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ShelleyA~15 years at WDC

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#3224093

Review of A Riddle Within

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and message. Heartfelt. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy and prefer.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express love beautifully through this riddle (of questions) that describe its essence.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3224084

Review of Dance With Me

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt and romantic. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye you paint this beautiful, intricate dance of love.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transitions and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; delightfully sensual, the heat of passion in this dance between lovers.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; with nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3224060

Review of A Rainbow

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write and message. Well crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'we must stretch to be a rainbow in the clouds' a very good comparision of how in times of trial we should be peace makers like a rainbow after a storm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; uplifting and encouraging message for those times when we go through troubles and things get emotional and we speak before we think.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3223931

Review of Voice of an Angel

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very nice write. Heartfelt and romantic. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are nicely done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your love for this special person in your life beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; strong use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3223444

Review of Embers of the Day

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write. A heartfelt poem about love that as faded. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry which I enjoy and prefer.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of love grown cold, like that of ashes whose embers are fading away.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice meter.

Metaphor or Simile:

Very nice simile: 'our love is cold and gray like embers of the day.' A very good comparison, fading love as the day fades away.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme. Perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express your feelings about the fire (passion) of love that has gone out, leaving embers behind that grow cold and die just a love will do without sustenance.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, good assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3223436

Review of For every rose

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and message. Heartfelt and thoughtful. Skillfully crafted free style metered rhyming poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the unique rhyme scheme: aba aba abca. Perfect dactylic and feminine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the beauty of a rose which signifies love and forgiveness to those who receive it.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3223424

Review of I Dream of Magic

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem. Whimsical.

Form/Style:

A good fantasy write. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye and imagination we see dragons and magic of the past and how magic has faded because of a darkness that has chained anything 'enchanted' through non-belief.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your sorrow of 'magic' fading with poignance as you hold on to your dreams of it.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, consonance and good assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3223187

Review of The ocean

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and presentation. Heartfelt. A skillfully crafted Whitney. Perfect 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of the ocean, how it soothes, strengthens and cleanses you until you are renewed.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor/Personification/Simile:

Nice simile: 'I glisten as the sea.' Very good personification of the ocean: 'the waves cradle me and gently rock back and forth'

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your love for the ocean beautifully in this piece. The comfort it gives you is consoling and supportive until you are ready to continue your journey on dry land. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3222933

Review of A stained Sherri

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write and dedicatory piece to your friend Sherri. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a beautiful picture of your friendship which we see through the lens of your eye and heart.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Lovely simile: 'you wash my tears like summer's rain' a very good comparison and descriptive.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion; you express your love for Sherri and hers for you beautifully in this poem. Her light shines brightly, 'blinding' your shadows. You are blessed to have such a good friend.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance. Elegantly written verse.

Overall:

Well penned and a most enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3222924

Review of ~Stolen Emotion

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write. A lament of love gone wrong and the sorrow it brings. Skillfully crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor: 'memories creep along forgotten flames' and 'your thirst perished, a deadened cloud of agony,' in regards to this ardor that is lost.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express hurt and pain of this betrayal of love that is no longer savored and brings you pain even thought you still love him. Poignantly passionate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned, write on.

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#3222576

Review of Moving On

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem; the closing of one chapter as you start a new one.

Form/Style:

A good write about the fond memories you have of your childhood home that has been sold. Introspective and heartfelt. Well crafted free verse.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express with poignance your feelings of sadness for this place which you hold dear; memories for you, of your Dad who once lived there who's now gone that makes you weep for what once was. I can relate.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, good assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned. Write on.

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#3222553

Review of Poppy Food

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about 'food' for the soul. Well crafted blank verse in iambic tetrameter.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of beauty that gives sustenance to the spirit, this visitor a poppy in bloom in springtime, a time of renewal.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter: 8 syllables per line throughout poem. Very nice rhythm.

Metaphor/Personification/Simile:

Nice personification of a poppy, 'standing tall, cyclopic black eye framed in red, stared in at me as if to say...'

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your joy of spring creatively and beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration and consonance with nice assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3222528

Review of Two Psalms

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write. Heartfelt words of praise and adoration. Skillfully crafted free verse that is short, concise and succinct.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid, powerful, loving and supportive picture of God who knows all our needs.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter: 2/4/4/4/4/4/4/2 - 2/4/4/4/4/4/4/2 and very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; your faith and trust in God shines in this piece. You express your conviction with passion.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition (in second psalm) for emphasis of what God does for you. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3222047

Review of The Gardening Life*

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

"This is an official Paper Doll Gang Poetry Review"

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good write about gardening and the joy of it. A skillfully crafted Lune String. Perfect 3/5/3 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You took me to this garden as we see through the lens of your eye, a gardener doing his work. I can almost smell the soil as you work and water it.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the bond you have with the land as you do your gardening, and even though it can be hard work, it's done with love.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of the process of gardening. Nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3221688

Review of Recovery

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write; heartfelt, concise and succinct. Soothing.

Imagery:

Imagery is nice as are the descriptives. You paint a picture of the healing quality of nature's winds that is calming to the spirit.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express the serenity one feels after being consoled by the gentle stroke of the wind that brings healing.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3221681

Review of Gloomy Country Road

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and presentation. Skillfully crafted Nove Otto. Perfect form and metered rhyme.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. Through the lens of your eye we see all that you see as you walk down this country path and in the distance the brewing of a storm as the leaves sway in the wind.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter and very nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: aacbbcddc. Perfect feminine and masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Nice depth of feeling; you express an eerieness as you walk the path in the darkness as you hear dogs bark and cries of bluejays.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3221662

Review of Peace

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A nice title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted Lune. Perfect 5/3/5 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of lightning, thunder and a soft rain and the scent of the earth in a cleansing renewal.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express wonder of the storm which starts in darkness but ends in light of restoration.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3221642

Review of Autumn

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write and presentation. Short, concise and succinct. Perfect 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a delightful picture of fall, the beauty of its color as created by God.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; your enjoyment of the season shines through in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good with nice alliteration, assonance and good consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3220838

Review of In Between Storms

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that fits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good heartfelt write of love, a bolster in the storms of life. A skillfully crafted free verse.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as is the descriptives. You paint a picture of love and the support of the one you love that helps to bring you through the storms of life.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Good meter: 8/7/8/7. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Deep expression of emotion. You express the love for this special person beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3220649

Review of Life is a dance

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good short write. Concise and succinct. A well crafted huitain, near perfect form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of the dance of life as we see it through the lens of your eye.

Flow/Rhythm:

Rhythm is good; line to line breaks are well done. Good meter (8 syllables per line) and very nice rhythm. Just a suggestion, a strategically placed comma at a natural pause and a period at the end of a thought (line 4 and 8) will make the flow and rhythm even better in my opinion.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice metaphor, 'life is a dance' very nice comparison.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme of this form: ababbcbc. Near perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed very well in this piece.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling. You express life as a dance that can go smoothly at times and difficult in the next... a dance that can be graceful in the flow of life.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3219945

Review of Doom of the Nightmare King

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good dark fantasy write. Short, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted quatrain, free style metered rhyming poetry.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Rhyme:

Rhyme is good as is the rhyme scheme: abcb. Second/fourth lines are perfect masculine end line rhyme that is executed with precision in this piece.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express the happiness of the death of the Nightmare King and that the years of fear and pain have finally ended and the memories will fade into the past.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, consonance with nice assonance.

Overall:

Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. Write on.

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#3219900

Review of Why Don't Vampire's P?

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title
A good title that suits the theme of your fantasy write/essay.

Structure
Your question is an interesting one and you express information about vampires and their 'living habits' well in this piece. I also enjoy the humor of the piece. You paint some funny pictures about food preferences and the results after 'eating.'

Language
Your narrative as you express your argument about whether vampires relieve themselves maintains a good flow and direction as do these questions that never seem to be answered in stories about vampires.

Character and Idea
The idea about vampires changing into bats has also been problematic as you express very well. I too have wondered about the clothing issue. This is something that I agree someone should write about to tie up the loose ends.

Other Points/Overall
Overall a good job. You have a good sense of humor that comes out well in this piece.
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#3219429

Review of Cinquiano on Horses

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write about horses. Short, concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted Cinquain. Perfect 2/4/6/8/2 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a lovely picture of the character of horses.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Tone:

Good depth of feeling; you express your love for horses and their beauty in motion.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, consonance with nice assonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3219413

Review of light

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A very good short write about light. Concise and succinct. A skillfully crafted Whitney. Perfect 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 form.

Imagery:

Imagery is good as are the descriptives. You paint a vivid picture of light, its gloominess in December and new light of renewal that comes in January, the precurser of spring.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Very nice rhythm.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; uplifting.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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#3219407

Review of Were I a poet

Review by ShelleyA~15 yea...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

General Disclaimer: This review reflects my opinion and is given with the intention of being constructive and encouraging. I hope you find this review helpful.

Title:

A good title that suits the theme of your poem.

Form/Style:

A good write, heartfelt. Nicely shaped form poetry. Well crafted.

Flow/Rhythm:

Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm.

Metaphor or Simile:

Nice simile, 'my pen would write words fluttering like butterflies' very nice descriptive and comparision.

Tone:

Lovely depth of feeling; you express your thoughts about being a poet beautifully in this piece.

Word Choice:

Word choice is good as is the alliteration, nice assonance and consonance.

Overall:

Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on.

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