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You know it's Sci Fi when...

Themes, Elements, and Tropes. Some things that Science Fiction is best known for.

When The Memories Call

For all grieving parents and anyone else who has lost a loved one.

The Hunt

The V V Inn Series; Book 2. Vampires hunt another of their kind at a remote Alaskan resort

A young adventurer sets out to save a town from giant bugs. Things are not what they seem.

Fictional girls taken

You gain the power to turn into liquid and enter screens, then enter the body of girls.

My Poetry

A Gathering for all my poetry, of all types

READ A NEWBIE

Politics

I am in french class right now. In germany. My brain is a language mess.

Run

Auria finds herself figuring out her new powers while escaping from danger.

The Monster and the Clouds

Will the monster keep on laughing? Will the clouds keep on collecting? Don’t take over!

Alfaz Jo khamoshi samjh na sake

“Yeh nazm un jazbaat par hai jo hum kehna to chahte hain, magar keh nahi paate. .”

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The Final Tale of Alkrush

A scene on set becomes very interesting

I Wish

This is a poem that I wrote at some point in the future. I typed it in, early this morn.

TIME TO BE A MAN

Prime time of youth is abruptly lost when facing harsh realities of coming conflicts

Review: WHEN THE MOON HITS YOUR EYE

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Review of A Heart

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted rhyming poetry. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; every second/fouth line in each stanza is perfect feminine or masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Lamentful. You express these feelings of loss with power; feeling emotions (anger, sadness) that seem to tear you apart. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.

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Review of Inside My Head

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt and introspective. Very nice rhyming poetry. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of this special place in your mind that is peace, serenity and your unique picture of life in perfection. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; a mix of near rhyme and perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express well how this place takes away your troubles. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and nice consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Silken Desires

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write, delightfully sensual. Well crafted rhyming couplets. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in line 7 (abounding, surrounding). Tone: deep expression of emotion; erotic and passion filled. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of One word

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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A good title that suits the theme do your poem. A good dark write. Introspective and heartfelt. Short, concise and succinct rhyming poetry. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very good meter and rhythm. Rhyme: is good, iambic tetrameter that is executed with precision. Perfect masculine end line rhyme which I enjoy and prefer. Tone: deep expression of emotion, you express your grief powerfully in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned, write on.
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Review of A Broken Branch

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write. Heartfelt. Nice metaphor. Skillfully crafted free verse. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Flow: is good line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the pain and sadness you feel because this friend would not accept your peace offering. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned. Write on.
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Review of Make Me An Angel

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write. Imaginative. Imagery: is good as are the descriptive. You paint a picture of fantasy love that is seen through the lens of your eyes. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is nice. Unusual rhyme scheme. In lines that rhyme, they are near perfect masculine end line rhyme (ears, hear; match, catch; below, flow, glow, go). Tone: nice depth of feeling as you express the 'angel' that you wish to be made especially for you to love. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice alliteration and consonance. Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Just Take The Time

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and message. Inspirational and heartfelt. Skillfully crafted rhyming poetry which I prefer and enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery is very nice as is the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of nature that we see through the lens of your eye.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good; every second/fourth line in each stanza is perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. Your faith shines in this piece as seen through the beauty created by God as does your love and trust in Him who has blessed you with a family and friends. I can relate to this lovely message to take the time to see God's beauty.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of The Four Seasons Rubaiyat

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. A skillfully crafted Rubaiyat. Perfect form and well crafted rhyming poetry which I enjoy and prefer.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint beautiful snapshots of each of the seasons that are vivid as seen through the lens of your eye.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor of autumn 'painting colors of brilliant hue' in the trees.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the different aspects of each season that any reader can relate to.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis about nature's attributes. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of blooming love

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write. Nicely crafted prose poetry that is concise and succinct.

Imagery:

Imagery: is nice as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of the shades of color that one sees in the person that they care for that is seen through the lens of your eyes and heart.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is nice; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, after bloom change the comma to a period; after colors change the period to a semicolon. Take out the second 'But' and change 'thy' to they. These changes will smooth out the flow and rhythm of your piece (in my opinion).

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice simile that we are 'like flowers' in full bloom at last showing others our 'true colors,' who we really are whether it is in friendship or love.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about love in a beautiful way in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance with nice consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of All I ever Wanted

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt and poignant. Rhyming poetry that I always enjoy.

Imagery:

Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of loss about your child who remains dear to you as you continue to grieve.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good; perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your loss and love for your little girl poignantly in this poem. Even after four years this is understandable and my condolences in your loss.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Very good use of repetition for emphasis of your feeling of loss. Good alliteration, consonance and nice assonance.

Overall:

Overall: well penned, write on.

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Review of Field of White

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A very good write and prayer. Very nice presentation. A sincere cry to the Lord for his strength and guidance in your time of need. Heartfelt prayerful supplication. Skillfully crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: deep expression of emotion. Your faith, trust and love for the Lord shines as does your praise and adoration in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration and consonance with nice assonance. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of Pleiades of the Faes

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

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A well crafted series of pleiades. Well written and beautiful presentation. Imaginative and magical. Very good form. Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of HALLOWEEN

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A very good write and skillfully crafted rhyming acrostic. Concise and succinct. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of halloween night that we see through the lens of your eyes. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; lines 2, 4, 6 and 8 are perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece. Tone: good depth of feeling; you express the fun and games of halloween night very well. I can relate. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of The Firefighter

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write and message about firefighters. Skillfully crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: good depth of feeling. You express with gratitude the service of firefighters to be there for us when they're needed. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of The Soldier

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good short write and message. Heartfelt. Well crafted free verse that is concise and succinct. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express with gratitude the service of our men and women in the armed forces who serve with honor for the country they love. Patriotic. I can relate. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of The Weathervane

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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A good title that suits the theme of your poem. A good write about the weather and the weathervane on the roof of your house. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the storms that come and go as the weathervane stays its course atop your house. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed well in this piece. Nice internal rhyme in stanza one line three (west, rest); stanza two line three (sound, found). Tone: good depth of feeling; upbeat about the weather and the strength of the weathervane. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of My Hands

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write about the usefulness of your hands. Imagery: is good as are the descriptives. We see through your eyes how important hands are to you to get the job done as you describe their usefulness. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm. Tone: nice depth of feeling; you express the necessity of ones hands in daily life. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of SNOWFLAKES OF JERUSALEM!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good write, message and presentation. Heartfelt. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of the beauty of the snowflakes. Nice simile and metaphor. Prayerful. Well crafted free verse. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; you express your love, faith and adoration for God in this prayer for peace in Jerusalem. Word choice: is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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Review of The Walk

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt. A skillfully crafted Ottava Rima, another form that is a favorite which you write very well. Perfect form in rhyme scheme and syllable count; stanza one, 11 syllables per line and stanza two, 11 syllable first six lines and 10 syllables last two lines.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You take the reader along with you on your walk as through the lens of your eye we see and feel the beauty of your setting, the suns warmth on your skin, each step easing your stress as you are renewed. Serenity lifting your spirits as you praise God for his creation.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good. Perfect dactylic and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; your thoughts and feelings of rejuvenation are expressed well in this poem. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with strong alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of To Teach is to Learn

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the them of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt and introspective. A skillfully crafted Lanturne string. Very nice shape of each lanturne that stand alone well as well as being part of a string.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. The importance of teaching and your love for it and the children entrusted to you shines beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Nice use of rhetorical questions to express your concern for your vocation. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of My Heart Belongs

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt. A skillfully crafted Kyrielle which is one of my favorite forms and you write it very well.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You take us on a journey of life which we see through the lens of your eye, from childhood to adulthood to motherhood and then home to be with the Lord. A full life beautifully described.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter, 8 syllables per line throughout poem and very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Very nice use of simile 'the world of of husband and wife combine like a song,' very poetic.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme which is executed beautifully in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express love through each season of life, love as daughter, love as wife, love as mother and most importantly love for your Savior. Simply beautiful.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. This form is driven on repetition and it is executed with precision and emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Overall: well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of "He"

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Rated: E

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Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and heartfelt testimony of faith. Well crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery: is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of Christ's love and compassion that drew you to Him as He welcomed you into His open arms.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your thoughts and feelings beautifully as you express your faith which shines in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Very nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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Review of Jehovah

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted free verse acrostic. Prayerful words of praise and adoration.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your faith and trust in the Lord beautifully in this piece. I relate to your prayer as a fellow believer and pray alongside you in this petition.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Stronger then I know

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and uplifting pep talk to yourself.
Well crafted rhyming poetry. Short, succinct
and concise.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are
well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good; perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in lines two through ten. Nice internal rhyme in line four (meek, speak).

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; your optimism in knowing that you
are strong and willing to prove it shines in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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Review of Blessing in Disguise

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. A good heartfelt write and message. Uplifting and encouraging. Flow: is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Rhyme: is good; near perfect masculine end line rhyme every second/fourth line in each stanza. Tone: lovely depth of feeling; your faith and trust in God shines in this piece. Word choice: is good as is the alliteration with nice assonance and consonance. Overall: well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.
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