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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Thoughtful wonderances about the night sky. Imaginative. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of an evening sky filled with starts that the reader sees through the lens of your eyes. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your curiosity about what is out in the night sky very well in this poem. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt tribute to our soldiers, past and present. Nicely crafted couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling and remembrance of this day dedicated to them. Flow: is good with nice line to line transition and breaks. Tone: good depth of feeling; a lovely reminder to us to remember their service to us. Word choice: is nice as is the alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling in line five, should be 'remembers'. Overall: nice penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Illuminated  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and well crafted Senryu. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is nice; you paint a lovely picture of hope. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; upbeat and encouraging. Word choice: is good with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of True love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt words of love. Nice use of simile. Well crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; even though you are apart, your love is strong as is your faith in it. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of As I Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A nice write. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Nicely crafted rhyming couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculined end line rhyme that is nicely executed in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express this fantasy love of your dreams nicely in this poem. Word choice: is nice as is the alliteration. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Very nice metaphor for your personalities, one thunderous, the other calming rain. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of your temperaments as described by rain and storm. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme (envelope rhyme - first and last lines of each stanza). Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; lovely contrasts of your tempers enhance your love for each other, his a calming influence to your volatility, that brings about balance. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of a chocolaholic, there's nothing better than sweet, rich chocolate. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; the first, third, fourth, sixth, seventh and ninth lines are feminine and masculine end line rhyme which is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express your love for chocolate beautifully in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Nice personification of autumn as mother and sister. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of 'family' of seasons, from death and decay to hope and life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; hopeful. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Parallel Lives  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Introspective. Nice use of simile (spirit will rise like the tide upon the shore). Lovely. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings, of the two lives you live, one hidden and the outer shell you let people see with hopes that one day these two lives will be reunited making you whole. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of A Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write about true friendship. Concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Very nice metaphor (a friend being a flower). Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; a beautiful message about the joy of friendship. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Pain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write about your ill health. Heartfelt and introspective. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme. Perfect dactylic or masculine end line rhyme. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the pain that is always there that you have to deal with daily, even when at times it does pass. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned. Write on.
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Review of Silent Vengence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Clever and humorous. A well crafted quatrain. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is rhyme scheme abba. Each line is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: fun and playful. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Colour of Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, dark. Nice use of repetition for emphasis a feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the darkness in life, from it into light and from the light into the darkness of death. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of A Masterpiece  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and compassionate. Uplifting. Well crafted free verse with a bit of rhyming flavor. Very nice dialogue. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the joy of the artist as he paints a sky so beautiful that it brings tears to her eyes. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. We see through your eyes the speed of love as seen by ocean waves hitting the shore. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice, a mix of near rhyme and perfect masculine end line rhyme. Tone: good depth of feeling and expression of love. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The Lost Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Passionate. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; unique rhyme scheme abccdeff. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line six (me, be). Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love and your commitment to each other well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Endless Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Nice title that suits the subject of your poem. A very nice short write, concise and succinct. Nice use of simile. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Nice internal rhyme in lines one, two and four. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love passionately for this special person beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, check line two, should be 'Twinkling,' and line four, should be 'yours'. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Contemplative. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice as is the unusual rhyme scheme of aabc ddef gghi jklk. Near perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed nicely in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts that are tinged with sadness as you hope for happiness. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Sensations  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good short write with rhetorical elements. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of thoughts about love. Skillfully crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second line of each couplet is perfect masculine end line rhyme with each following one (beat, feet, high, sigh) which is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express thoughts that your readers can relate to regarding love and its affects on people. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every other line throughout poem is perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling that your readers who work can relate to very well. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. A skillfully crafted haiku. Perfect 5 / 7 / 5 form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of a butterfly as seen the the lens of your imagination. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the beauty and serenity of nature in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Snow Angels  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt and endearing. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture as seen through your eyes of your children making imprints of angels in the snow. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; first and third lines are perfect feminine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for your children, of them being your precious gifts beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and good assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Hopeful  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A nice title that suits the theme of your poem. A good fantasy write. Imaginative. Nice metaphor (fortune, a chariot; determination, a steed). Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your need to reach your goals no matter the circumstance, an overcomer who reaches her destination. Very nice message. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Just a note, there is a typo in the first line of your second stanza, should be 'impatiently'. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of THE STORY OF WAR  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the subject of your poem. A heartfelt write. Short, concise and succinct. Imagery: is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the sights, sounds and terror of war and the end of life. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the horror of war and the loss of life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Grounded  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Lots of fun, tongue in cheek. Skillfully crafted limerick, very good form. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a humorous picture of this scene that can be seen clearly in our mind's eye. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling, a funny piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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