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Review of Rainbow Colours  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Creative. Concise, succinct and heartfelt. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of the creation of a rainbow in all its beauty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/third line of each stanza is perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that you execute beautifully in this piece. Tone: Nice depth of feeling; you express the wonder of seeing a rainbow and I can relate to that feeling. (Sevenfold: double entendre? Perfection and ROYGBIV - just a thought).Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Holding Nothing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective and sorrowful. Nice use of simile. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, change the periods at the end of lines three and five to commas and no punctuation at the end of line six. It will smooth out the flow and rhythm (in my opinion). Tone: deep expression of emotion, of your love, memories and loss. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: tenderly written, touching. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of All I Want  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Good use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion about this special person whom you love; this person who wants to be loved. Word choice: is good. Overall: very nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Green Eyed Man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Concise and succinct. Romantic. Good use of repetition for emphasis of your feelings for him. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for him as well as capture his character in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Our Harvest Moon!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Heartfelt words of romance. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is very nice; you paint a picture of that first dance beautifully in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love through the years as it has deepened, sharing your lives and raising your family. You are blessed. This is a lovely dedication to your wife and your love. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: a love poem I'm sure your wife will appreciate very much. Very nicely penned and a much enjoyed read.
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Review of Blue  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write on what the color blue means to you. Effective use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling about this color and its meaningfulness to you. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: Very nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Poet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice use of simile. You capture the heart of a poet and why we write, reflecting our thoughts and feelings on the written page. Our brush strokes is language and its many nuances. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of near rhyme and near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express they why of writing and intent behind it. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of My Children  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and loving. Nice metaphor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of your treasures that are precocious yet still endearing. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which I enjoye and prefer. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for your children even when they are trying. I definitely can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of life's dynamics  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Concise and succinct free verse. Thought provoking. Very nice metaphor, the connection of life and music. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Tone: good depth of feeling and well thought out wisdom of the music of life, its beat that all of us share. Word choice: is good as is the assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Cherished Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling between you and this person you care for; you express vividly how the music touches your soul, bringing it to life as well as giving you insight into this person that is special to you. His music, a gift you cherish. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt, introspective and thoughtful. Well crafted free verse, concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express how the power of hope builds you up through faith you have in it. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good in the first four lines of you poem. Perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings for this special person in your life beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Sight by Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; much wisdom in your words, when we touch other lives with lovingkindness it shows others that God cares for them through us. Your faith shines in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Our canvas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice metaphor. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of this special person who has changed your outlook on life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice; a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line which is done nicely in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings for this person beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of MARIN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write about yourself. Concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted acrostic or acronym. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling, you express your love for music and its power in your life. Word choice: is good. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Master Artist  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of God, the master artist in creation of beauty in world. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, fourteen syllables per line and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Heart Song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about you 'heart song' and the life it gives you very well in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A nice title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write for the halloween season. Eerie and imaginative. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a scary picture of halloween night. Flow: is good; line to line transitions and breaks are nicely done. Rhythmic. Rhyme: is nice. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme in your first three stanzas. Tone: dark and frightening. Word choice: is good with very strong alliteration with nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of I Wish  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Romantic. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for your girlfriend tenderly in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Inspiration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Playful, heartfelt and introspective. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; light hearted, tongue in cheek. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Witches Brew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write for the halloween season. A creative 'spell' in poetic form. Nice use of repetition for emphasis in this story poem. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of witches creating their potion that we can see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Excellent meter, seven syllables per line throughout stanza and very good rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of dactylic and masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the happiness these witches have as they make their potion to serve to their victims. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Inside  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good write and warning about an addiction. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line of each of the stanzas is perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling with a bit of irony. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Beautiful Breeze  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Introspective and heartfelt. Very nice use of simile. Flow: is very nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion to smooth out the flow and rhythm, I'd change the periods at the end of the first and third lines to a comma and in line seven change the period to a comma, but this is only my opinion. Also, in your last line change 'To' should be 'Too' and there is a misspelling in your last line, should be 'guarded.' Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your express your thoughts about this special woman that is dear to you very well in this piece. You see how fragile she is and how she guards herself from building a relationship with anyone. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of beyond the rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting and encouraging. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed beautifully in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings of hurt and pain by looking past it to the rainbow that brings on peace and hope, after a rain. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt and poignant. A beautiful story poem of love and faith. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives; you paint a beautiful picture of your family memories. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed flawlessly in this poem. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings and faith vividly in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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