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Review of Hope  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt, introspective and thoughtful. Well crafted free verse, concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express how the power of hope builds you up through faith you have in it. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good in the first four lines of you poem. Perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings for this special person in your life beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Sight by Heart  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; much wisdom in your words, when we touch other lives with lovingkindness it shows others that God cares for them through us. Your faith shines in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Our canvas  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice metaphor. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of this special person who has changed your outlook on life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice; a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line which is done nicely in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings for this person beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of MARIN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write about yourself. Concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted acrostic or acronym. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling, you express your love for music and its power in your life. Word choice: is good. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Master Artist  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of God, the master artist in creation of beauty in world. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, fourteen syllables per line and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Heart Song  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about you 'heart song' and the life it gives you very well in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A nice title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write for the halloween season. Eerie and imaginative. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a scary picture of halloween night. Flow: is good; line to line transitions and breaks are nicely done. Rhythmic. Rhyme: is nice. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme in your first three stanzas. Tone: dark and frightening. Word choice: is good with very strong alliteration with nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of I Wish  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Romantic. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your love for your girlfriend tenderly in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Inspiration  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Playful, heartfelt and introspective. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; light hearted, tongue in cheek. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Witches Brew  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write for the halloween season. A creative 'spell' in poetic form. Nice use of repetition for emphasis in this story poem. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of witches creating their potion that we can see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Excellent meter, seven syllables per line throughout stanza and very good rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of dactylic and masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the happiness these witches have as they make their potion to serve to their victims. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Inside  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good write and warning about an addiction. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line of each of the stanzas is perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling with a bit of irony. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Beautiful Breeze  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Introspective and heartfelt. Very nice use of simile. Flow: is very nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion to smooth out the flow and rhythm, I'd change the periods at the end of the first and third lines to a comma and in line seven change the period to a comma, but this is only my opinion. Also, in your last line change 'To' should be 'Too' and there is a misspelling in your last line, should be 'guarded.' Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your express your thoughts about this special woman that is dear to you very well in this piece. You see how fragile she is and how she guards herself from building a relationship with anyone. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of beyond the rain  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting and encouraging. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed beautifully in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings of hurt and pain by looking past it to the rainbow that brings on peace and hope, after a rain. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt and poignant. A beautiful story poem of love and faith. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives; you paint a beautiful picture of your family memories. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed flawlessly in this poem. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings and faith vividly in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Dragonfly  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your prose. A good write and well crafted prose poetry. Imagery: is good with vivid descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of this beautiful garden that we see through your eyes. Flow: is good, smooth and rhythmic. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your delight of nature very well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Buzz  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your story. A good write and well crafted story and message about addiction and the death it can bring. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a tragic picture with this short piece. Flow: is good. Nice rhythm. Tone: expresses the darkness of addiction and the resulting pain. Word choice: is good. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Waves of Pain  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. A very nice short piece, concise and succinct. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of pain that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the pain of your heart very well. Word choice: is good. Write on.
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Review of Lost Souls  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good dark write. Thought provoking, an interesting way to view the soul. Nice metaphor. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done; nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; bleak and gloomy. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and nice assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of The New Earth  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice use of simile. Uplifting and encouraging. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. you express your faith in the new earth beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Nice question in to be answered by the reader in your final two lines. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Choices  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of our poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Thoughtful. Nice use of repetition. Very nicely crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express yourself about choices thoughtfully with just a bit of humor in your final couplet. Word choice: is good and nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Why Do You Ask?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write, heartfelt and dramatic. Very good use of repetion for emphasis of feeling. Nice form and use of predominantly rhyming triplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts well in this poem in asking why this person asks about how you feel and what caused it. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of The Watermelon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good write. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; vivid descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of the watermellon, it's taste and refreshment during the summer season. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your enjoyment of love for this fruit, something I can relate to. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Morning Light  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Romantic. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good; very nice descriptives. You paint a lovely picture that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for this special person with tenderness. Word choice: is good, nice simile. Nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of New Day  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. A well crafted haiku. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. Nice image of sunset as day is done and the world sleeps. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Nicely penned. Write on.
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