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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the them of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every other line is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings of pain and stress with fervor in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The L word  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and loving. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your feelings for this special woman warmly in this poem. Word choice: is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Small town girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Encouraging and uplifting. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you've found your calling and use your gifts to help others. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Guilt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and story poem. Dark humor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive (and painful for the cat). You paint a picture of a cat enjoying his 'meal' of canary that turns on him. Nice contrasts. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the feelings of the cat who's not so happy after his 'treat'. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of ...intimate...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; delightfully sensual, passion filled. You express beautifully how this person affects you intimately. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Only One  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Thoughtful. Nice metaphor (murmuring sea, sounds of many voices). Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express with fervor how you feel so alone in a crowd. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned. write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write that is concise and succinct. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a cute picture of your cat that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your love for your cat shines in this piece. Word choice: is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of the characteristics of your cat. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Sun and Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Very nice use of personification. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye we see an imaginative picture of the sun and moon in relationship to each other. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express well how the sun and moon reflect their gazes upon earth. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and good consonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Damaged Goods  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Introspective, heartfelt and compassionate. Skillfully crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Poignant. Your love for your son regardless of his brokenness shines in this piece as does your faith in God and His love for you both as you dwell in His light. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Muffy Lu  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and presentation. A well crafted Diamante. Perfect form. Very nice diamond shape. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of your precocious kitty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice depth of feeling; you express you fondness for your cat well in this piece. Word choice is good. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Sea  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the sea and beach that we see through the lens of your eye as you walk along the shore basking in sunshine that brings you solace. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your sadness for those you love and cannot reach. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Bliss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. A powerful expression of your love for this special person. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your passion and love for him as your soul mate shines in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Prayers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well crafted free verse expressing the importance of prayer. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your faith and trust in God shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of When Angels Weep  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the sorrow angels felt because of sin and its repercussions. They weep and continue to do God's will as His special messengers which you relate very well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of A Poem Of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A short write that is concise and succinct and has a beautiful
message. Skillfully crafted free verse in a triplet form.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is good as is the descriptives. Through your eyes we
see snap shots of ways a person can love that is vivid and warm.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done.
Nice. rhythm.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; you express the many sides of love
that we as readers can relate to very well.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration and assonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write, message and presentation. Heartfelt and patriotic. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives; you paint a picture of that day that I remember very clearly since my home is in NYC. The bravery and valor of the people who worked to reach those buried under the rubble of the towers is something that will never be forgotten. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is either near rhyme (stanzas 4 and 5) or perfect masculine end line rhyme executed with precision (stanzas 1, 2, 3, 6 and 7). Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the coming together of our nation bonded by loss, love, song and patriotism that will always be remembered. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The Ghosthunt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your story. A good write. Scary. The suspense builds very well. You can sense the fear they feel in the darkness.
There's a bit of humor in the story as they run around in the dark thinking they're being chased by ghosts. Then they come to find that it's just a practical joke by the guards. An enjoyable short story. Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt and introspective. Upbeat. Concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhyme. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling with a bit of humor. You express your thoughts very well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read.
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Review of Phenomenally Male  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. You capture the beauty and charm of the male, his manliness as well as his vulnerability in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this poem. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express his boyishness and fragility too. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your prose. A good short write. Nice personification of flowers (kissing your cheeks as you lean in to smell them). Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You take us to this beautiful place of cherry blossoms that are blooming on the trees. Through your eyes we see the beauty of the day in this garden in warm sunlight. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; a place of peacefulness that touches the heart. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of First Snow-fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good short write. Skillfully crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the first snow fall that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; magical. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write about betrayal in love. Lamentful. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your hurt, pain and anger as the dream of true love dies. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Breaking Yoke  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and parody of the childrens poem Humpty Dumpty. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive. You paint a picture of pain and torture that is very dark. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme aabcb ddefge. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: Dark humor... cannabalistic *Bigsmile* Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The Color of Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
Rhyming poetry that is well crafted.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You
paint a picture of man's destruction of our
land and resources.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks
are well done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Metaphor or Simile:*Star**Star*
Nice metaphor (the wind's whispering voice) and the
message to listen to the ancestors. Very nice personification
of earth as she cries out her warning of coming disaster.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is good; a mix of near rhyme and near perfect masculine
end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; your concern for the safety of
our earth and the land we are to care for shines in this
piece. Also, the warning about how this destruction is
decaying our way of life.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice: is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis
of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A well crafted Ode about your daughter. A blend
of free verse and rhyme.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint
a lovely picture of your daughter. You express her
likes and dislikes very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks
are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is nice. Unusual rhyme scheme with the mix of
free verse. In rhyming lines, perfect masculine end
line rhyme that is well executed in this poem (lines
1,2,3,4,6,9,11,12).

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling. You express your love and
close bond to your daughter beautifully in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance.
Just a note, there are a couple of errors in tense and spelling.
In line 3, should be You're and powerful; in line 15 there should
be a space between are and my.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Nicely written and an enjoyable read. Write on.


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