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Review of WOMEN AND ROSES  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and observation. Nice use of simile; the comparison between a rose and women (both have beauty as well as 'thorns') is a good one. Well crafted free verse. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of the beauty of women. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express very well the God given gift of beauty (inner and outer) to women... also their thorniness that men have experienced. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write and message. Thought provoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice; near rhyme and near perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts well in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nice use of repetition for emphasis (especially the last two lines of your poem). Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Dear Diary  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling (the first line repeated in each consecutive stanza). Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling with a bit of lighthearted humor. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, you have a typo in line one of your third stanza, should be 'you' (last word in that line). Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Short, concise and succinct. Nicely crafted couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of your love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme executed very well in the first three couplets and near rhyme in your final couplet. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love and your sadness of being separated from him with poignance. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of shyness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted Senryu. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 for. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you capture shyness beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Perfection  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; there is much wisdom in this thought provoking piece. This struggle for perfection becomes the downfall of pride. Perfection is only found in God. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Concise and succinct. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of father and son walking down the beach as the tide washes away their footsteps. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express very well this special bond you saw between father and son. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of I hate the way...  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. A nice blend of free verse and rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: in stanza two is good envelope rhyme with perfect masculine end line rhyme that is nicely executed in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your unrequited love well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Beyond the Door  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your story. A good write, heartfelt. A beautiful story of birth. Brief and succinct, much like a parable. Uplifting and encouraging. Lovely metaphor. A wonderful conversation between the Father and the new person soon to be born. Two doors, both hold love, two options of life always under the guidance of the Father. A lovely message. Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of MAx  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. A lovely tribute to your dog Max. Strong use of repetition for emphasis of your feelings for your pet. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the character of your dog, one that we can see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nice done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme is nice; nice mix of near rhyme and near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is very nice. Tone: deep expression of emotions; your love for Max shines in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Ode To The Smoker  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of the bad habit of smoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; a warning with humor. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Memories  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the importance of our memories of love and family. Heartfelt. Concise and succinct well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your memories of love, happiness and laughter beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in the first word of the last line of your poem; should be 'They.' Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of The Dance  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt. Delightfully sensual. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of love and togetherness as seen through the lens of your eyes and heart. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express the beauty and love that you both share. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Nice form, 8 lines with a descending syllable count for each line, 8 / 7 / 6 / 5 / 4 / 3 / 2 / 1. A nice story poem and well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling, a sad lament of lost love as he waits and dreams. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nice penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write from the perspective on a mouse and newt, ingredients of a witches brew. I like the humor of the piece. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a funny picture of a raging witch who has lost her ingredients as seen through the lens of humor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice depth of feeling; very imaginative. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Nice use of simile and rhetorical questions. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is well executed in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for her and how it deepens each day beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Angel By My Side  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write about true friendship. A lovely tribute to your friend Erika. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. You're blessed to have such a friend and to be a friend to her. I can relate to these feelings you express. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Mystic Meadows  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write. Imaginative and magical. Melodic. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of this land of enchantment that you paint with the brush of your imagination. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. In your last stanza the beat and rhythm reminds me of the song 'Home on the Range' except the home you speak of is one in the land of enchantment of dragons, unicorns and maidens. Tone: good depth of feeling about this dreamlike place, your Mystic Meadow. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt words of wisdom. Well crafted free verse with a tinge of internal rhyme in line three of your poem. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts beautifully in this interpretation of Ecclesiastes 3, thoughts that I can relate to very well. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Without You  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and poignant. A skillfully crafted dodoitsu, perfect 7 / 7 / 7 / 5 form. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of love and loss that tugs at ones heartstrings. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice meter and rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your loss as you question why God has taken your child home to be with Him. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Gallery Season  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. You capture the autumn season beautifully in this piece. Nice personification of autumn (as dancing on mountaintops). Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eyes you paint a vibrant picture of fall that any reader can see in their minds eye. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, you express your feelings about the fall season with verve and I can relate to it very well. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Night Dreams  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, almost dreamlike. Delightfully sensual. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of 'loving' seen through the lens of your eyes and strength of his touch as you experience each nuance of his sensuality merging with your own. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done; nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion, erotic. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and skillfully crafted haiku string. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of sunrise and how the warmth of the sun affects the ocean that is scene throught the brushstrokes of your pen. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhytm. Tone: nice depth of feeling, you express the beauty of a lovely day. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. A very good take on the prompt. Nice metaphor (the sea casting her nets to draw you to her). Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the 'call from the sea' that we see through the lens of your heart and eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express a love for the sea that your readers can relate to. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Painted Pink  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write; clever. Very nice use of double entendre. You personify the sun very well in this piece. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of basking in sunshine to get the perfect tan. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, delightfully sensual. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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