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Review of Poem of Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A nice title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Concise and succinct. Nice use of metaphor (the sky 'rich cloth of blue')Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of a darkened sky just before the rain storms in. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme - aabc ddee. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling in expressing the intensity of the possible storm and the sun as it beams fights through dark clouds. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Cast the Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting encouragement. Very nice use of simile. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the sky and mountain tops where thoughts soar like birds. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very good meter. Each stanza has syllable count of 7 / 6 / 8 / 6 and a very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express well how love soars as the world of your thoughts become clearer, that life is dear. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line one of your last stanza, should be 'Breathe.' Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good title for this article. A very good write. You explain the importance of writing of keeping focus on one character that children can relate to and that the story is entertaining and fun to keep the interest of the age group who will be readers of it. Timing is also important and helps with humor and sense of fun of the story. Excellently stated rules for writing children's stories which can be used in other writings, such as poetry. Informative. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Light and Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. A lovely picture of purity of light through flowers in praise of nature's beauty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Good meter 8 / 7 / 8 / 7 and nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment. Rhyme: is good; second/fourth line is perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is well done. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, uplifting. Word choice: is good. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Punished  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. A skillfully crafted tanka. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 / 7 / 7 form. Concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts to hurt the one who loves you as though a reward and punishment. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, message and heartfelt testimony of faith. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your relationship with the Lord beautifully in this poem. Lovely words of praise and adoration for our Lord. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write and message. Prayerful. Lovely metaphor. Well crafted rhyming triplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme: abb acc add aee aff; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your faith, praise and adoration to the Lord shines in this poem. I can relate to your message. He is always there to strengthen, guide and keep His children. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Bread of Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Skillfully crafted free verse. Very nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for the Lord and your trust in Him shines in this piece. I can relate. This is a wonderful witness for those who do not know our Savior. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a moste enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of "Mom"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. A loving tribute to your mother-in-law. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of this garden that reminds you so much of her that we see through the lens of your love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every othere line throughout poem is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express these warm memories of her beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of winter that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; calm and serene scene in nature. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Yesterday's Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the them of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt and lamentful. A good attempt at an etheree which is driven by syllable count. It is a 10 line poem. If you move your last line up one line adding it after past, you will have perfect form. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Nice depth of feeling concerning love that has ended. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Wake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write; heartfelt perspective from the other side (death). Nice metaphor (shed the shell-the body). Thought provoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line of each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express thoughts, almost a conversation with those left behind, sharing with them one last time. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and heartfelt lament. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Skillfully crafted free verse. Very nice personification of love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your pain and betrayal by love with rancor. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. A heartfelt testimony of faith. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love and trust in God beautifully in this piece. Lovely praise and adoration for God. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of message. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; a beautiful message about purpose that God gives to each of His children. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Devil's Gaze  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of our poem. A very good short write. A clever chestnut. Skillfully crafted free verse. Concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; much wisdom in these words. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Levitations  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Creative form. Uplifting and encouraging, much like call and response. Very good use of repetition for emphasis of encouragement. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line and second line in couplet is perfect feminine or masculine end line rhyme that you execute with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; an excellent message of inspiration to overcome ones trials. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good dark write and lament of love's end. Concise and succinct free verse with a bit of rhyme. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a note, the last line seems awkward, the tense is off; changing 'fell' to fallen will smooth out that line and its rhythm (but this is my opinion). Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your feelings in a powerful way, painful and dark. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of The Impossible  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good short write; dark, heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; resigned to falling to the darkness of his demons. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Innocence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Thoughtful. Skillfully crafted free verse. Effective use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts of your life, love for your children, achievements and accomplishments very well in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Mirror  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective. Nice use of metaphor 'floating in sea of emotion.' Nice use of repetition for emphasis of emotion. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of yourself, of how you see yourself through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line throughout poem is near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings fervently in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of pansies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Nicely penned free verse. Nice use of personification for the flowers 'smiling faces.' Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of the different colors of pansies planted in your garden. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling. I sense your joy of gardening and I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of God sent me you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and prayerful. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for this special person with verve. One can sense the sadness you feel about that love slipping away as you pray for this man, that you find again the man God sent you. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling in the last line of your poem, should be 'again.' Overall:
nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of My Father's Hands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and tribute to your father. Poignant. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a loving picture of your father, his character seen through the strength of his hands that gave comfort to you. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect dactylic, feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Touching. You express your love and respect in these beautiful memories of your father that you share in this poem. He was a blessing to you and your family. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Cherry Blossoms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Excellent use of personification of a cherry tree. Very nice use of simile. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of this tree and its display as seen through the lens of your eyes. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express her beauty very creatively. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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