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1276
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write, message and presentation. Heartfelt and patriotic. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives; you paint a picture of that day that I remember very clearly since my home is in NYC. The bravery and valor of the people who worked to reach those buried under the rubble of the towers is something that will never be forgotten. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is either near rhyme (stanzas 4 and 5) or perfect masculine end line rhyme executed with precision (stanzas 1, 2, 3, 6 and 7). Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the coming together of our nation bonded by loss, love, song and patriotism that will always be remembered. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The Ghosthunt  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your story. A good write. Scary. The suspense builds very well. You can sense the fear they feel in the darkness.
There's a bit of humor in the story as they run around in the dark thinking they're being chased by ghosts. Then they come to find that it's just a practical joke by the guards. An enjoyable short story. Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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1278
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Heartfelt and introspective. Upbeat. Concise and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhyme. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling with a bit of humor. You express your thoughts very well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read.
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Review of Phenomenally Male  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. You capture the beauty and charm of the male, his manliness as well as his vulnerability in this piece. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this poem. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express his boyishness and fragility too. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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1280
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your prose. A good short write. Nice personification of flowers (kissing your cheeks as you lean in to smell them). Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You take us to this beautiful place of cherry blossoms that are blooming on the trees. Through your eyes we see the beauty of the day in this garden in warm sunlight. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; a place of peacefulness that touches the heart. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of First Snow-fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good short write. Skillfully crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of the first snow fall that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; magical. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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1282
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write about betrayal in love. Lamentful. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your hurt, pain and anger as the dream of true love dies. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Breaking Yoke  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and parody of the childrens poem Humpty Dumpty. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive. You paint a picture of pain and torture that is very dark. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme aabcb ddefge. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: Dark humor... cannabalistic *Bigsmile* Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Betty my Betty  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A well crafted Ode about your daughter. A blend
of free verse and rhyme.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint
a lovely picture of your daughter. You express her
likes and dislikes very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks
are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is nice. Unusual rhyme scheme with the mix of
free verse. In rhyming lines, perfect masculine end
line rhyme that is well executed in this poem (lines
1,2,3,4,6,9,11,12).

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling. You express your love and
close bond to your daughter beautifully in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance.
Just a note, there are a couple of errors in tense and spelling.
In line 3, should be You're and powerful; in line 15 there should
be a space between are and my.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Nicely written and an enjoyable read. Write on.


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1285
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and loving; a template that can be used for a message to a daughter. Well crafted free verse. Strong use of repetition for emphasis of love for a child. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the love and thankfulness for a child, a blessing from God to cherish. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Just a note, there is a typo in the second line of the poem, should be 'planned.' Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Do not take  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt. Patriotic. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nicely crafted free verse with a bit of rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; a fine message about our freedom, love for God and country. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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1287
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Your hurt and anger permeates this piece. Well crafted rhyming couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this poem. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Arguments between parent and child can be volatile and hurtful as it is in this poem. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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1288
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and loving. Well crafted rhyming couplets that is short, concise and succinct. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transitions and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that you execute very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express your love for this special woman in your life with fervor. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Dare To Be  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and heartfelt message to your daughter. Prayerful, uplifting and encouraging. Wonderful words of wisdom from father to daughter. Nice use of simile. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of the attributes of your daughter. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your love for your daughter and the advice you give her is a blessing to you both. She is blessed to have a caring father. I'm sure she loved this poem that you wrote in her honor. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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1290
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation. Heartfelt and romantic. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of a walk down this lane of cafe's, shops and terraces that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the music of laughter in the moment as you are caught in its web of beauty of the stars, a canopy overhead. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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1291
Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and presentation about the night sky. Skillfully crafted quatrains. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of stars in the ocean of darkened sky. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the aaaa bbbb (monorhyme in each stanza). Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the beauty of the stars for stargazers with verve in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Tulips  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted quatrain. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of spring blossoms blooming as winter wanes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the abab rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed beautifully in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your joy and beauty of spring in bloom. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Weigh Your Heart  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message. Heartfelt, concise and succinct free verse that is skillfully crafted. Lovely metaphor. Flow: is good; line to line transtion and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the contrast of a hardened heart that cannot feel and a softened heart that has the ability to heal and experience new and true love. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Sacrament  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write and testimony of your faith in the Lord. Short, concise and succinct free verse with a tinge of rhyme. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your faith and conviction of your belief and the road you walk under His guidance and grace. I can relate to this as a fellow believer. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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1295
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write about winter and spring. Skillfully crafted free verse. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. With the brush of your pen through the lens of your eyes, you paint a picture of an icy winter and the warmth of spring that you long for. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is unique; nice internal rhyme in line one and two of your second stanza (beginning, longing) and three and four (showers, flowers) with a rhyming couplet (today, way): all perfect feminine and masculine rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your longing for spring beautifully in this piece. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.
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Review of Strive. Exceed.  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and message. Concise, succinct and straight to the point. An encouraging and uplifting piece. Nice call and response (question and answer). Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express with fervor the message to strive, exceed and love. Word choice: is good. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of You always knew.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write, heartfelt. Nice use of rhetorical questions and repetition for emphasis of feeling and message of love. Skillfully crafted couplets. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second line of couples is near perfect masculine end line rhyme (step, kept; side, hide; away, stray; fled, unsaid) that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you imply your love for her powerfully in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of fallen down  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good short write, dark, concise and succinct. You express this person's anger in a powerful way. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good as is the rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that you execute well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express the destructiveness of his feelings well in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Just a note, there is a misspelling line five of your poem, should be possess. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Angel like Me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt words of love and romance. Concise and succinct free verse that is well crafted. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for her beautifully in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Letting Go  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt and poignant. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; a beautiful picture of one taking your 'gift' of pain and fear to give you peace and in that same moment, turning it into something beautiful. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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