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Review of Darkness Cometh  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write about the coming darkness. Skillfully crafted free verse. Concise and succinct. Nice metaphor (darkness riding on the wings of the wind). Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of the shadow of darkness that begins to extinguish the light. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the fear of this evil as is draws closer to the children of elves and men bringing about a new age of darkness. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Shotzi  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write about your pet. Lovely shape. Concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted Diamonte. Perfect form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives that paint a vivid picture of your pet. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your friendship with your pet shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Dark Vows  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Powerful, heartfelt and dark. Delightfully sensual. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express feelings the feelings of possession... of mine. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of A Road To Follow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Introspective and heartfelt. Nice metaphor. Skillfully crafted Nove Otto. Perfect form. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of ones life journey that is seen through your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 8 syllables per line throughout poem. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; creative expression of faith. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Spring Ritual  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. I enjoyed the humor. A skillfully crafted Musette. Perfect form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive. You paint a vivid picture of spring alergies which I can relate to. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every first/third line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision. Tone: good depth of feeling; I can empathize to springtime allergies. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Feathers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and presentation. Heartfelt and loving. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Lovely metaphor and very nice simile. Poignant. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is very good with vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of your love, comfort and light against the darkness. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for her and your hope shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and empathetic. Write on. My condolences on your loss.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Nice use of simile. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a pretty picture of the light of love that is like the flame of a lamp. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. There is a typo in line two, 'as' should be has, and in line four should be "brings." Rhyme: nice internal rhyme in lines one and seven. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love with warmth and poignance. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Hearfelt and caring. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice rhythm. Just a note: there's a typo in line four of your first verse, should be 'feel' and in the last line should be 'That's'. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. You express the importance of friendship and how its the best gift you could give to anyone. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of love of life  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Nice metaphor. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for this special person with verve. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Winds of Heaven  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt, uplifting and encouraging. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of friendship, hope and faith in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a nice mix of near rhyme and perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this poem. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your faith, hope, love and friendship shine in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Season Opener  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Creative, fun and very nice humor. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of game day at home with friends. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the excitement and let down well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Love is divine  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Romantic, seductive and sensual. Strong use of simile. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Well crafted free verse with a touch of rhyme. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of love and tenderness which we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: in lines six, seven and eleven through fourteen - near perfect mix of feminine and masculine end line rhyme which I enjoy and prefer. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your love for him shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line eleven, should be 'touched' and line twelve should be 'than'.
Overall: Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of For Avery  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and skillfully crafted mirror acrostic. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you show your love for your daughter who is sweet and loves sweets. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Passer-by  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of our poem. A good write. Heartfelt and encouraging. Nice use of simile and metaphor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You creatively paint a picture of passing at the same time helping your loved one through it. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; empathetifc. A lovely way to help a loved one through grief at your passing. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title and play on words that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Thought provoking. A powerful commentary on society and the bloodshed in the Middle East. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique and unusual rhyme scheme in your first and third stanzas. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which I enjoy and prefer. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your fury at man's inhumanity to man which I can relate to. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Rainbow Colours  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Creative. Concise, succinct and heartfelt. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of the creation of a rainbow in all its beauty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/third line of each stanza is perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that you execute beautifully in this piece. Tone: Nice depth of feeling; you express the wonder of seeing a rainbow and I can relate to that feeling. (Sevenfold: double entendre? Perfection and ROYGBIV - just a thought).Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Holding Nothing  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinions and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective and sorrowful. Nice use of simile. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, change the periods at the end of lines three and five to commas and no punctuation at the end of line six. It will smooth out the flow and rhythm (in my opinion). Tone: deep expression of emotion, of your love, memories and loss. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: tenderly written, touching. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of All I Want  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinions and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Good use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion about this special person whom you love; this person who wants to be loved. Word choice: is good. Overall: very nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Green Eyed Man  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Concise and succinct. Romantic. Good use of repetition for emphasis of your feelings for him. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for him as well as capture his character in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Our Harvest Moon!  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Heartfelt words of romance. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is very nice; you paint a picture of that first dance beautifully in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love through the years as it has deepened, sharing your lives and raising your family. You are blessed. This is a lovely dedication to your wife and your love. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: a love poem I'm sure your wife will appreciate very much. Very nicely penned and a much enjoyed read.
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Review of Blue  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinions and are given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write on what the color blue means to you. Effective use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling about this color and its meaningfulness to you. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: Very nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Poet  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice use of simile. You capture the heart of a poet and why we write, reflecting our thoughts and feelings on the written page. Our brush strokes is language and its many nuances. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of near rhyme and near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express they why of writing and intent behind it. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of My Children  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and loving. Nice metaphor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of your treasures that are precocious yet still endearing. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which I enjoye and prefer. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for your children even when they are trying. I definitely can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of life's dynamics  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Concise and succinct free verse. Thought provoking. Very nice metaphor, the connection of life and music. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Tone: good depth of feeling and well thought out wisdom of the music of life, its beat that all of us share. Word choice: is good as is the assonance. Nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Cherished Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling between you and this person you care for; you express vividly how the music touches your soul, bringing it to life as well as giving you insight into this person that is special to you. His music, a gift you cherish. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on.
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