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Review of Endless Love  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Nice title that suits the subject of your poem. A very nice short write, concise and succinct. Nice use of simile. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Nice internal rhyme in lines one, two and four. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love passionately for this special person beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, check line two, should be 'Twinkling,' and line four, should be 'yours'. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Contemplative. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice as is the unusual rhyme scheme of aabc ddef gghi jklk. Near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts that are tinged with sadness as you hope for happiness. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Sensations  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good short write with rhetorical elements. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of thoughts about love. Skillfully crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second line of each couplet is perfect masculine end line rhyme with each following one (beat, feet, high, sigh) which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express thoughts that your readers can relate to regarding love and its affects on people. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every other line throughout poem is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling that your readers who work can relate to very well. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Snow Angels  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt and endearing. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture as seen through your eyes of your children making imprints of angels in the snow. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; first and third lines are perfect feminine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for your children, of them being your precious gifts beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Hopeful  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A nice title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write. Imaginative. Nice metaphor (fortune, a chariot; determination, a steed). Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your need to reach your goals no matter the circumstance, an overcomer who reaches her destination. Very nice message. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in the first line of your second stanza, should be 'impatiently'. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of THE STORY OF WAR  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A heartfelt write. Short, concise and succinct. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the sights, sounds and terror of war and the end of life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the horror of war and the loss of life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Grounded  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Lots of fun, tongue in cheek. Skillfully crafted limerick, very good form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a humorous picture of this scene that can be seen clearly in our mind's eye. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling, a funny piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt fun. Nice interaction between you and your husband. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a very funny picture of the situation that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: love depth of feeling; lighthearted fun. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Pure White  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A lovely fantasy story poem. Elegant verse.
Rhyming poetry.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Is very nice as are the descriptives. You paint
a picture of the nature and her frigid tears that
covers the countryside with snow.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks
are well done. Very good meter: 4 / 4 / 4 / 4 in
each line throughout poem. Very nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Metaphor or Simile:*Star**Star*
Nice personification of Nature (her crying);
the sky filled by tears of love and nice
metaphor (frozen tears, pure white snow)

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is good; perfect feminine and masculine
end line rhyme that is executed with precision
in this piece.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; love is expressed
very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good with nice alliteration
and assonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a most entertaining piece.
Write on.


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Review of Happy Halloween!  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write for halloween. Concise and succinct. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of fun on a halloween night of trick or treat. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of near rhyme and perfect feminine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling; lighthearted joy of this special night. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and good assonance. Overall; well penned, write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, dark, introspective and heartfelt. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice personification of Death. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your stark feelings in a powerful way. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Poem of Rain  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A nice title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Concise and succinct. Nice use of metaphor (the sky 'rich cloth of blue')Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of a darkened sky just before the rain storms in. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme - aabc ddee. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling in expressing the intensity of the possible storm and the sun as it beams fights through dark clouds. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Cast the Heart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt. Uplifting encouragement. Very nice use of simile. Imagery: is good with nice descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the sky and mountain tops where thoughts soar like birds. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very good meter. Each stanza has syllable count of 7 / 6 / 8 / 6 and a very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express well how love soars as the world of your thoughts become clearer, that life is dear. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in line one of your last stanza, should be 'Breathe.' Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Good title for this article. A very good write. You explain the importance of writing of keeping focus on one character that children can relate to and that the story is entertaining and fun to keep the interest of the age group who will be readers of it. Timing is also important and helps with humor and sense of fun of the story. Excellently stated rules for writing children's stories which can be used in other writings, such as poetry. Informative. Well penned. Write on.
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Review of Light and Life  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. A lovely picture of purity of light through flowers in praise of nature's beauty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Good meter 8 / 7 / 8 / 7 and nice rhythm. Nice use of enjambment. Rhyme: is good; second/fourth line is perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is well done. Tone: lovely depth of feeling, uplifting. Word choice: is good. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Punished  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. A skillfully crafted tanka. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 / 7 / 7 form. Concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your thoughts to hurt the one who loves you as though a reward and punishment. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, message and heartfelt testimony of faith. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your relationship with the Lord beautifully in this poem. Lovely words of praise and adoration for our Lord. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A creative title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, lighthearted humor. Clever word play. Strong use of repetition for emphasis. Daughters that ultimately become 'dotters'. Well crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; lovely expression of connections between mothers, daughters, grandaugthers and how each role gets passed down. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write and message. Prayerful. Lovely metaphor. Well crafted rhyming triplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme: abb acc add aee aff; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your faith, praise and adoration to the Lord shines in this poem. I can relate to your message. He is always there to strengthen, guide and keep His children. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Nice use of repetition for emphasis. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Bread of Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and message. Heartfelt words of faith. Skillfully crafted free verse. Very nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your love for the Lord and your trust in Him shines in this piece. I can relate. This is a wonderful witness for those who do not know our Savior. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a moste enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of "Mom"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. A loving tribute to your mother-in-law. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of this garden that reminds you so much of her that we see through the lens of your love. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every othere line throughout poem is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express these warm memories of her beautifully in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Winter  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of winter that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; calm and serene scene in nature. Word choice: is good with strong alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Yesterday's Dream  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the them of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt and lamentful. A good attempt at an etheree which is driven by syllable count. It is a 10 line poem. If you move your last line up one line adding it after past, you will have perfect form. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Nice depth of feeling concerning love that has ended. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Wake  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write; heartfelt perspective from the other side (death). Nice metaphor (shed the shell-the body). Thought provoking. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line of each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express thoughts, almost a conversation with those left behind, sharing with them one last time. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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