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Review of The Soldier  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and message. Heartfelt. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express with gratitude the service of our men and women in the armed forces who serve with honor for the country they love. Patriotic. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Weathervane  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write about the weather and the weathervane on the roof of your house. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the storms that come and go as the weathervane stays its course atop your house. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in stanza one line three (west, rest); stanza two line three (sound, found). Tone: good depth of feeling; upbeat about the weather and the strength of the weathervane. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of My Hands  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the usefulness of your hands. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. We see through your eyes how important hands are to you to get the job done as you describe their usefulness. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express the necessity of ones hands in daily life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, message and presentation. Heartfelt. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of the beauty of the snowflakes. Nice simile and metaphor. Prayerful. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love, faith and adoration for God in this prayer for peace in Jerusalem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Walk  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A good write, heartfelt. A skillfully crafted Ottava Rima, another form that is a favorite which you write very well. Perfect form in rhyme scheme and syllable count; stanza one, 11 syllables per line and stanza two, 11 syllable first six lines and 10 syllables last two lines.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You take the reader along with you on your walk as through the lens of your eye we see and feel the beauty of your setting, the suns warmth on your skin, each step easing your stress as you are renewed. Serenity lifting your spirits as you praise God for his creation.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is good. Perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; your thoughts and feelings of rejuvenation are expressed well in this poem. I can relate.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good with strong alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the them of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A very good write. Heartfelt and introspective. A skillfully crafted Lanturne string. Very nice shape of each lanturne that stand alone well as well as being part of a string.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling. The importance of teaching and your love for it and the children entrusted to you shines beautifully in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good. Nice use of rhetorical questions to express your concern for your vocation. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.


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Review of My Heart Belongs  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A very good write. Heartfelt. A skillfully crafted Kyrielle which is one of my favorite forms and you write it very well.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You take us on a journey of life which we see through the lens of your eye, from childhood to adulthood to motherhood and then home to be with the Lord. A full life beautifully described.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 8 syllables per line throughout poem and very nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Metaphor or Simile:*Star**Star*
Very nice use of simile 'the world of of husband and wife combine like a song,' very poetic.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is good. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed beautifully in this piece.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Deep expression of emotion. You express love through each season of life, love as daughter, love as wife, love as mother and most importantly love for your Savior. Simply beautiful.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good. This form is driven on repetition and it is executed with precision and emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.


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Review of "He"  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A very good write and heartfelt testimony of faith. Well crafted free verse.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of Christ's love and compassion that drew you to Him as He welcomed you into His open arms.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts and feelings beautifully as you express your faith which shines in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.


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Review of Jehovah  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A very good write. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted free verse acrostic. Prayerful words of praise and adoration.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Deep expression of emotion. You express your faith and trust in the Lord beautifully in this piece. I relate to your prayer as a fellow believer and pray alongside you in this petition.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A good write and uplifting pep talk to yourself.
Well crafted rhyming poetry. Short, succinct
and concise.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are
well done. Nice rhythm.

*Star**Star*Rhyme:*Star**Star*
Rhyme is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in lines two through ten. Nice internal rhyme in line four (meek, speak).

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Good depth of feeling; your optimism in knowing that you
are strong and willing to prove it shines in this piece.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write and message. Uplifting and encouraging. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme every second/fourth line in each stanza. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your faith and trust in God shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the them of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every other line is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion; you express your feelings of pain and stress with fervor in this poem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of The L word  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and loving. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Rhyme: is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your feelings for this special woman warmly in this poem. Word choice: is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Small town girl  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write. Encouraging and uplifting. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you've found your calling and use your gifts to help others. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Guilt  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write and story poem. Dark humor. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive (and painful for the cat). You paint a picture of a cat enjoying his 'meal' of canary that turns on him. Nice contrasts. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the feelings of the cat who's not so happy after his 'treat'. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of ...intimate...  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write. Heartfelt, concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; delightfully sensual, passion filled. You express beautifully how this person affects you intimately. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of Only One  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Nicely crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Thoughtful. Nice metaphor (murmuring sea, sounds of many voices). Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. You express with fervor how you feel so alone in a crowd. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned. write on.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write that is concise and succinct. Well crafted free verse. Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a cute picture of your cat that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; your love for your cat shines in this piece. Word choice: is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of the characteristics of your cat. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Sun and Moon  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good title that fits the subject of your poem. A good short write. Concise and succinct. Skillfully crafted rhyming couplets. Very nice use of personification. Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye we see an imaginative picture of the sun and moon in relationship to each other. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express well how the sun and moon reflect their gazes upon earth. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and good consonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Muffy Lu  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and presentation. A well crafted Diamante. Perfect form. Very nice diamond shape. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of your precocious kitty. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice depth of feeling; you express you fondness for your cat well in this piece. Word choice is good. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, heartfelt and introspective. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the sea and beach that we see through the lens of your eye as you walk along the shore basking in sunshine that brings you solace. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your sadness for those you love and cannot reach. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and assonance with nice consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Bliss  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. A powerful expression of your love for this special person. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion; your passion and love for him as your soul mate shines in this piece. Word choice: is good with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned, write on.
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Review of Prayers  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write, heartfelt and succinct. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Well crafted free verse expressing the importance of prayer. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your faith and trust in God shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of When Angels Weep  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express the sorrow angels felt because of sin and its repercussions. They weep and continue to do God's will as His special messengers which you relate very well in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of A Poem Of Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

*Star**Star*Title:*Star**Star*
A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

*Star**Star*Form/Style:*Star**Star*
A short write that is concise and succinct and has a beautiful
message. Skillfully crafted free verse in a triplet form.

*Star**Star*Imagery:*Star**Star*
Imagery is good as is the descriptives. Through your eyes we
see snap shots of ways a person can love that is vivid and warm.

*Star**Star*Flow/Rhythm:*Star**Star*
Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done.
Nice. rhythm.

*Star**Star*Tone:*Star**Star*
Lovely depth of feeling; you express the many sides of love
that we as readers can relate to very well.

*Star**Star*Word Choice:*Star**Star*
Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration and assonance.

*Star**Star*Overall:*Star**Star*
Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.


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