity of this special sanctuary is a haven anyone would enjoy. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Unexpected Song  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt with hope, this song of your heart for true love. Concise and succinct. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Tone: very nice depth of feeling; you express your thoughts for a duet at a time when you're solo, a melody of romance that you hear, but hope to someday share. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Your Last Rose  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and tribute to your grandfather. Heartfelt and poignant. Very nice metaphor and simile. Lovely comparison to the sweetness of a rose and the joy shared with him when he was alive. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; even in the sadness of loss, the love felt for him shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Writte on.
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Review of Hauntings  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. heartfelt, introspective and dark. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your fear of these dreams that seem to haunt you so you can't sleep, yet at the same time you're used to having them because they're now a part of your life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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1398
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. A lovely dedication to the man you love. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of your feelings for him and how he makes you feel. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for him shines brightly in this piece. You are blessed. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and a much enjoyed read.
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1399
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. A well crafted haiku. Perfect form of seventeen syllables or less. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good with vivid descriptives. You paint a picture of an ancient tree that looks dead, yet has sprouted new growth, new life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. An uplifting poem of rebirth. Overall: well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Outside Judges  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Introspective. Thought provoking. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your express how others may judge a person and influence them to lose their self-worth and that is sad indeed. Word choice: is good. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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