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Review of Show Some Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, collaboration and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting and encouraging. Nicely crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling and good advice. Everyone can use a hug, it lifts ones spirit. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of A Walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write; heartfelt. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of your walk that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nice done. Nice rhythm. Just a note, there is a typo in line three, should be fancied. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express you enjoyment of nature and the season. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Stirred Memories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and thoughtful. A lovely way to express memories. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you poignantly express how important memories of those who pass on are to the ones left behind. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Haven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your prose. A very good write. Heartfelt. Imagery: is very good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of this special place that we see the the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhythmic. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; the calmness and serenity of this special sanctuary is a haven anyone would enjoy. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Unexpected Song  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt with hope, this song of your heart for true love. Concise and succinct. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Tone: very nice depth of feeling; you express your thoughts for a duet at a time when you're solo, a melody of romance that you hear, but hope to someday share. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Your Last Rose  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and tribute to your grandfather. Heartfelt and poignant. Very nice metaphor and simile. Lovely comparison to the sweetness of a rose and the joy shared with him when he was alive. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; even in the sadness of loss, the love felt for him shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Writte on.
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Review of Hauntings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. heartfelt, introspective and dark. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your fear of these dreams that seem to haunt you so you can't sleep, yet at the same time you're used to having them because they're now a part of your life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. A lovely dedication to the man you love. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of your feelings for him and how he makes you feel. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme which you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for him shines brightly in this piece. You are blessed. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and a much enjoyed read.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. A well crafted haiku. Perfect form of seventeen syllables or less. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good with vivid descriptives. You paint a picture of an ancient tree that looks dead, yet has sprouted new growth, new life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. An uplifting poem of rebirth. Overall: well penned and much enjoyed. Write on.
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Review of Outside Judges  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Introspective. Thought provoking. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your express how others may judge a person and influence them to lose their self-worth and that is sad indeed. Word choice: is good. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Darkness Cometh  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write about the coming darkness. Skillfully crafted free verse. Concise and succinct. Nice metaphor (darkness riding on the wings of the wind). Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of the shadow of darkness that begins to extinguish the light. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the fear of this evil as is draws closer to the children of elves and men bringing about a new age of darkness. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Shotzi  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write about your pet. Lovely shape. Concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted Diamonte. Perfect form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives that paint a vivid picture of your pet. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your friendship with your pet shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Dark Vows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Powerful, heartfelt and dark. Delightfully sensual. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express feelings the feelings of possession... of mine. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of A Road To Follow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Introspective and heartfelt. Nice metaphor. Skillfully crafted Nove Otto. Perfect form. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of ones life journey that is seen through your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 8 syllables per line throughout poem. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; creative expression of faith. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Spring Ritual  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. I enjoyed the humor. A skillfully crafted Musette. Perfect form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive. You paint a vivid picture of spring alergies which I can relate to. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every first/third line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision. Tone: good depth of feeling; I can empathize to springtime allergies. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Feathers  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and presentation. Heartfelt and loving. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Lovely metaphor and very nice simile. Poignant. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is very good with vivid descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of your love, comfort and light against the darkness. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for her and your hope shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and empathetic. Write on. My condolences on your loss.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Nice use of simile. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a pretty picture of the light of love that is like the flame of a lamp. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. There is a typo in line two, 'as' should be has, and in line four should be "brings." Rhyme: nice internal rhyme in lines one and seven. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love with warmth and poignance. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Hearfelt and caring. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice rhythm. Just a note: there's a typo in line four of your first verse, should be 'feel' and in the last line should be 'That's'. Tone: lovely depth of feeling. You express the importance of friendship and how its the best gift you could give to anyone. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of love of life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Nice metaphor. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for this special person with verve. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Winds of Heaven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt, uplifting and encouraging. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of friendship, hope and faith in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a nice mix of near rhyme and perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this poem. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your faith, hope, love and friendship shine in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Season Opener  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Creative, fun and very nice humor. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of game day at home with friends. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; nice mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the excitement and let down well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Love is divine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Romantic, seductive and sensual. Strong use of simile. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Well crafted free verse with a touch of rhyme. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of love and tenderness which we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: in lines six, seven and eleven through fourteen - near perfect mix of feminine and masculine end line rhyme which I enjoy and prefer. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your love for him shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line eleven, should be 'touched' and line twelve should be 'than'.
Overall: Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of For Avery  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and skillfully crafted mirror acrostic. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you show your love for your daughter who is sweet and loves sweets. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Passer-by  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of our poem. A good write. Heartfelt and encouraging. Nice use of simile and metaphor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You creatively paint a picture of passing at the same time helping your loved one through it. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; empathetifc. A lovely way to help a loved one through grief at your passing. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title and play on words that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Thought provoking. A powerful commentary on society and the bloodshed in the Middle East. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique and unusual rhyme scheme in your first and third stanzas. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which I enjoy and prefer. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your fury at man's inhumanity to man which I can relate to. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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